Date: 08/20/13 09:50 pm Title: Three.
Of course he's mesmerized...it's hard not to be...no complaints here about another chapter...ill be waiting patiently...
Author's Response: Hi, Bill's such a rare beauty, everybody's going to be mesmerized by him. Thank you so much, it means the world to us xxxxx
Date: 08/20/13 08:50 pm Title: Three.
Ok, I really can't help but feel like the psychic put this in their heads. Like if Bill hadn't gone to see her he wouldn't be worried about someone taking his brother away and if Tom hadn't gone he wouldn't be feeling so weird about Bill. Like he would've just seen his hair and been like "hey that's cool", he wouldn't be doing all that staring into his eyes mess. I liked this chapter and can't wait for the next update. Hurry up Thursday!
Author's Response: Hi, Peaches here. I honestly think that's what psychic's do in the first place. My mam has a tarot reading book and the cards, and she learnt how to read them a few years ago out of pure boredom. She read my tarot a few times and everything she said began to influence everything I did. I couldn't stop thinking about it, she said numerous times that someone was going to have a really negative impact on my life, and I held back from everybody so nobody could get close enough to actually do it, as pathetic as that sounds? Tarots are a super weird thing, aha. Whereas in this story, Tom was skeptical about the whole thing right from the beginning. He didn't believe a single thing Madame Zelda said, he just brushed it off as if it was nothing. But Bill's managed to make it the only thing on his thoughts and he can't get his mind off it. Thank you so much, we're so happy! xxxxx
Date: 08/20/13 02:53 am Title: Two.
Oh my god!!! I knew it was gonna happen...but I love the journey you gave me to get there...I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Thank you so much, awe. The next Chapter should we up later today xxxxx
Date: 08/20/13 12:49 am Title: One.
I think you two work awesomely together...I really enjoyed this first chapter...I understand where Tom is coming from...that's usually the reaction I get...it is what it is...I know he's confused cause its all been so normal to him...sometimes it takes an outsider to make you realize what you have right in front of you...and now, reading on because I can...
Author's Response: Thank you so much, we're really happy you think so. Tom doesn't believe a thing Madame Zelda said at the carnival. It's going to take something huge to make him even consider what he was told from her. xxxxx
Date: 08/19/13 08:30 am Title: Two.
DREADLOCKS! Ha ha....so is it Tom's turn to be weird? This part was really good, looking forward to the next.
Author's Response: Tom's gonna be acting a little weird, yeah, but that's only natural with the circumstances. Thank you so much xxxxx
Date: 08/19/13 12:46 am Title: Two.
Oh boy...what must be going through
Toms mind!! Really looking forward to Tuesdays update.
Author's Response: You'll soon see what's going through his mind and how he takes it. Thank you so much xxxxx
Date: 08/19/13 12:45 am Title: Two.
I love this story already..... More please.....
Author's Response: Thank you so much, we're glad you're liking this so far. Next update is Tuesday lovie xxxxx
Date: 08/18/13 11:59 pm Title: Two.
Woo-hoo! Dreadlocks! Poor Tomi, must have been quite a shock for him.
Author's Response: Yeah, we think it would have been too. At least now he knows what the fortune teller was trying to say, thank you so much xxxxx
Date: 08/18/13 11:11 pm Title: Two.
Omg this is a good story can't wait for the next chapter :-D
Author's Response: Thank you so much and next update is on Tuesday! xxxxx
Date: 08/18/13 10:16 pm Title: Two.
Dun, dun, dunnnnnnnn! Well I guess things are about to get a little weird again. Haha. Tuesday can't come soon enough.
Author's Response: It's gonna get so weird, thank you so much and Tuesday's only a day away ;D xxxxx
Date: 08/18/13 09:53 pm Title: One.
Well I first have to say, you work very well together. Secondly, I feel like I understand the tarot reading and that Tom is a bull headed idiot. I can't wait to read the next part.
Author's Response: Awe, we're so glad you think we work good together, that was one of our biggest worries when starting out this new story. We both knew a little about tarot readings before we started writing this, so that was a bonus and we agree with you on Tom. He is an idiot, he blocks out things he doesn't want to know and see, but with Bill standing in front of him, practically flaunting it, it can't be ignored. Things are gonna piece together for him soon. Thank you so much xxxxx
Date: 08/18/13 03:03 pm Title: Two.
Its extremely good and I cant wait for tuesday! Well done you two
Author's Response: Awe:3 thank you so much, I'm really glad you think so! xxxxx
Date: 08/18/13 02:15 pm Title: Two.
Oh my god. I am speechless. This is so good! I love it, seriously I love it!
Okay, from the start!
It hurts me, seriously hurts me, to read about how confused and worried Tom was, I was sitting here feeling his pain and I was like; They have to talk about it! Bill talk to your brother! Let him help you!
And when they "made up", oh so sweet *-* I was grinning like an idiot xD
But oh my god, I'm so wondering what will happen next, this story, jeez. I've told you both that I rarely read an unfinished story, but I don't regret starting reading this at all, and I will impatiently wait for next chapter!
Great job, you two are doing so darn good together and I LOVE this story!
Author's Response: BABY! Thank you so much. Of course Bill couldn't keep blocking Tom out, he just can't do that. He needs his Tomi fix! The next update on this will be Tuesday when both of us are online and able to write together again. Thank you again baby xxxxx
Date: 08/18/13 02:06 pm Title: Two.
Love it!!! Don't you ever give up on this baby... :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much and we won't, we promise! :-) xxxxx
Date: 08/18/13 01:10 am Title: One.
cool story!
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much, the next part should be up really soon, we're almost done writing it xxxxx
Date: 08/17/13 09:19 am Title: One.
I tried reviewing last night but my phone was acting stupid. This is an interesting plot. Personally psychics and stuff like that creep me out. I like how Tom was skeptical about the psychic but still stayed there to see what she had to say...maybe he wasn't as skeptical as he thought. I'm looking forward to the next one, you two work well together!
Author's Response: Psychics are weird people, that's true and we'd be skeptical too if we were in Tom's shoes, because she practically dragged him out of the closet and said he was gay. We're really happy that you're following this and think we're working well together, thank you so much xxxxx
Date: 08/17/13 06:48 am Title: One.
Cute xD
Author's Response: Awe, we're glad you think so, thank you so much xxxxx
Date: 08/17/13 05:43 am Title: One.
Interesting! I want more :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, we're almost done writing the next part, it should be uploaded really soon xxxxx
Date: 08/17/13 01:15 am Title: One.
Looking forward to more for sure!
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much, we're glad you're following this short story xxxxx
Date: 08/16/13 10:58 pm Title: One.
Ooo interesting! This is really original, and I love it so far :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, we're really glad you think so, next part will be up really soon xxxxx