Date: 03/20/08 04:02 am Title: Chapter 4
Yay! Another great 1234 words chapter! :D
If you could keep that up for the entire story, you're brilliant.
Okay, I already think you are. :P
Please continue soon!
Author's Response: ALL the chapters will have 1234 words, no matter what I have to do to achieve that ;)
Date: 03/19/08 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG! HOLY SHIT!OMG! I LVOE IT!! ITS S OPERFECT AND ASOME! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!UPDATE PLEASE AGAIN!! well tom ever find out baout his condtion? WIll Bills dad ever be cot? WIll chap 5 come anytime soon?!
Author's Response: Tom still doesn't know about Bill's sickness and Jorg has not yet been caught. And for all I know chapters 5 and 6 will be up later today or tonight ;)
Date: 03/19/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bill:'(
Love the story^^) It's so much drama and suffering,hehe^^)
(I know I'm wird:P)
Please keep up with the greate writing^^)
Love Liebetub
Author's Response: thanks ♥
Date: 03/19/08 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow that sounds perfect, please updaete soon!!
Author's Response: *bows* your wish is my command ^^
Date: 03/19/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
another chappie please!!!!
Author's Response: ...is being written as we speak.
Date: 03/19/08 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
Um... you might want to work on the blleding during the sex bit. Since he's a hemophiliac.
Author's Response: Well not even the hemophiliacs bleed to death from that. O.o at least I hope they don't xD
Date: 03/19/08 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
HOLY SHIT U R REALLY UNPREDICTABLE! I LOVE IT!!UPDAT SOON PLEASE!!!XD
Author's Response: Oh, yes, unpredictable is my middle name ^_~ how did you guess? xD
Date: 03/19/08 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
o.o can u say IRONY but i liked it it was a nice suprise!
Author's Response: Irony! rofl ;D
Date: 03/19/08 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
god damn it you really broke my heart... i'm gonna cry.. so sad & so horrible.. Jorg is jerk what da is he doin' 2 his lil baby.. & Toim why is he there. can't wait 4 another chapter
Author's Response: *gets to writing this moment* ;D
Date: 03/19/08 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
So... Steven doesn't know what is happening to Bill, but he still visits him when he's in the hospital? I'dd start wondering about some things if I were him.
And the amount of words each chapter... that's brilliant. :D
Author's Response: Oh he wonders ^_~ oh, someone noticed the number of words! *hugs you* Makeeeees Tiiiink happeeeeee! *goes writing another 1234 words for the story*
Date: 03/19/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is acctually well good
better than i thought it would be!
Author's Response: *pouts* you thought I'm baaaaaaaad? (xD thanks)
Date: 03/19/08 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Bill has a boyfriend? o.O.
Well, whatever. This chapter was sweet
Author's Response: Aye, Bill has a boyfriend! I love the idea of Bill having a boyfriend, no idea why O.o tnx *pets you*
Date: 03/19/08 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
God, I hate Jorg! I really do. But I kind of feel sorry for Tom, he's not completely heartless after all. Steven is very sweet.
I loved the last scene, and the thought that the two of them are drawn together. In however small a way. Can't wait for more ♥
Oh and lol at the number of words in each chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, finally someone notices! thanks, love ♥
Date: 03/19/08 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
was not seeing that coming o_O
i was like "woah!!"
Very good love, i hate Jorg, he needs a good beating!!
Author's Response: ah, he'll get his good beating soon enough ;)
Date: 03/19/08 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh, poor Billa! :*[
I love the story, please update soon!
Author's Response: rofl, just did that ;)
Date: 03/19/08 04:41 am Title: Chapter 2
god damn it.. i'm almost crying. this is so fuckin unfair... i hate Tom & Jorg. they're stupid assholes. how could they trat Bill like a piece of shit. he diserves a better life... plz tell me that Tom finally will b eith Bill & save him from this fuckin' treatment.. i can't believe they so this shit to him... ma lil' angel
Author's Response: aye, they're mean! they'll be punished for that, don't worry ^_~
Date: 03/19/08 03:02 am Title: Chapter 2
I love it ;)
And is Steven Bill's boyfriend or not? And do they go in the same school?
Author's Response: I think it's time for me to retire now *shakes head* I can't believe how many things I'm making unclear! *slaps self* I'll make sure to clarify that in the next chappie ;)
Date: 03/19/08 02:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my god, poor Bill! It's really good, please write more.
Author's Response: Poor poor Bill! You have no idea... *shakes head*
Date: 03/19/08 12:49 am Title: Chapter 2
This chapter was sad but well written! I like this story alot and I'm hoping to read more of it soon. So, update as soon as possible! :)
Author's Response: thanks :) i'll update today, just for you ^_~
Date: 03/18/08 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
:D
Author's Response: ^_^