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Reviewer: Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/13 01:04 pm Title: Nine.

Wow, the ending is.....fast .___.|||

Author's Response: Hi.

The reason the ending happened fast was because this story was only supposed to be a one-shot, but then we realised that it couldn't happen like that, so we've had to extend it to what it is now. Also we both have our individual projects to do, so with this story being extended to this multi-chaptered story, we couldn't really do much else at the same time. We're sorry if you find the ending unrealistic with it happening so fast, but we literally tried really hard to make it work at least a little bit.

Thank you so much for reading though xxxxx

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/13 04:34 pm Title: Nine.

This story was perfect! I love it from the very beginning! The angst, the way they both behaved! I loved how TOm didn't react like he normally does in stories, like "oh my god, is it Bill? dammit, do I love Bill! Yes, I do!" I do love that he was a fighting it a bit! :) The ending was perfect as well! ^^ Thank you for writing this!

Author's Response: Hi!

Awe, thank you so much for the mass amount of praise you've given us and this story, it literally means the world to us. I usually think that too, I like a little suspense and fight before Tom and Bill jump head first into the twincest-love-boat, but we're glad you think we've achieved that in this.

Please don't thank us for writing this. It was literally an honor, especially for the amount of love it's gotten from our readers. Thank YOU for reading and reviewing like you have, you're amazing! xxxxx

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/13 03:36 pm Title: Nine.

Peaches my love .....I loved the ending babe u should make a sequel it was awesome .....we still have a wedding to plan so pick a date ....baby and let me know when ...love you wink wink :-)

Author's Response: HI BABY!!

Awe, I'm so glad that you did. We thought this type of story needed a happy ending, even if it did seem unrealistic to some extent, but whatever; myself and TuesdayReyn are really happy with the outcome of this story right now, and it also seems that everybody else is too.

We need to plan our wedding, babe. But how?:-( This is the end of the road for this story now and I don't think you're reading any of my other stuffs;-(

Love you too, sweets! ;-) ;-) THANK YOU xxxxx

Reviewer: Deca Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/13 11:52 am Title: Nine.

Sandra (Zarlina) made me read this (wow, big surprise, the list of fics she wants me to read will never end) and i really liked it :) i havent read any twincest before, only not related ones and it was truly interesting even though it still feels a bit weird to me to read about siblings being toegher. i guess that might be something ill get used to after some time on this page ^^

However. I really liked this story, it was so many feelings and i think you have captured them perfectly. Also this last chapter made me so sad and happy at the same time, it was terrible to read how much pain Bill was in but the ending was so sweet that im now sitting here with a smile on my lips. Beautiful written, you two did well together :)

Author's Response: Surprise surprise ;--) I thought it would've been Sandra, haha!

Hiya. When it comes to twincest, some people cannot read it and won't allow themselves to read, which is entirely up to them, but for actually giving it a go like you have, I really admire that about you. I know at first it completely takes you out of your comfort zone, but after a while; you'll see that type of love as beautiful and you'll become addictive! So congrats on turning to the darker side, Deca!

Awe, thank you so much. You have no idea how much that means to us both. This was only supposed to be a one-shot, but we realised that it couldn't happen like that, so we extended it to what it's become now. We've literally worked our none-existent balls off on this story, especially with finding time together so we could write and struggling against the five hour difference in timezones. Thank you again for reading and reviewing xxxxx

Reviewer: TJ999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/13 08:18 pm Title: Nine.

Hi my lovelies! So many feels in this chapter! David pissed me off so bad I was just so happy when Tom punched him in the face. When Bill started talking about not wanting to live anymore I really started to get choked up a little bit and the kiss...OMG THAT KISS WAS SO SWEET. I'm glad everything worked out for them and that Emily didn't say anything incredibly stupid. I had even messaged TuesdayReyn and was like Emily better not say anything stupid or I'll kill her lol. I'm glad everything worked out and a little sad that the story is over, but all great things must come to an end and I'm really proud of your guys! Love ya bunches!

Author's Response: Hi!

David isn't going to be liked by anyone, is he? We never knew his small part in this Chapter would be mentioned as much as it is. But Tom saved the day, more than once we think. Tom deserves cuddles for punching David, right? Love that. We don't believe in sad endings and neither of us had the heart to tear them apart. Awe, Emily was good.

Thank you so much for your devotion, it means the world to us. Thank you for reviewing and sticking with us. Love you xxxxx


Author's Response: Hi!

David isn't going to be liked by anyone, is he? We never knew his small part in this Chapter would be mentioned as much as it is. But Tom saved the day, more than once we think. Tom deserves cuddles for punching David, right? Love that. We don't believe in sad endings and neither of us had the heart to tear them apart. Awe, Emily was good.

Thank you so much for your devotion, it means the world to us. Thank you for reviewing and sticking with us. Love you xxxxx

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/13 07:22 pm Title: Nine.

You two! Lovely, amazing, fantastic people. I love you!

So many feelings! I can barely type! But I’ll try to give you a proper review *-*

So first; I got soooo angry at David. Like, excuse me Mr? HOW DARE YOU SPEAK TO BILL LIKE THAT?! Not cool dude! Not cool! Honestly, I wanted to slap him because he pissed me off so badly. And then I was like. TOM! Make him stop! Don’t let him treat your brother like this!

Then Tom took Bill and left and I was like YAY! Good boy Tom! But then, Bill started to talk about not wanting to live anymore? And I can honestly say, I had to take a pause in reading and actually go get a pillow to hug because it was just too sad and heart-breaking and it killed me. Seriously, it killed me. It was so sad and so horrible, I could barely breathe. I must give you some extra cred for that part, because it was so well written I could feel the pain. Oh my feelings. I still need some time to process all this.

THEN THE KISS! THE KISS PEOPLE! Honestly, when I read it. I was just. Oh. My. God. OH MY GOD!! This is too much for my heart too handle! “You felt like home.” Oh my god, I’m dying, right here! Oh my sweet lord! Okay sorry, I make no sense at all! I can’t even type, I am just… AAAAH I LOVE IT SO MUCH!

Omg, Emily! I knew I would like that girl. Seriously, “Sweetie, the only hotel we talked about was which one to go to.” Hahaha it killed me! Omg! You go girl!

And Bushido HAHAHAHAHA omg. I have no words, just pure love for that man! xD

OMG OMG OMG OMG! Oh My God! Georg and Gustav. I love them. I. Love. Them. Honestly. This…

oh I have no words. I am so sorry this review is so messed up, I just don’t know what to say. I loved this story. From the start I knew it would be amazing, but I never realised just HOW amazing. This ending was just…. Girls, I have no words. I love it so much, it was brilliant, you did a GREAT job working together. It was soooo amazing and so worth the waiting for every single chapter. WELL DONE! I am so proud of both of you. Seriously, I loved it, I love you, thank you so much for writing this amazing story!

Author's Response: Hiya sweets!

You've got to remember that not everybody would accept Bill's feelings and David is one of those that didn't. He was a jerk though for talking to Bill in that way, but then again; lots of people aren't as open minded like we are. Tom is a darling, he stepped in and punched the fucker in the face. We love TOM. THE KISS PEOPLE! Bill kissed Tomi and Tomi kissed Bill. When myself and TuesdayReyn were discussing what was going to happen in this last Chapter, I was like 'KISS, THEY HAVE TO KISS' and then this idea developed:3 I thought it was kinda like cheddar cheese, but aren't most happy endings like that? Anywho, I love the cheese. Tom was a sweetie!

Thank you so much, lovie. Your devotion to this story makes us both happy. You're amazing, thank you for every review you've given and for sticking with us. Love you xxxxx

Reviewer: Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/13 12:56 pm Title: Eight.

Gj girls~! I can't wait for the next chapter~ -' v '- P/s : want to have more more more angst so bad (~• 3•)~

Author's Response: Hi, the next Chapter is going to be updated really soon. Myself and TuesdayReyn are trying to find some time so we can write the next Chapter together, so you can be expecting an update on your most recent list any time from now. The next Chapter could have some angst in, I'm honestly not sure to what extent though. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means the world!

~ Peaches, xxxxx

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/13 01:29 am Title: Eight.

Oh boy...can we say drama?!

Author's Response: Hi! Oh you definitely can say Drama ^_^ This is gonna be a bumpy ride! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means the world to TuesdayReyn and I.

~ Peaches, xxxxx

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/13 06:40 pm Title: Eight.

Hai lovelies!

So ehm, I still love the story line, it's really good, it's interesting and as always I can't wait for the next chapter. But for some reason it feels like this chapter was... I don't know, it's almost like it's not the same people who has written it? While the characters and the story is still amazing, some of the life seems to be gone from the dialogues? Like the part with Bill telling Gustav, I LOVE Gustav in this story, he is so protective of Bill, he is so sweet and I knew that even though it might confuse him he would in some way understand Bill, and do his best to help him out, but for some reason I just couldn't feel it? I couldn't feel the trust or the confusion. It was there, it must have been, but it was like... Too simple.

I'm sorry, I still think the story is really good and I so want to find out what will happen in the next chapter, but it feels like some of the life was just gone from this chapter. Like it was written by some whole different people.

Update soon please, I will be sitting here impatiently waiting for next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Hiya!

Don't apologize for anything, this is critique and this can only strengthen our writing as a whole. The only reason I can think of that could explain what you've said - (Like it was written by some whole different people) - is that I only reworded a few sentences and added a tiny touch of my own work into this, we wanted to get this out really quickly because of the huge delay with updating in the first place, so I didn't have time to add much more in. Well you know that I went to Tunisia for two weeks, so TuesdayReyn wrote this on her own whilst I was gone, but she waited until I got back before we uploaded it. As for 'Too Simple' I can't really say anything about that statement, as I haven't written it but I'll pass that message along.

Sorry, sweets. Love you, and thank you for reading and reviewing!

~ Peaches, xxxxx

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/13 02:55 pm Title: Eight.

peaches you stopped loving me ......its huts ....but i forgive you ....now please dont take that long to update its was torture to not know what was going to happen ...but i will give you your ring asap

Author's Response: o: I never stopped loving you, baby! I love you so mach.

It's my fault that this didn't get out sooner, I left for Tunisia before we even wrote much of this part and I left TuesdayReyn in the lurch with it. I do apologize for that, I take complete responsibility for this VERY late update. I'm expecting my ring ;----) Thank you ^_^

~ Peaches, xxxxx

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 11:02 pm Title: Seven.

Bushido is a nice guy.

Author's Response: Hi, and we know right? He's an amazing person! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means the world to us ^_^

~ Peaches. xxxxx

Reviewer: reireixgrr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 02:23 am Title: Seven.

Aww I actually like Bushido in this story :)

Author's Response: Hi, awe we're so glad you do. I've read laods of Bushido stories on here and often have a rifle through the authors reviews to see what readers think of him as a character within what they've written, but I'm always kind of saddened when I see such negativity about him. We honestly just wanted people to sit back and think, 'Hmm, maybe 'Bushido' and 'Anis Ferchichi' are actually two different sides of who he is. Maybe he's really like this on the inside.' We just wanted people to think of him differently for a change, so I'm really happy that you like Bushido in his story.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, we really appreciate it!

~ Peaches. xxxxx

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/13 10:11 pm Title: Seven.

Peaches marry me please ...........but seriously ...I loved this chapter ..it made me all warm and fuzzy I like bushido seems like a jerk that u just seem to like for some reason ...am I right. .. ????

Author's Response: Hi, awe you're so cute. Of course I'll marry you lovie!

Personally we both love Bushido to bits, we believe he's such a captivating person to keep tabs on. His personaltiy seems to shift and change so often and we've both realised that, I think on camera he tries to live up to this person he's invented, Bushido, but in reality; he's really just Anis Ferchichi. Many people think he's a jerk, but that's his rap persona and alter ego, as I said on the last review we got. We just wanted people to read this and view him differently for once.

Thank you so much, I'm expecting a wedding ring any day now ;-)

~ Peaches. xxxxx

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/13 09:54 pm Title: Seven.

This was a great chapter. I totally agree with you about Bushido's personality actually. I know Bushido gives Bill crap, but at the same time, it seems like it's all in good fun. And the boys of Tokio Hotel are pretty sarcastic and good-natured that I just don't think any of it is serious, and they probably all laugh their a**es off at parties. Some people just don't get that kind of humor, I think.

It was also really sweet for him to push Bill back towards Tom. Twins were born together, and it would be devastating to be ripped apart.

Author's Response: Hi, we totally understand what you're saying. That's why we chose to highlight him as a different person in this Chapter.

Most people think he's a dick because they only see him acting up to this bad boy image when he's on camera, but that's ONLY based around his rap persona and his alter ego, but my friend met him and said he was nothing short of a polite, lovely, caring gentleman with amazing humor. He may say and rap about Bill and that might be considered as not so nice, but you're right. It's fun, it's lighthearted and they're all bound to laugh it off when they get together. We just wanted Bushido to be perceived as somebody that has another side to his rapper alter ego, because we honestly think this is who he is in general.

Thank you so much for taking your time to read and leave us a beautiful review on this Chapter. We're really grateful.

~ Peaches. xxxxx

Reviewer: TJ999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/13 07:32 pm Title: Seven.

I love Bu and you guys turned him into such a sweetie, which is how I picture him in my mind. I like him as the understanding voice of reason. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Hi! We totally agree with you, we didn't want to make Bushido seem like an absolute pervert, leering in on Bill and trying to get into his pants, like everybody seems to think, y'know? We wanted him to be the anchor, the person who tries to reason with Bill's inner battle to make his thoughts a little bit more clear, etc. And thank you so much for reading and reviewing, we really appreciate it.

~ Peaches. xxxxx

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/13 04:36 pm Title: Seven.

Hai darlings!

I love how you made Bushido in this one, he's like, so sweet towards Bill and it's just so cute! I really like it!

I also love how insecure and left outside Bill feels at the party, like he can't really blend in and like, really would need his brother there to relax? It's so sad, and cute at the same time.

And Gustav! I love that man! So protective and eager for Tom and Bill to sort it out, and so how he's so angry for Bills sake when Tom comes back home. It's just.. You go Gusti!

When Tom comes to the party and Bill is refusing to go home with him, I felt like just grabbing Bill's shoulders and shake him! It's like, FINE you want to show Tom that you can survive without him, you want to prove to Tom that you can move on, because thats what you think Tom wants. BUT this is not the right way! You need to talk to him! GO TALK TO HIM!

And then again, Bushido being so sweet and amazing and be like, go talk to him! And that understanding with the twin thing.. oh god I just love it..

And I start to feel like I'm just babbling so I'll just once again tell you that I love this story, this chapter was amazing and I will as always impatiently wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Hi babe.

Bill at the party, he couldn't really fit in like he would have done if Tom was there. Tom is Bill's sense of security and confidence when it comes to social gatherings and it's rare that they're apart during occasions like this. Which we tried really hard to show in this part, you're so right about that.

Gustav feels the need to protect Bill because he's constantly under the most pressure in comparison to the other guys of Tokio Hotel. Bill's the front man, it's Bill who has to live up to a certain image and Gustav doesn't like seeing the pressure suffocating Bill. With the blow up between Bill and Tom, Gustav really saw how much Bill depended on Tom and at the time before the album realise, he needed Tom's support more than ever, but Tom ran off and left him in cold reality. It destroyed Bill.

Bill had good reasons to refuse to leave with Tom. He wanted nothing more than to make amends with Tom, he wanted to show him how they can go back to being JUST twin's rather than what Bill wanted. He was just simply trying to move on to show Tom he could do it. But he took it a little too far, but having said that; he was worried that Tom would run out again once he told him how he felt, which would be the destruction of the younger Kaulitz, especially at such a crucial time in their career and their relationship.

BUSHIDO. You know how much we love this guy. Even though this is just fiction, we wanted to make him be the good guy for once. So people could interpret Bushido and the way he acts in a different light than just seeing him as the bad person. In this, Bushido would do anything for Bill, although he's not fond of the elder Kaulitz, he still invited them both because he knew it was what Bill would have wanted. He takes the small things into consideration, because he really respects Bill as a person and we're glad that you could see that.

Thank you so much, we're really happy you're enjoying this as that was our only intention. You're awesome babe!

~ Peaches. xxxxx

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/13 12:17 pm Title: Six.

Peaches and tuesdayreyn ....you giys are awesome I did not die but I was about to .....I really was ...now update soon I wanna know whats gonna happen when tom finds out that Bill is with Bushido ..... ooooo so excited

Author's Response: Hi. Awe thank you so much. We're almost finished this next part, just a few hundred words to go then we'll proofread and upload it, which will PROBABLY be tonight. Thank you again for sticking with us and being patient, it means the world.

~ Peaches. xxxxx

Reviewer: Gol1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/13 04:42 am Title: One.

OMG love this chapter so much

Author's Response: Awe:3 thank you so much, we hope we meet your expectations all throughout this. Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means the world to us.

~Peaches. xxxxx

Reviewer: reireixgrr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/13 03:08 am Title: Six.

Noooo Bill don't go with Bushido!!! Wait for Tomi!!!

Ps. LOVE this fic :)

Author's Response: Hi, it's just typical, isn't it? Tom's going home to Bill and Bill's off to a party with Bushido, it's just a really bad coincidence that this is happening right now, hahah. Awe, thank you so much, we're really happy you do love this. Thanks for reading and reviewing, we hope you like the next Chapter when it comes.

~Peaches. xxxxx

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/13 12:08 am Title: Six.

Can't wait to see what going to happen in the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Hi, the next Chapter is gonna be coming really soon and hopefully it will be up to your expectations. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

~Peaches. xxxxx

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