Date: 04/22/15 01:43 am Title: Desperate crush
I can't believe I missed this little goody! A fav for sure.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this!! Yay thank you! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this!! Yay thank you! :D
Date: 03/26/15 06:13 pm Title: Desperate crush
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!! :D
Date: 09/13/13 03:13 am Title: Desperate crush
Amazing......
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/11/13 04:32 am Title: Desperate crush
I think you need a beta, for small errors. Overall I liked it though. It was a cute little one shot. It seems like it would have the potential to draw out into a longer story too. Slow the time down and add more details to do that. But, I enjoyed it very much just the way it was.
Author's Response: Thank you :) And yes this would definitely need a beta, but unfortunately I didn't have one in hand at the time so I kinda looked through it so there wouldn't be any huge mistakes :P Yeah, you are quite right that this idea could make a longer story, but I usually like to write one shots, 'cause I can finish them in one night :P I am so glad that you liked this :))
Author's Response: Thank you :) And yes this would definitely need a beta, but unfortunately I didn't have one in hand at the time so I kinda looked through it so there wouldn't be any huge mistakes :P Yeah, you are quite right that this idea could make a longer story, but I usually like to write one shots, 'cause I can finish them in one night :P I am so glad that you liked this :))
Date: 09/10/13 10:55 am Title: Desperate crush
this was a good story!
u should do a sequel!
Author's Response: Thank you :) But I am afraid this story hasn't got enough interesting plot to deserve a sequel, but we'll see if i write other fictions here sometime :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) But I am afraid this story hasn't got enough interesting plot to deserve a sequel, but we'll see if i write other fictions here sometime :)
Date: 09/09/13 08:17 am Title: Desperate crush
loved this story. hope you read more from you.
Author's Response: Haha we'll see if i'll write more stories here :) i'm glad you liked it :)) thank you!
Date: 09/08/13 04:45 pm Title: Desperate crush
I enjoyed reading that :) it was written really well :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it :))
Date: 09/08/13 05:43 am Title: Desperate crush
Aw this was a really cute one shot! It's fun seeing Bill be the older one but still letting Tom take the lead a little bit. Big fan :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :))
Date: 09/07/13 04:45 pm Title: Desperate crush
Definitely needs a beta to fix all the small grammar errors, but other than that, it was pretty good. It was a cute one-shot, nothing special, but enjoyable to read nonetheless. Good plot idea, older sexy Bill coming on to more inexperienced Tom is really appealing. Good job!! :)
Author's Response: I totally agree with you on that beta department and i intend to ask someone to beta my possible future fictions :) Good that you liked this even if there was those grammar mistakes :) thank you :))
Date: 09/07/13 01:05 pm Title: Desperate crush
Cute, hot and a fantasy crush come true...what's not to like!!
Author's Response: So awesome that you liked it! :)))
Author's Response: So awesome that you liked it! :)))
Date: 09/07/13 04:35 am Title: Desperate crush
Really enjoyed this. There were a few minor mistakes, but they didn't detract from the story. You wrote great characters and the sex was hot.
Author's Response: Oooh, yay! I'm glad that you liked it! :))
Author's Response: Oooh, yay! I'm glad that you liked it! :))
Date: 09/07/13 03:53 am Title: Desperate crush
It was so cute! :-) Crushed younger Tom was just lovable. I would have reacted the same way as Natalie, she is a wonderful sister. Don't be lazy :-) and translate more of your fictions. I certainly appreciate it. :-) J.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy that you liked it :) And I try not to be lazy and start translating other fics also :P
Date: 09/06/13 09:48 pm Title: Desperate crush
nice :) so Tom's "dream" came true :) well, i thought they would be in different places than they were cos Bill is older but that was good also :)
and Natalie's reaction was so funny hahah
Author's Response: Yeah well I am sucker for happy endings, so in TH fictions I always end them like that :P Yay, I am happy that thought it was good :)
Date: 09/06/13 08:53 pm Title: Desperate crush
So good1
Author's Response: Thank you :))
Date: 09/06/13 07:23 pm Title: Desperate crush
I think your name almost killed me lol XD
Liked the story too.
Author's Response: Haha, okay :P Well it's good that it just "almost" killed you 'cause I don't want to be a murderer :DD Yay, good that you liked the story :)))