Date: 03/21/08 05:52 am Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bill:'(
I hope Tom will reache Bill before he dies... No that was not what I wanted... I DON'T WANT BILL TO DIE AT ALL!!!!!!!!!
Please save him^^)
Loved the chapter hunny^^
Keep up with your greate writing^^)
Love your Liebetub
Author's Response: I want Bill to die, though :D No, just kidding, don't worry ;)
Date: 03/21/08 05:51 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh gosh. So troubled, so small, so lovely, so lonely. I love how you put first Bill's things and then Tom's, as if they're happening at the same time, and the last scene was very meaningful I think; is Tom doing that so he can remember who he used to be, and Bill doing that so he can hope one day Tom will accept him? I think so.
Author's Response: I don't why they're doing it... *shakes head and smiles playfully*
Date: 03/21/08 05:51 am Title: Chapter 6
tnnz honey... you really makes me feel, no matter what, but it means i'm alive... just can't believe that Tom cares about Billy... this is so strange. he hates him & but can't live without him. this is the real life... damn it, honey luv ya
PLZ save Billy & let them b 2gether
Author's Response: *bows* You're my queens, I'm just a servent ;) Thanks ♥
Date: 03/21/08 05:42 am Title: Chapter 6
At least you didn't do what I did once, which was confuse the words organism and orgasm in a science test... Lol!!! Thank god I spotted it before I submitted it!
Author's Response: ROFLROFLROFL oragnism and orgasm xDDD
Date: 03/21/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 2
This boy is way too unlucky o.o I can't believe life could be this mean with someone; not only being that sick, but also being abused and bullied. Wow. And yeah, it seems like you've entered in bullies' minds, because they really think that way; my dear lord you write so well *รง*
Author's Response: *blushes* thanks :D
Date: 03/21/08 05:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Far too interesting, my deepest compliments Pixie :) very well written, and the emotions are very well described.
Author's Response: *bows* Hi, my dearest Banner Queen! And thanks for all the compliments *kisses feet*
Date: 03/21/08 05:29 am Title: Chapter 6
tnnz honey... you really makes me feel, no matter what, but it means i'm alive... just can't believe that Tom cares about Billy... this is so strange. he hates him & but can't live without him. this is the real life... damn it, honey luv ya
PLZ save Billy & let them b 2gether
Author's Response: Love you, too ♥
Date: 03/21/08 05:10 am Title: Chapter 6
Nooes! Not Bill! lol, awesome x
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 03/21/08 04:32 am Title: Chapter 6
Oooh, Tom knows... Can't wait to find out what happens next... He's going to feel so bad when he realises whats been happening to Bill I think.
I really do think Tom likes Bill a lot more than he thinks he does. The fact that he sacrificed eating to go see him in the hospital says a lot. I liked the hospital room number btw, couldn't have been anything else really!!
More soon please! I'm getting addicted to this story ^_^
(I did spot a mistake, but I see Razzle's already pointed it out so I won't keep going on about it^^)
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry 'bout the mistake, I was doing my homework at the same time as I was writing the story... I'm fixing it now (I had to go to school eralier). Thanks :D
Date: 03/21/08 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi Tink! You've used the word organism a couple of times in the most recent chapter. I think you mean either his system is becoming used to it or his organs. Bill doesn't have an organism. :)
Author's Response: *facepalm* idiot! thanks ;)
Date: 03/21/08 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Getting worse... do you want me to die?
you said you swear x__x
*sigh* okay I'll see. promise!
I'm waiting for the next chapter b29;
plz update soooon., you're a good writer.
Author's Response: I do swear he is one of the strongest persons you'll ever read about, I just need time to reach that point ^_~ And thanks :D
Date: 03/20/08 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
aaaaaaaaaw
Author's Response: :D
Date: 03/20/08 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oooh, you better not be planning to kill Bill Tink! I really want to know what the test results are... I really like the twist with Bill's haemophilia.
I think Tom might be developing feelings for Bill, he just hasn't realised it yet...
More soon please love... ♥
Author's Response: ?For once, I'm planning on keeping everyone alive xD
Date: 03/20/08 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
damn i'm crying again. so sad & dramatic... i hate Jorg... i hope he'll stop treating Bill like a useless peace of shit... thanx a lot
Author's Response: Jorg would so be the one to die if I had only out the Character Death warning... *shakes head* thanks, love ♥
Date: 03/20/08 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
OH NO BILL!! Omg, i'm in love with a STORY!!XD, i don;t know what's i do without u!!!This story makes my day!!XD I scream every time i see it's been updated!!XD
Author's Response: That means you scream twice a day? That makes ME happy ;)
Date: 03/20/08 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
poor Tom, poor Bill...T___T
I really feel sorry for Tomi and..
I wanna hug Bill tight, he's so fragile.
Author's Response: No, Bill is strong and brave! I'll make you see that, I swear ;)
Date: 03/20/08 07:39 am Title: Chapter 4
oh poor Bill :(
but i like it, please continue
Author's Response: *bows* as you wish ;)
Date: 03/20/08 07:13 am Title: Chapter 4
OMFG.....
Poor Bill.....
What's wrong with Tom anyway....one time he what's to hit Bill and next time he goes to his house in the middle of the night........
Sorry the bad english...i'm from portugal
Author's Response: No worries about the English, it isn't my native language either ;) And Tom is a very complicated person D:
Date: 03/20/08 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1
i didnt mean I thought it would be bad, just not what I expected
Author's Response: unpredictable is my middle name ^_~
Date: 03/20/08 05:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Ohh, poor Bill! I really liked the scene with him and Tom, their relationship is so complicated. I really hope Jorg gets caught... And I'm interested in finding out how Tom will react once he learns about Bill's condition.
I can't wait for more Tink ^_^
Author's Response: You won't wait for long ^_~