Date: 04/01/08 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
NEIN!! WHY'D YOU STOP!?!?! Man... I hate cliffys... well I can't wait for the next chapter!! PLEASE if you get a chance, update soon! This story is SOOO freaking awesome!!! I can't wait to read more of it!! This is one of the best stories I've ever read!
Author's Response: Cliffies! My favorite thing to write :D
Date: 04/01/08 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
ok I know Bill doesnt want to tell the truth but how will Jorg hurt him if he does. Wont the police arrest him or hold him in custody until they find evidence?
Author's Response: Arresting someone is just a beginning; there is the trail that could be lost and besides, most people get a chance to stay at home until they are prosecuted and found guilty when they're sent to prison. This leaves Jorg with enough time to not only rape Bill but, given Bill's health issues, also unintentionally kill him.
Date: 04/01/08 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
omg! iv just read all the chapters tonight, it was amazing! you are truly an amazing writer...ok here is my kill list...1.JORG!! 2.Damien 3. Anthony.
10/10...i wish i could rate more :(
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you! *takes a shotgun and gets ready for killing*
Date: 04/01/08 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
Get him to rat out his dad! He can't hurt him if he's in prison. And is Steve suposed to be such a jerk? He seemed ok at first, I' mean obviously I wanted to make him go away, but I didn't dislike him. Now he's... annoying? Creepy? IDK.
Author's Response: Oh, what's wrong with Steven? *kinda confuzzled*
Date: 04/01/08 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
Are Bill going to tell them that it was his father that raped him, or is he going to blame it all on Tom??
I really want to know the answere, so I'm BEGGING YOU, to update as soon as possible!!!^^D
*begins to begg on my knees*
TOTALLY LOVED the chapter hunny!!^^D
Please keep up with your greate writing^^)
Love your Liebetub
Author's Response: *raises you from your knees and cleans your clothes* No need for begging, love :D
Date: 04/01/08 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oooh, I was your 200th reviewer Tink... Do I get a prize..? ^_~
Author's Response: Hm... What do you think?
Date: 04/01/08 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
DON'T MAKE HIM SAY IT'S TOM!!!!! YOU CAN'T DO THAT!!!!!!! SEND FREAKING JORG TO PRISON!!!! OR I'LL HATE YOU!! WELL I WON'T HATE YOU BUT I WOULD REALLY LOVE YOU IF BILL DIDN'T SAID IT WAS TOM...PRETTY PLEASE?
Author's Response: Hate me? Aw, really? I can't have that, no. I guess I have to write... or not.... or maybe say that.... no, no, that's no good..... maybe.... Nope, I'm not gonna tell you anything xD
Date: 04/01/08 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
This is so good... More soon! It was nice, seeing the kinder side of Tom. I hope he won't be in prison for much longer. I really hope Bill has the courage to tell them the truth...
Author's Response: Oh, well... We'll see ^_~
Date: 04/01/08 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh gosh, oh gosh don't leave us hanging like this! I'm gonna go insane if I don't knowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! And finally the true Tom came in surface :) it's much better than the other one, he just needed to be showed some love :D go on go on! Ps. I noticed a few mistakes which kill this awesome chapter, you ought to reread your paper the next time maybe ;)
Author's Response: I can NEVER read my own stuff before I post it. Sometimes I'll do it when it's up but never before it. I hope the mistakes weren't THAT bad *sulks a little*
Date: 04/01/08 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh god. I REALLY REALLY REALLY hope Bill tells the truth. Like I said, he and Tom should be together and happy! :D
Haha. I'm retarded. Oh well, I love this and that's all that matters :)
Author's Response: You're funny. And cute *giggles* Lol, thanks :D
Date: 04/01/08 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh God, please just let him say it was his dad, I don't think I can live knowing Bill is going to be raped again. :(
*Keeps telling herself it's only a story*
Continue please? :D
Author's Response: *makes Bill say....... something*
Date: 04/01/08 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
SA&YYYYYY IT BILLLLAAAA SAAAY IIITT WAAASSSS JJJOOORRRGGG OOOOOOO!!!BOOO!!! Lol, getting into the back ground!XD OMG I LVOED IT UPDATE SOON AGAIN PLEASE!!XD
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/01/08 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
NOOO!
DON'T STOP THERE!
GO ON!
WILL HE TELL THEM THAT IT'S HIS DAD? I HOPE HE DOES!
BILL AND TOM WERE MADE FOR EACH OTHER!
Author's Response: Lol, see this, every chapter has to have 1234 words so that's where I stop ;)
Date: 04/01/08 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
remember Toms love cures diseases:)
Author's Response: Maybe it does. Maybe not ^_~
Date: 04/01/08 11:54 am Title: Chapter 13
Good ! I likes ! Can't wait for the update x
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/01/08 09:33 am Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
Personally, I prefer the 1° version of the 12° chapter...I've loved Tom kissing Bill that way!Anyway, I'll wait with trepidation for your next chapter..post soon! Sorry for my English, I'm Italian, you know....
Author's Response: I prefer 1st to 2nd as well, but some things from the 1st version were rather unclear and poorly explain as I realized after I posted it. Which is why I made the 2nd version. And don't worry about your English, I've had experience with you Italians on here, lol ^_~
Date: 04/01/08 07:55 am Title: Chapter 10
I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE....
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you ♥
Date: 04/01/08 05:54 am Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
Awww yesss :) again! This is so angsty! I love it. But... you have to think of something to get Jorg out of the way and set Tom free T_T you simply have ç_ç poor sweetpie.
Author's Response: Angst is my middle name *rolls eyes* Fluff is something I can never do properly *sighs* Thank you :D
Date: 04/01/08 05:45 am Title: Chapter 12
Awwwwwwwww Toooomi! :D I know you would have done that some time! Ugh, is Bill really gonna accuse him? :(
Author's Response: I don't know, is he? ^_~
Date: 04/01/08 05:42 am Title: Chapter 12; 2nd version
*gasps* Jorg really is a monster and will get what he deserves
i hope Bill will together with Tom soon :P
update soon pls
Author's Response: ♥