Date: 06/30/12 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 3 Forget and…well
Sorry, but... well, this is kinda... well, boring. I mean, if they were actually getting somewhere, it'd be interesting, but they're not. They're staying in "wanting my twin is bad" mode, and not even considering that maybe, just maybe, it's not as bad as they think. There's no conflict here, you know? I mean... well, there sort of is, but it's entirely internal. It's less like two people fighting desire, and more like one person who somehow is in love with himself fighting the desire to be with himself. If that makes sense... Either way, there's no conflict here. The twins both agree completely with each other that they need to stop, and they're both accepting the situation as "we probably won't stop," at the same time. There's no... well, like I said, there's no conflict. Apart from that, the writing's not bad, Lucy-san =)
Date: 06/17/12 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
yummy-ish!
Date: 06/17/12 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 4 Sober, but still…
that was.. very hot
Date: 06/17/12 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 2 Just deny it
very very hot
Date: 06/17/12 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 Returning memory..
This is absolutly perfect, I loved this chappie and will definetly continue to read this!
Date: 05/10/12 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
HAHAHAHHAHA, cute ending. I liked this. I love your witty funny narration the most. TBH tho, I think it was a little early to be calling it "love" between them, bit rushed there. Oh, and THE TYPOS WERE KILLING ME. Other than that, very enjoyable fic. Great classic twincest I think, with a fantastic plot. Well done. :)
Date: 05/10/12 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 Just deny it
This is awesome.
(except for all the typos. *frown at thee*)
I can't wait to read the rest, but first I had to say that
>> “So… Denial?”
>> “Sounds pretty good to me.”
is like the best line in the whole wide world. HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAA!!
Date: 08/01/11 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY!
U SHOULD MAKE A SEQUEL FOR THIS!~
Date: 04/11/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
awww. That was soo great. The last line was wonderful.
Date: 03/19/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
hehe!:))
i know,the story was written itself:)
Date: 03/09/10 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
Holy effin sh..
Bill's dirty talk was uneffinbelievable. I am so sad this wasn't more graphic xD
Loved it nevertheless! XX
Date: 03/05/10 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1 Returning memory..
"I…do…not…*sniffs*…own…*cries*…Tokio Hotel…*sobs*"
I laughed so hard at that. Great story! :)
Date: 06/03/09 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
oh-more, more!
Date: 06/03/09 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 4 Sober, but still…
Getting hot in here.......
Date: 06/03/09 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 2 Just deny it
ah..O_O
Date: 06/03/09 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 Returning memory..
whoa....
Date: 02/28/09 08:49 am Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
Very hot and beautiful.....Sequel?? Pwease? LOL
Date: 02/07/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
I loved the ending. I thought they were drunk again and wouldn't remember but when I read that they both just had a little sip of Vodka each I was so happy. Perfect ending.
Date: 01/30/09 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
i loved it :d
Author's Response: thanksies ^^
Date: 11/14/08 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 5 Drunk on love
You're a genius! To lead me on thinking their drunk out of their minds, and then.... they're not! So great!
Author's Response: hihi, so happy you liked this one ,) and yes, I was trying to be clever ,p happy it worked out