Date: 10/08/08 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 34
You are fucking evil!! And you know it! You really had me fooled then... I should know better by now! You mean, mean, mean person you! *glares*
I just... I'm speechless now! The fluff was so lovely and... Ugh, I might have known that was too easy *sighs*
Now see, you can write fluff! Lovely fluff! Now do it for real next time! lol
Date: 10/08/08 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 34
Oh my fucking god! What the hell is wrong with you!
I was like, ohh, fluff, makes a completely shite day good, but ohh fucking no, you have to go and be mean.
I never understood the last paragraph, I was too happy from the fluff to finnish, and excited to leave a review.
So I wrote one, and then asked Emma why she was trying to kill you, I FUCKING FOUND OUT DIDN'T I!!
Now there isn't just Emma after you, there's me too, and Ima mess you up! I'll go fuicking ghetto on your arse! Or I may even take the computer you uise to speak with and bludgen you to death with it!
WHYY CAN'T YOU BE NORMAL!!!
The fluff was fucking amazing though, more than amazing, I was like *o* (I love that)
BALLS TO A FUCKING DECENT REVIEW
Date: 10/08/08 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 33
Nuuu, I like Steven xD I mean, Tomis my favorite but Steven didnt do anything wrong D:
Update soon! ^^
Date: 10/08/08 11:05 am Title: Chapter 33
YEEEEEY! ONE MORE CHAPPIE ONE MORE CHAPPIE!!! 8D -dancing- You made me happy now :D
Please update soon!
Date: 10/07/08 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 33
LOVEEEE IT!!!! ^,,^ AMAZING!!
Date: 10/07/08 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 33
xD so more sex is coming up!
lol!
Damien seems nothing, but trouble...
Date: 10/07/08 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 33
Wow, lucky Damien! lol. And well, if I can't have Tom/Bill smex, then I guess femmeslash is the next best thing! ;)
Hmm, I wonder what Damien has in store for Steven though... He may annoy me, in that he's in the way of T/B, but I don't want anything bad to happen to him... Unless it's being chucked down a well that is! ;P lol.
Oh, and now Andreas, too... Nice twist. This is all getting so intriguing! :) *hugs*
Date: 10/07/08 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 33
Everyone is going to think I'm fucking messed up!
I NEVER ASKED FOR RAPE!!!!
NOT EVEN SLIGHTLY, I ASKED FOR THE OPPISITE, I THINK.
OH YEAH, THE WELL!!!!! :D
Seeing as I know you're gonna do it, can it be Andreas who rapes him? Since that'd be hot, well not hot, but, you know me, a love me Andi.
And Andi raping Bill is so much hotter than him being raped by a manky sweaty dirty twat.
You don't know how much I've wanted to put html in here.
Is Damian gonna put shithead down the well? ooo twist! *o*
My html worked there! (tng)
I hate Bill's mother, can she go under a train? Or something?
I love deaths of characters that I hate.
They're so much fun.
Author's Response: You ARE messed up
Date: 10/07/08 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 32
...I hate it when the "next" button suddenly is gone -_-*
I serched and serched, but I couldn't find it ;_;
Please update soon! :*
(Sorry for my terrible english .__.
And, just so you know, I haven't reviewed befor because I started to read like.. yestarday XD)
Author's Response: Lmao! Love that - Next button suddenly gone! xDDD And your English isn't terrible ;) I'm not a native speaker either ^-^
Date: 10/07/08 09:29 am Title: Chapter 32
Scratch that, I just saw that the boy from the party is Damien XD me and my sillyness! Sorry for not being careful :P but you updaaate X3
Date: 10/07/08 09:27 am Title: Chapter 32
Once a day is still enough X3 and yeah, Steven... ain't Tom, that's the problem with him! XD honestly it's not like he's a bad kid, not at all... but he's just like an intruder in my mind, the obstacle between Bill and Tom, but I'm sure he will be batted away easily when Tom gets back in ;) you know, Bill's mom's absence is felt a bit too much now though :/ if I were you, I'd add a part of her talking to Bill and why he's never going to his house again... mh? Oh and about Tom, before I forget; you asked for ideas, didn't you? I don't know if I said this already, but I was thinking... since Tom wants to change, his chance to get Bill back could be by helping someone? Like, one kid fall from the skate? TOm helps him up, and Bill 'accidentally' sees the scene, they lock gazes and then you go on ;) something soft like that, I was personally thinking. I hope that you'll make them meet anyway though X3 Tom must have his chance! Btw, I had no idea who the 'boy' who opened the door was, but I hope it wasn't Tom, for he wouldn't have changed if he still behaved like that :/ I'm so curious! X3 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
Author's Response: Yeah, along with Tom's dad's absence, lmao. I have a chapter entire for them! xD I need to make up fillers and stuff, I still have 20 chapters more to go xD
Date: 10/06/08 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 32
cant wait to read the next!!
Date: 10/06/08 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 32
ohhh Whats Steven gonna say to Tom? Cant wait! =)
Date: 10/06/08 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 32
O___________O *le gasp*
Date: 10/06/08 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 32
*grins* You're too sweet^^
I had a feeling he'd look for Tom^^, but who opened the door? Georg?
And thanks for updating so often:)
It's okay to keep it with one. Schools important (Says me who isn't even in school xD), but Ja you get the point!
Date: 10/06/08 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 32
Ugh!! Fucking word count! Yeah, I second that! *pouts* You can't end it there... :( lol
Anyway... You bloody tease! Those lines you showed me were nothing like I expected them to be! Mean! I thought there was gonna be smut! :( Even if it was gonna be Bill/Steven... I'll say it again, mean! lol
Ugh, I really can't wait to see what happens next and what Steven will say if he finds Tom... Loved it as ever! *hugs*
Author's Response: Lmao, what's with everybody wanting smex?! You'll get your smexxxx... Femmeslash smex! ;DDD
Date: 10/06/08 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 32
Seriously, Tink, you need some variation of the well thing if you refuse to do it.
What was it you said? Everyone voted for the well, bar one?
Hmmn, interesting... GET RID OF THEE FUCKING CUNT!
Everyone wants it, just you refuse to acknowledge that.
I can't even see properly I'm so tired, and the doctor I went to today said I shouldn't be on the computer too much.
But I've waited, yearned even, for this, just because of your fucking teases.
YOU SAID THERE WAS GOING TO BE SEX! Sick, fucking wrong sex, but sex none the less.
Personally, I want Tom/Bill sex, but I know you wont do that, but I think somewhere, in some messed up area of my mind, I wanted some sex.
Still hate the slag-head though.
And, you said topping Bill, now, I know I've already went mad with you over this, but COME ON FOR FUCKS SAKE, IT'S NOT EVEN HOT! *bork* That was just in case you decide to do that, I had to get my point across...again.
Love you Tink.
Author's Response: Lmao, you want smex? Smex it is ;P
Date: 10/06/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 31
I got a lot of reading to do :-p But I loved it =f hope you keep posting like this.
I feel sorry for them.
I want them happy of course :-p
You go on ^^
Date: 10/06/08 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 30
:O THIS IS THE TWIST I WAS WAITING FOR! Awesome, finally those people faced the truth, and I'm glad they did; Bill finally admitted IT to himself, Steven realized the truth, and Tom... Tom I still feel sorry for :( Bill get the fuck to him!
Date: 10/06/08 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 29
D: nooo Tomi! I HATE STEVEN!! It's not like he himself did something, but Bill was too weak and run off to him, that disappoints me much :/ not only because he's been immature when he judged Tom for being like that, but also because, when (I'm using 'when', not 'if') he's be back with Tom he'll make Steven suffer again :/ he's pretty selfish at times, even though he knows how it feels like to suffer. I feel sorry for Tom, and I hope his new start will be good for him- maybe he meets new friends, or really changes :)
Btw, THANK YOU for the dedication (L) ...lick? *shy grin*