Date: 04/24/23 06:53 pm Title: (One)
Forgive the barrage of reviews a bajillion years later! I'm still catching up on reviews one author at a time from when I got into the fandom a year ago! Just a crazy little "project" to put some love on the stories I've read lol... which includes this one! POOR BILL OMG! But I LOVE that Tom was instantly obsessed with him in turn, and that they made it out on top and together
Date: 04/26/15 09:23 am Title: (Seven)
this was a really good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Date: 04/20/14 12:35 pm Title: (Seven)
Aww:) I love the twins, love this story, and I love your writing:) wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ♥
Date: 04/16/14 10:16 pm Title: (Five)
You make me speechless everytime. If my first time is that amazing I'll b happy:)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04/15/14 06:48 pm Title: (Two)
Ohhh what a long feast! I can't wait for them to be alone!:)
Author's Response: It sure did take up a lot of time! ;) They deserve their alone time.
Date: 04/15/14 05:53 pm Title: (Two)
I do wonder what comes next! I feel like I've been waiting as long as Bill and Tom. Beautiful writing as always!
Author's Response: It's exciting, right? Glad you're enjoying the story, thank you!
Date: 04/15/14 05:28 pm Title: (One)
Omg love it already! And I'm super excited tom has his hair down!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you love it! It's nice to see him with natural loose hair, right?
Date: 04/15/14 04:21 pm Title: (One)
I love it! I about did cartwheels when you said Tom's hair is down*_* It was very good. I was swept away in the moment that Bill first saw Tom. It was very visceral:)
Author's Response: It's nice to have a story with current Tom's hair, right? Glad you enjoyed it, as well as that special moment!
Date: 01/21/14 02:23 pm Title: (Seven)
Love, love this so much. So good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you thought so. :)
Date: 01/05/14 10:31 pm Title: (Seven)
Great story as always!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D I'm really pleased you enjoyed it so much. Don't miss my latest, Eros Falling!
Date: 01/05/14 01:55 pm Title: (Six)
I suspected that the "Promise" was some kind of video transmitting device. How dare Bohlen spy on our sexy duo? We will have to watch over them more carefully so it doesn't happen again!
Author's Response: Of course it was! Bohlen's soooo groooooss. Tom's Lightning Guard had better be more vigilant after this.
Date: 01/02/14 08:55 am Title: (Four)
This Bohlen character is really creepy. I don't think Bill should go. I'm afraid he will kidnap Bill or something worse. What evil plan could he be hatching?
Author's Response: He is TOTALLY creepy. And Bill should definitely NOT go. But hopefully the evil plan wasn't as bad as you imagined it to be! ;)
Date: 12/30/13 01:06 am Title: (Three)
Uh oh...Can't we linger here just a little longer? It's all so perfectly orgasmic.
Author's Response: Would that we could! These boys would certainly enjoy it. :D
Date: 12/30/13 12:21 am Title: (Two)
I can't imagine what will transpire in the next scene. ;)
Author's Response: Ohhh, I think you can! ;)
Date: 12/27/13 11:46 am Title: (One)
God this is excellent. I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 12/07/13 04:50 am Title: (Seven)
Yay for a happy ending! I enjoyed this story, as I enjoy all your stories. I have to admit though, this was not my favorite. I'm trying to pinpoint why so that this is constructive but I'm having trouble putting my finger on it. It just didn't seem as developed or as thought out as most of your stuff is. Like, if I had to guess I'd say you were distracted while writing this, or it wasn't your main focus.
All that being said, you are still on of the best writers on this site, and one of my favorite authors out in 'the real world'. Love!
Author's Response: Always the happy ending, I can't help myself!
Hmm...maybe it feels a bit rushed? I was writing it under a time crunch, I'm sure there are a few things here and there that aren't as developed, as you say. And altogether it's a pretty basic story, not many twists.
Aww, thank you. That means a lot to me. ♥
Date: 12/02/13 11:41 am Title: (Seven)
*applause*
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/02/13 02:45 am Title: (Seven)
Finally!!! they get to be together for real and for ever!!!! YAY!!!! I loved this and I'm so glad to read one of your stories again :)
Author's Response: Yes! I love happy endings. :) Can't do it any other way. Thank you for loving this and for your lovely review!
Date: 12/02/13 12:26 am Title: (Seven)
finally they can be happy that's the good end :)
Author's Response: Two happy princes of the realm. ♥ I think they're going to be just fine. Thanks for reading!
Date: 12/02/13 12:05 am Title: (Seven)
Wonderful tale!
Author's Response: Thank you!