Date: 10/03/08 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 27
DDD: I feel so bad for them ;__; I just wish that they would run into each other already *sigh* but you keep going O.O I was ecstatic that you had posted another chapter, so now I can't wait for more XD
Date: 10/03/08 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oh my god, Tink, you're enjoying this aren't you?! So close... *sigh* lol
Ugh, I just feel so sorry for both of them now. They've both been through so much, and as much as I STILL want to strangle Tom, I think they both deserve to be happy.
Actually, I take that back, I want to strangle the pair of them... Or maybe bang their heads together! lol. I love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens when they do (finally), meet up! lol
Another great, if not completely frustrating, chapter! lol.
Date: 10/03/08 11:41 am Title: Chapter 27
i couldn't get past reading the first paragraph for ten minutes because i kept glancing at your chapter note. that's so nice fo you!
Date: 10/03/08 11:35 am Title: Chapter 27
Oh my fucking god. I though that you were may be going to be nice, for once.
That Tom would come, gather Bill in his arms and ride away with him on a white stalion, named Mr. Tinkles.
I swear, you'll have this at fifty by the time them to are together, if they are ever fucking together.
Knowing you they wont be, knowing you, you'll have Tom top himself, thinking he's too imoure for Bill, that he's not good enough for him.
Please don't do that.
Despite Bill being ill, I feel so so so fucking god damn sorry for Tom. There's no need for him to feel like shit, both him and Bill want each other, so fucking make him get back with him!
Even if Bill has to throw shit at him to get his anger out.
They're like us in a way, having a massive argument over something so fucking shitting bloody trivial.
Even if ours was solved over two texts.
...can you make theirs be solved over text messages? Even use ours, just take out the irrelevant parts and change it to fit the fic.
Please Tink, just make it right, make it fluffy, make it cuddly!
I thought that you'd managed to wean yourself off of the angst. But no, oh fucking no. God no, not even remotly.
I'm in two minds whether to go over and check this, or to leave it again and let you giggle over my mistakes.
I probably should find out every little one and change it, but I wont. I just hope they arent't too bad.
Date: 10/01/08 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 26
1. props for the strategic word limit! you're cool in my book. =P
2. your story really has wonderful details and symbolisms. i love the thoughts you've placed in your characters' minds. =]
3. i really don't like reading about abuse and other evil things. sometimes i wonder why would anyone want to write about rape and stuff. i realized that even this kind of story reveals something true about life or humanity or what have you, and truth is always beautiful (atleast for me ^_^) i enjoyed reading this, but i think it's mainly because you write well.
4. just.. ugh.. thank you so much. =] MOAR soon pls. heehee
Date: 09/20/08 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh God! Iīm nervous! Lol!
Date: 09/20/08 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I donīt think is so cliche. I like it.
Date: 09/13/08 01:22 am Title: Chapter 26
please update this soon!! please finish it soon!!! this story is going to drive me crazy until i know the ending!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
Date: 09/09/08 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 26
squee! good chapter!
please update soon, you're an amazing writer!
Date: 09/08/08 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 26
i like it :)
next chapter please
Date: 09/07/08 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
O_O it was??? because I remember this chapter ;__; maybe I predicted the future by dreaming? XDDD lol I don't know D"X *headdesk*
Author's Response: That I can't help with xD
Date: 09/07/08 10:35 am Title: Chapter 26
Oh yay, finally I got to read it! I think you know how excited I was that you updated this, well I hope you do anyway!
Ugh, I know Tom doesn't know why Bill didn't come to meet him, but he still annoyed me when he ignored Bill... Oh and that little image in Tom's head, of Bill on the blood red sheets... I would love to see that! lol
But as I've said to you already, the ending gives me hope! Can't wait to see how, and if, Tom manages to show Bill that he's changed...
Date: 09/07/08 08:42 am Title: Chapter 6
:o Top didn't KNOW? aww
Date: 09/07/08 06:47 am Title: Chapter 26
Oh my good god!
I want to jump and squeal and go mad, and I will, if you can promise me that it's back.
Properly back.
*sings and dances*You're coming back to the site, to the site, to the site. You're coming back to the site, to the site, to the site. And it's well mint.*stops singing and dancing*You better fucking be.
Merrrhh, Tink, make it all better, make it fluffy.
Because to be honest, Bill seems pretty fucking suicidal, and that's not fluffy.
But Tom seems like he's gonna sort it out. But knowing you, he wont.
Knowing you, you'll have the bastard jump of a cliff.
Volim te (still well proud of that)
Oh, before I forget, Tom's love id the cure for hemophilia!
I'll scream if there's a mistake in this.)
Author's Response: Go on, scream: Tom's love id the cure
Date: 09/07/08 02:45 am Title: Chapter 26
=[ Bill AND Tom went through soo much..I loved it though =]
I thought they were gonna talk then!! AHHH nooo.. I need to find out what happends! Cant wait for more!
Date: 09/07/08 01:45 am Title: Chapter 26
o.o I've already read this.... >.> hmmmm
Author's Response: No, you haven't. Chapter 26 was deleted, edited and then reposted
Date: 09/07/08 12:15 am Title: Chapter 26
Um, I thing I've already read this chapter... wasn't this already posted? I was hoping for something positive, not more of this downward spiral.
Update soon. And maybe make it happy soon too?
Author's Response: You might have read parts of it; chapter 26 was deleted, edited and reposted
Date: 09/06/08 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 22
An even bigger thank you to you for writing such a fablous fiction :) It's beyond the valley of awesome. xx