Date: 09/12/13 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 7: A Stolen Moment
Why not? The story seems good
Author's Response: xD The comment was about the yaoi smexi-ness. ^^
Date: 09/11/13 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 7: A Stolen Moment
Love this story, keep updating, can't wait for more chapters.
Author's Response: Update coming up! ^^
Date: 09/06/13 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 6: Card Games and Russian Roulette
God hope u feel better so u can update a next chapter see u next time. Bye and hugs
Author's Response: Thanks! It's gotten worse but I'm determined to press onward!
Date: 09/06/13 05:09 am Title: Chapter 5: Peering into the Looking Glass
Oh poor Tom. It was good to see a little bit of his past. Now Bill's past? Eventually? :)
And reading slash until 4am? Psh who stays up late to read fanfiction...*looks at clock that reads 2am*...whoops...
Author's Response: xD Thanks I suppose? x) Any hoo, it's just weird for my mom because she doesn't even know I like yaoi much less write it... and she doesn't like fanfic either... Bill's past will slowly be revealed but I'm a little clogged-y headed right now so not today.
Date: 09/05/13 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 5: Peering into the Looking Glass
I loved it can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Well, I'm attempting a post tonight... No promises, my head is stuffy
Date: 09/05/13 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: Peering into the Looking Glass
Nice .... kudos ......loved it :D
Author's Response: x) Merci beaucoup!
Date: 09/05/13 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: Hotels and Streetlights
It was so short ....MUST know more .......!!!!!! Excited for the next chapi :D
Author's Response: Will be posting shortly :D
Date: 09/04/13 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 4: Hotels and Streetlights
Lol yeah better let go of Bill before something bad happens *cough* Tom :)
Author's Response: lol, nuuu! Mine!rnrnTom: *growls*rnZack: *fearful whimper*rnBill: -.-" -How did I get involved in this?-
Date: 09/03/13 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Hotels and Streetlights
It seems that the connection has started building between Tom and Bill.
Author's Response: Mayyyybe. ;) Feelings and past will be revealed in next couple of chapters... once I have them written up of course. ^^"
Date: 09/02/13 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 3: First night out
I wonder why O'Donnelly went after Bill when he was so different from his usual slew of girls. Then again, who doesn't want Bill? Tom and Bill's dynamic is really funny, and I'm glad Bill is a bit of a spitfire.
Author's Response: Well, the spitfire was something I added after contemplation... to keep things interesting. O'Donnelly's reasons for wanting Bill will be revealed later along with some of Bill's past. ;) Gonna keep you guys waiting on that. Thanks for the comment on the funny part, that was an unintentional bonus. xD Must come from hanging around comedians all day long! I concur on the 'who doesn't want Bill' comment. X) Thanks for the comment! Hope to hear more from you!
Date: 09/02/13 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful day... Beautiful Bride
Oh i'd gladly run away with you Tom *_*
Author's Response: EVERYONE wants to runaway with Tom... They're just scared he'll hit them! xD
Date: 09/02/13 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 3: First night out
hum hum can't wait for the update
Stress and urge I love it
Author's Response: xD Thank you! Update will be tomorrow with any luck. I'm trying to post a chapter a day. Of course the < b > < i > is beginning to irritate me. xO One of the reasons for the delay in posting. Thanks for reading!
Date: 09/02/13 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 3: First night out
Need to know more about Bill's and Tom's past lives.
Author's Response: I'm working on that. Tom we'll find out more about as he contemplates being in the mob (mostly he was just a killer for O'Donnelly) and Bill's past is something Tom is gonna start digging for in the next few chapters.
Date: 09/02/13 02:28 am Title: Chapter 2: Deadly Secrets
Uh oh, does Tom still not know Bill is a boy or did he just figure it out? I'm assuming Robert knows, right?...I think.
Tom is sure in for a wild ride after rescuing a damsel in distress.
Author's Response: He just figured it out (girls don't have Adam's apples) and yes. O'Donnelly knows. That's why Bill was going by Bella King (edited version)
Date: 09/01/13 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: Deadly Secrets
The story develops nicely so far.
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 09/01/13 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 2: Deadly Secrets
i can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Well, I just finished editing and I'll have the third chapter up by the end of today I hope.
Date: 09/01/13 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 2: Deadly Secrets
I'm in. Gonna follow and read the story
Author's Response: Yay!!! *DANCES*
Date: 09/01/13 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 Re-vamped: A Bride, a Cigarrette, and a Gun
I love the 1st chapter better.
Since you did this one, which path is the story gonna follow? You can find a mid ground for the first one to blend into I guess. But you can't do 2 versions of each chap that would be insane imo.
So yeah. I look forward to seeing the next chap then I shall know what to do.
Author's Response: Oh geez no! The re-vamp was the version I originally wrote in my head. Nah, this is gonna be going in a sorta mesh version, where the first two chapters blend and it doesn't matter which one you read. I've already written the second chapter and submitted it but it goes kinda fast so I hope it doesn't read badly. The 2 versions is tempting (not) but I think that would take to long.
Date: 09/01/13 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 Re-vamped: A Bride, a Cigarrette, and a Gun
i like the first version much better
Author's Response: Yeah me too... This was what flashed through my head and gave me the idea for the whole story. Let's just say; It's like the scene in the meadow. Just because it was the idea that started the story doesn't mean it belongs as the final draft.
Date: 09/01/13 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful day... Beautiful Bride
very promising beginning.
Author's Response: Wow! Um thanks? 0.0 Now I feel pressured to write the second chapter >O<