Date: 12/03/13 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my god, this is AWESOME! How original! I want more of this, pleaseeeee? ^^
Author's Response: Thank you SO much ^^ There surely will be more of this, but I want to finish Mother in Law first cause i haven't updated in a long time and it's been almost a year since i posted that story :3 thank you for reviewing! ^^
Date: 09/24/13 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
hahhhahhhahahh this ism ab awesome story ... i have no clue why i find it funny XD please update soon
Author's Response: aww :3 but i hope it's a good kind of funny :3 i'll try to update this weekend or over the next week :)
Date: 09/22/13 09:01 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww Geo is so spazzy XD
Author's Response: ahah ikr?? Thank you for reading!
Date: 09/22/13 05:38 am Title: Chapter 2
GUSTAV knows something is up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: eheh yes he does!! ;))
Date: 09/21/13 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is freaking awesome! I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: thank you so fucking much! :D
Author's Response: thank you so fucking much! :D
Date: 09/21/13 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
they was super but i think Bill got a little bit too paranoid when he picked up Tm's phone. they could did so many things so it doesn't have to mean just one thing. well, Tom is so chill about the whole situation....damn, can't wait for more
Author's Response: ahah yeah, they're kind of the opposite of each other :) (they're perfect for each other! :p)rnI'm so glad you're liking this!^^ Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 09/21/13 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
cant wait for the next chapter
can we have some BotTom too?
Author's Response: I hope i don't take long to update! and you actually just gave me an idea! I'll think about it ;)
Date: 09/21/13 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Uh oh, Gustav knows. He doesn't seem like the type to say anything, but he might mention it to Tom. Also, I hope Tom admits those three words back to Bill at some point. I feel like he must love him, too, but he feels too guilty about cheating to admit it. Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Hihi yes, Gustav knows! Oh-oh, what's going to happen now??? (i know :p) and Tom just need to clear his mind about what he really feels :)) Thank you so much for your sweet review! ^^
Date: 09/14/13 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Georg... Actually look at what's going on around you!
I found a couple of mistakes, you asked me to point them out so I shall!
1) "older than me for 18 years!” Should be should be older than me by 18 years or 18 years older than me.
2) You've used the word brake, instead of the word break. Brake is used when talking about car brakes, and taking a break at work uses the word break. (Hope that makes sense!)
3)"weren’t so much people." I should be weren't so many people.
4) You've used relieve when it should be relief.
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much for your review ^^ English is not my first language so it's kinda difficult to write the chapters, I'll correct everything tomorrow cause now I'm on my phone and it's late here :p but thank you so much for that! The bad thing is that I'll probably commit more mistakes in the future, I just don't like to give my chapters to person to correct the mistakes cause that takes time and I'm really impatient :p thanks again! :-*
Date: 09/13/13 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is dangerous business lol
Author's Response: Ahah, I know right? :p Thank you for reviewing! :)
Date: 09/13/13 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
More :D
Author's Response: ^^
Date: 09/13/13 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please update!!!!!! I'm lovin' it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll update as fast as i can!! :*
Date: 09/13/13 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really liked this! Waiting for the next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! ^^ I'll try to update as fast as I can :))
Date: 09/13/13 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Georg is naive!!!! How does he not know his best friend is screwing the boss?! More of this please.
Author's Response: Haha I know right? But Tom is happy for that! :p thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^
Date: 09/13/13 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah I love this. They're so bad, but they're also just really adorable. I'd love to see more sweet moments between the two and also their first time sleeping together. I'm guessing Bill is bi since he's married, but you never know. Tom's dating so...eh, it doesn't matter anyway. I wonder if they're in love or just hooking up. Guess I'll find out!
Author's Response: Aw thank you :3 I'll try to make more sweet moments of two of them, and maybe some flashbacks :p but as for now, bills sexuality will stay a secret!
Date: 09/13/13 11:16 am Title: Chapter 1
damn, that was so good :)
well, it should be good that even if they are cheating, they still can be happy with what they had between them and that Tom really doesn't love Bill's daughter has a little light light for them after that, i don't know.
i'm just like curious how it started and how other will find out - if them.
so I CAN"T WAIT FOR MORE
Author's Response: Thank you! I promise all the explanations are coming in the next chapters! ^^ I'll try to update as soon as possible! :)
Date: 09/13/13 08:38 am Title: Prologue
omg, i can't wait for more!!!! in one world they will so enjoy the time they would be without theirs girls. i'm even curious how it happened
Author's Response: aw thank you so much for your review! :3 I'm going to post a new chapter now, so it will be available in a few hours! :)))
Date: 09/13/13 03:17 am Title: Prologue
Can't wait for the next chapter...........
Author's Response: :333 thank you for reading! :D the next chapter is almost ready :3
Date: 09/12/13 12:33 am Title: Prologue
Ohhh i wanna see how this goes!!!
Author's Response: :DD Thank you for reading! I'll try to update soon :)