Date: 10/04/08 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 29
Awww Tom!!! =[ at least Bills happy?
Date: 10/04/08 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
This is just too perfect to put in words. It evokes so many emotions.
Date: 10/04/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 29
tom's changed ^^
he's improving:)
Date: 10/04/08 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 29
Ugh... I'm not happy about those chapter notes Tink... I know you, and I have no doubt that you'll continue to torture us right up to the last minute! And thoroughly enjoy doing it! *sigh* lol
As for Tom... I feel for him now, although he does kind of deserve it; he's been an arse!
He obviously really loves Bill though, and wants him back, and it's good to see him sorting himself out.
I hope that Bill realises that it's Tom he really wants, and soon! lol. It seems to me like Bill's taking the easy option at the moment, falling back on something that he knows he can rely on instead of facing his problems.
Something tells me it's going to take a lot of persuasion and work from Tom for that to happen though...
Can't wait for more, and I'm loving the fast updates!!
Author's Response: Oh, my, you just gave me an idea ._.
Date: 10/04/08 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 29
awwwww ;__; I feel bad for Tom, but not at the same time ._. but I do... I'm glad he wants a fresh start ^^ makes fishie happieee
Date: 10/04/08 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG MY POOR BILL!!! *goes over and hugs him then beats the shit out of Tom*
Date: 10/04/08 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 28
RAAAAAAAWR!!!!! NEIN!!!!!! It's supposed to be Tomi und Billa not Steven... grrrrrr... oh well. I love it anyway.
Date: 10/04/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 28
*Cries out in pain and frustration* NOOOESSSS. Don't torture meeee!! I want Tomi and Bill back together, and you're gonna give it to me. NOW. Punkt.
Date: 10/04/08 08:38 am Title: Chapter 28
I think Bill is being selfish and immature, he too escaping his problems and not trying to solve it; he perfectly knows how and where to find Tom, and HE is his problem to solve right now - instead going to his ex boyfriend is just a way to have comfort and feel appreciated, which means being selfish :/ why not thinking of poor Tom? Or even being an adult, Mr Bill? :/ personally also, if I were Steven I'd have closed the door on Bill's face, after all it's him who turned Steven down some time before for Tom... I hope Bill will get his senses back and act well. And that you'll post soon again ;)
Date: 10/04/08 08:16 am Title: Chapter 27
D: then who Bill saw WAS indeed Tom... what the hell he must do something and catch up with Bill! DX
Date: 10/04/08 08:09 am Title: Chapter 26
I'd gladly see if he tried ;) it'd be good. Whoo, it's been a hell of a long time since the last time this was updated :O I guess it was about time Tom realized how he was behaving was stupid ._. I hope he makes up for it now...
Date: 10/04/08 08:02 am Title: Chapter 25
The only thing I found 'bad' about this chapter were the eventual too short sentences, for instance 'He slowed down.'. Apart from it, it was good ;) keeps the tension!
Date: 10/04/08 05:42 am Title: Chapter 28
xD torture indeed!
but Steven was good to him so...
I'll let it slip xD
Date: 10/04/08 05:15 am Title: Chapter 28
cant wait to read more!!!! please update soon!! -)
Date: 10/04/08 04:46 am Title: Chapter 28
Right, fuck you, no way, not a chance in hell. That was Tom who had his own place, that was Tom who kissed him, and that was Tom he got back together with.
SO NERR!
What the fuck is wrong with you! How could you, how can you!
You're messed in the head woman!
You are sick and twisted and mean and cold!
I still stick by what I said a few months back, even though Steven is nice, he needs to fall down a well, and Tom needs to put a fucking lid over it.
It's frustrating! I so thought you were being fluffy again, but oh no, that could never happen could it?
Never, not a fucking shitting bloody chance.
Steven better be nice though, or you will face my evil ninja wrath! Seriously, if he doesn't ooze fluff, more fluff than I ooze, me and you are going to have problems girl.
Not saying I know what them problems are going to be like, but just fear them.
I never noticed that you were writing this in present tense, well, last chapter I did, but I forgot to mention it. Usually I don't like it, but I've yet to find something of yours that I don't like.
I fucking love this, for the most part at least, whilst everything was ok with Tom n that.
You better be updating this regularly, I want the next 15 or so chapters gone in a day. THEN THERE CAN BE FLUFF:D XD FLUFF!
Date: 10/04/08 12:45 am Title: Chapter 28
You're torturing me too! How could you?!
Date: 10/04/08 12:39 am Title: Chapter 28
:O oh my god! Bill, get your ass back to Tomi, he needs you D:<
...xD
Date: 10/03/08 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 28
Noo. Bill and Tom are supost to be together!!! But.. the chapter was still good =P Cant wait for more!
Date: 10/03/08 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 28
ahhh X__x okay... I'll admit that Bill and Steven are very cute together and I like seeing Bill happy ^^ I just hope that Bill and Tom are just back to TALKING terms again soon lol. But I'm gonna say again XD I love this story, Tink!
Date: 10/03/08 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oh, gosh. You're killing me, you know that? *grr* They were sooo clooossseee!
*pouts* lol