Date: 03/26/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
What do Tom mean about that he did kill Bill???
I really want to know!!!!
Please keep up with your greate writing hunny^^)
Love your Liebetub
Author's Response: Well, he did kill Bill, in more ways than one... ;)
Date: 03/26/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
More? More? Then post it!! O.O arghhh I want them to talkkk! Why is Bill fucking pushing him away all the time, even if he wants him - and wants to find the other side of him? In this way he'll never do that D: soon soon soon :Q___ FAVOURITES.
Author's Response: *honored* Thank you :D But see this, Bill is just as confused as Tom, they need to push each other away a little more ;)
Date: 03/26/08 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
URGHHH what happpeennsss!! arrgghh i want to readd moree!! xx
Author's Response: You will, don't worry ;)
Date: 03/26/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ohmigosh! I was reviewer 100! I didn't realize x)
Well, great chapter! *can't wait for more*
This are my drugs x)
Author's Response: *bows* Thank you :D
Date: 03/26/08 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
i cant wait for more! its so lovely... im dying for more.
thank you.
x
Author's Response: Oh, thank YOU :D
Date: 03/26/08 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
god... please i'm almost in shock .. so sweet. maby they're ready for lil kiss. i can't wait 4 their connection.... and fuck i want them to fuck
Author's Response: They will, they will, patience, plz :D
Date: 03/26/08 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ohhh.... Tom's in love! You have to update soon Tink, you can't leave me hanging like this, it's mean^^
Author's Response: I'm mean! *evil smirk*
Date: 03/26/08 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
omg wow i never noticed them all having 1234 words!
thats proper amused me
thought anymore to toms love healing all?
:)
Author's Response: Hm, I'm not gonna tell you, it's not going to be interesting then ;)
Date: 03/26/08 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 10
Go on, go on, GO ON!!!!
Ahhh, I'm dying here! It's so great!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 03/25/08 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
D-die? O.O no, no, you can't do this, you can't make him die! You have to save him... please... and Tom was so sweet, so troubled inside, unable to make up his mind, unable to choose whether to hate Bill or not... just amazing. Oh dear please go on so so soon :'(
Author's Response: Thank you :D I'll try and write more today ;)
Date: 03/25/08 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh gosh, Tom what have you done... he was feeling betrayed and angry? But D: oh gosh, rescue him please...
Author's Response: He's kinda complicated, he hates everyone who turns their back on him. He doesn't think too much, either, lol.
Date: 03/25/08 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 9
Please, please, please tell me Bill is not going to die.....because if he dies i'm going in the fic and kill Jorg and Tom( okay maybe i wont kill tom because he can see now what he has done)..... hehe....
Author's Response: Go, girl! Kill 'em all! xD
Date: 03/24/08 09:07 am Title: Chapter 9
*squeals* ooh, fast update!
i really really REALLY like this chapter. :D like i know Bill's still dying and all, which i hope doesn't really happen ;), but at least Tom has his new-found feelings for him! it's really sweet. and Bill's reciprocating! AWWW. :D
but i just remembered that Bill has a boyfriend. damn. but there's always a way, right? ;D
hehe. great job on this. more when you can!!!
Author's Response: There always is a way, love ;) More on the way tonight :D
Date: 03/24/08 07:02 am Title: Chapter 9
i am so happy that you pay attention to us *grin*
and don't Bill already have Steve? but of course i want him with Tom:P
i really love it
Author's Response: I believe my reviewers deserve all of my attention, I'm not writing for myself, I'm writing for the readers ;D Yaycks *facepalm* Forgot about Steven D: I'll think of something *shrugs* Thanks for reminding me! ♥
Date: 03/24/08 06:47 am Title: Chapter 9
I was just about to read this last night, and then my internet stopped working for some reason. My mom still wonders why I got so mad XD
And I totally love it, it's not rushed at all.
Please continue soon? Very soon? :P
Author's Response: My PC crashed last night and freaked and kicked its butt! Then, this morning, I came here and I had, like, 20 unresponded reviews [all of my reviews have to be responded]! So now I've just spent 15 minutes responding xD And thank you! :D
Date: 03/24/08 06:28 am Title: Chapter 9
You surely pay attention to your reviewers! and I appreciate it! I don't know why would someone say it's rushed, 'cause I think it's everything else but rushed! Amazing work! More of this, please? :)
Author's Response: My reviewers are nice, they deserve my attention ♥
Date: 03/24/08 04:06 am Title: Chapter 9
DON'T LET BILL DIE!!! DON'T!!!! *cries*
Author's Response: *wipes tears* I won't, don't worry ;)
Date: 03/24/08 03:45 am Title: Chapter 9
Really good, seriously! No, I don't think the whole story is rushed, chapter 8 moved a little too quickly. That's all I meant. Sorry if you took that awkwardly. :/
Author's Response: I don't mind people having their opinion, but most of the readers just don't get that the story is MEANT to be written like this, meant to be fast and dynamic. If I had everything detailed out, it would be too painful. Thank you :)
Date: 03/24/08 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Not sure about the rushing, but I was reading the story from chapter 4 'til this one, and I think that perhaps, there was some 'jumping' or abrupt twists that may benefit from more explanation.
Interesting storyline, though.
Author's Response: Ok, I'm seriously gonna kill either myself or the next person who says that. The idea of the story and the style it's written in is not to have explanations, not follow one event from beginning to the end, but to have a bunch of short, detailed extracts from the things that happen, which make the story more "moving" and easier to read. For had I made it slower and explained everything, you'd stop reading at Chapter 3 for it would get way too painful.
Date: 03/23/08 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
Bills been waiting for Toms touch?
Author's Response: You're full of questions, aren't you?