Date: 04/01/08 03:49 am Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
Go on, go on, GO ON!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 03/31/08 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
wow good chapter. I hope Bill comes to his senses and puts Jorg away and not Tom
Author's Response: Does Bill have his senses, though? xD
Date: 03/31/08 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
I really hope Bill tells the cops about his father and gets Tom out of jail. He needs to be out so him and Bill can be together! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, he does ;)
Date: 03/31/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
I love it. But I really really want to read more. Post soon, Please.
Author's Response: I'm doing my best to post every day or every second day ;)
Date: 03/31/08 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
Aww Tink... *Melts from your comments* I love you too honey ♥
Wow... This was really good. I can't wait to see Jorg get what's coming to him, I hate him so much. Post more soon Tink, I'm in love with this story ^_^
Author's Response: Aw, I like making you melt ^_~
Date: 03/31/08 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
*sqeel* OMG!!!!!!!DUDE!!I"M IN LVOE WIH A STORY!!!!!!!OMG!!LOVE UPDATE PLEASE SOON!!!XD
Author's Response: :D
Date: 03/31/08 09:45 am Title: Chapter 12
Ah! I'm in love with this ff
Post more asap!
Author's Response: Sure thing, love ;)
Date: 03/30/08 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg... What happens next?!?! Update, please? ^^
Author's Response: As you wish :)
Date: 03/30/08 08:50 am Title: Chapter 12
i hope Tom will get out from jail soon, and i am so happy they kiss :D
please go on
Author's Response: ...aaaaaaaaaaaaand everyone thinks the kiss is a big deal........ It might be........ Or not.......
Date: 03/30/08 07:03 am Title: Chapter 12
Jeeej!!!!! Kiss!!!!
Go on!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 03/30/08 06:20 am Title: Chapter 12
sweet ending ! Hope Tom doesn't get accused of rape after that o.O
Author's Response: Hope is what dies the last ^_~
Date: 03/30/08 05:46 am Title: Chapter 12
Oooh, they kissed! Wow, I knew Tom was in love with him... I can't wait to find out what happens next and how Bill's going to react about it. I hope Bill tells the truth, his father is a bastard! I feel sorry for Steven, he obviously loves Bill, I hope he doesn't get hurt too badly. Update soon Tink ^_^
Author's Response: Someone said Steven should fall down the well... I'm starting to think about that xD
Date: 03/30/08 05:00 am Title: Chapter 12
Goodness, you make this so sad, ya know? Hopefully they will still end up together and his father would just go to hell! :D
Great chapter. Update soon again! :)
Author's Response: I tend to get all nasty and violent on my characters *smirks* No, seriously, they'll end up together forever and shit... Maybe.
Date: 03/30/08 12:21 am Title: Chapter 12
O...my....fucking....gosh.... I love this story so much. If you stop writing this I might die with it.
its really sweet and sad and depressing but in a really beautiful way.
At first when I started reading it I thought it was going to be completely clique and maybe the plot is a little bit but the way you depict everything changes it from clique to original.
You said that this chapter was written at night, it doesnt show lmao. Please please keep writing this, I beg you and, like Tom, I dont beg.
Author's Response: Aye, the plot is a complete cliche, but I couldn't get this out of my head. And thank you, a lot :D
Date: 03/29/08 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
I really like this story. I've thought about it quite a bit since I started reading it, and usually stories don't catch my attention that much, so I know this one is good. I'm surprised people feel that it's rushed - it's never seemed that way to me. I think that's it's excellent, and the fact that you are able to put up new chapters every few days makes it even better!
I'm curious to find out whether Bill will decide to lie and say it was Tom, or not. I like that you wrote Tom realizing how it feels to be beat up and his self-comparasion with his own situation and Bill's. It was a good show of character growth.
I thought I had reviewed this story before, but I must have forgotten to. However, I love it and I'll definitely be doing more reviews for this story!
Author's Response: Ooooh *blushes* Why, thank you :D
Date: 03/29/08 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMG!! WHAT ABOUT STEVE!?!?! OMGQ!!!ASOME!!LOVE IT!!*rolls ong floor* GGGRRREEAATTT!!XD XD XD XD
Author's Response: :D
Date: 03/29/08 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
eeep keep goingg!! i know it seems like we're rushing you but this is a fab story and i'm totally addicted! :D xx
Author's Response: *blushes*
Date: 03/29/08 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
WHOA!!! so didnt expect that from Tom.
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 03/29/08 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
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Date: 03/29/08 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
THEY KISSED!! YEAH!!!!^^D
Oh no, what's Steven going to say if he steps into the room now???
I want to know what happends next hunny, so please write another one soon^^)
As always I totally LOVE your writing^^D
Can't wait for the next chapter^^)
Love your friend Liebetub
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you :D