Date: 03/23/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
I loved this chapter Tink. It was really good, all of Tom's emotions an thoughts were decribed so well. That last line was a killer.
And for the record; I personally don't think that any of the chapters of this story have been rushed at all. The way you've written it - jumping from scene to scene adds dramatic affect. I atually really like your style of writing in general and the way you've written this ^_^
*Loves Tink* ♥
Author's Response: *blushes impossibly a lot* Oh, thank you, you're the love of mt life! xD *blushes more* I told them, you know, about the fact that this is just how I'm writing this story, not the whole event but just extracts of it, but I decided to this and show them that this is NOT rushed! *rereads the review* *melts and becomes a blushing mush on the floor* Thank you! *worships you*
Date: 03/23/08 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
He didn't kill him, right?! Gosh!! He couldn't kill him!!! Oh no no no no no!! I won't let him! He's gona be fine...right? Update again as soon as you can! :)
Author's Response: I don't know! God, Tom is such a complex person to write in this! I'm updating at this very moment ;)
Date: 03/23/08 10:55 am Title: Chapter 8
OH GOD! You fucking did it -sniff-. You made me cry!! XD omfg. That wasn't the last chapter, right? RIGHT? 0.0
Author's Response: lol, nope, i've just started xD
Date: 03/23/08 10:03 am Title: Chapter 8
omg. that was rash and stupid of Tom. -.-
AHHHHHHHHH i hope Bill's still alive in the next chapter. poor thing.:(
great story! please update soon! :D
Author's Response: Oh, for the love of God, finally someone who gets that Tom's actions were rash and stupid and that it wasn't me fucking speeding the story! Oh, lord, I love you right now xD
Date: 03/23/08 06:49 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG why Tom do that to Bill? this is killing me!!
and i hope you will write more
Author's Response: Ah, Tom is such a comlex person, isn't he? lol, I'll explain it all, don't worry, love ;)
Date: 03/23/08 05:01 am Title: Chapter 8
Tom why did you do that ..-
Bill , really brave person, but still so fragile.. I've seen Bill's bleeding so many times..fucking illness, cruel beating, and ....Jorg that bastard makes him more weak! The aftermath of rape is very painful although It can be hidden from the others. I hope BIll finds his happiness, both Bill and Tom feel each other as a lover. heeee I know you'll do it .
Anyway I totally love it b29; I love how you described their feelings. update soon!(to be honest, I think I don't have to say this, cos you're writing rapidly XD thank youuuu.you made my day;D )
Author's Response: Hihihi, no need to ask for an update, it's on the way ;) Thanks, hun :D
Date: 03/23/08 04:31 am Title: Chapter 8
NOOOOOOOO!!!! *cries* GO ON!!! TOM, YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!!!!!!±!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Lol, I love this review :D
Date: 03/23/08 02:38 am Title: Chapter 8
That was so sad... I hope you get a chance to update soon! I want to figure out how Tom is getting out of this one, and how he's gonna save Bill!
Author's Response: Ah, update is, as ever, coming today ;)
Date: 03/22/08 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
wow why is Tom so angry at Bill?
Author's Response: he believes Bill betrayd him and turned his back on him because he didn't answer the calls for the night talk; it'll be better explain in the chapter 9
Date: 03/22/08 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
really good story. actually made me cry, brought back so many bad memories :( but umm...good job.
Author's Response: *bows* thank you, I do my best!
Date: 03/22/08 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
I told you not to kill Bill, so I really hope you don't, cause then I will cry as hell!! Cause I just know that Tom and Bill are going to fall in love^^)
BTW: What are Tom going to do know?? I really want to know, so please write another one soon^^)
Love your Liebetub
Author's Response: Ah, unfortunately I can't kill Bill D: So, no, he's not gonna die. I think ^_~
Date: 03/22/08 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
ITS NTO POSSIABLE FOR U TO KILL THIS STORY BECAUSE UR SUCH AN AWSOME TYPER!!I LVOE IT SO MCUH!!ITS PERFECT!!!Bill told, right? He told it was his dad? Is tom ever gonna know?
Author's Response: ohhh *blushes* Thanks :) *runs to write more*
Date: 03/22/08 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
OHNO. BILL CANT DIE. -angst-
I thought Tom was gonna save him!
*enveloped in sadness*
Author's Response: I thought Tom was, too. But then again, Tom is a bit complicated, lol
Date: 03/22/08 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
THIS IS INTENSE. D:
I'm actually totally on edge right now. Aaaand...waiting for an update when it comes out. ;D [/subliminalmessage]
Awesome job~
Author's Response: The update is on the way, as it is every day [God, rhymes D:]
Date: 03/22/08 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
fuck. god damn it, what da hell is he doin? i hate Tom.... he just don't understand he's killing ma lil baby.. i wanna see kisses & hugs
Author's Response: kisses and hugs? i'm not writing a fluff, am i? xD
Date: 03/22/08 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
it's gd but it is a bit rushed in some places x
Author's Response: it's not rushed, for crying out loud! DD: the style is not to follow one thing from the beginning to the end, but to only have extracts as detailed as possible, jeez.
Date: 03/22/08 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
OH MY GOD NOOOOOOOOO!!! D:
Tom, you... WTF DID YOU DO THAT TOM!
MOOREEE!!!
*big puppy eyes*
*gives cookie*
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
Author's Response: sorry, this is a dead end D: *takes the cookie anyway* thanks ;)
Date: 03/22/08 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
constructive critisism ? [I can't spell]: It got moved on a tad too quick, but other than that this is incredible !
Author's Response: nope, you can't spell xD
Date: 03/22/08 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
No no no. You didn't kill the story and you must finish it! You can't leave it there...
Poor, poor Bill. I can't believe that Tom did that, just as I was getting to like him. He's an idiot! Update soon please Tink!
Author's Response: I can't, that's the point! This chapter has me in a dead end D:
Date: 03/22/08 11:19 am Title: Chapter 7
haha finally someone got Jorg, not Tom, i hope he will send to jail
and please post more
Author's Response: They need Bill to say it before they can arrest him, though. Think he can do that?