Oh my... I wish I could write like this o.o I love it! The details are amazing and I love how sarcastic Tom is about it and I'm also super curious about what Bill got to hear :o

Jeez, writing reviews is so not my thing sorry ^^ But I like it and I will impatiently wait for next chapter. *-* Well done girls, I think you will be great working together!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, we're both so glad that you enjoyed this first part, the second part should be up really soon. We're also really happy that you think we're working well together, because that's always nerve wracking when you work with another person. Sometimes writers can't make their work together blend well and it makes the story look choppy and cheap, but you've made us really happy; thank you beauty! xxxxx