Date: 09/29/24 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1- Arguments and a sad memory
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Thank you for your storya292;An enviable family hahaha
Date: 02/16/14 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 12 Some second thoughts and a ride at last
*bing* [it my brains lightbulb :3] u should make one where she had questions about sex
lol.
Author's Response: Oh now you've given me a really good idea. She's going to be a preteen/teen though so be prepared lol. It'll be amazing. Maybe more motorcycles later lol Thanks for your review doll. It motivated me lol
Date: 02/14/14 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 12 Some second thoughts and a ride at last
That was the cutest thing ever. Omg bill as the overprotective mom. That sounds like my mom when my dad took me on his bike when I was six. I hurt my ankle but I still had fun. I swear Bill would make a great mommy. The truth or dare scene was so good too. And I love that Tom is the laid back dad and Bill is the overprotective mom. Again you better make a sequel I fucking loved it.
Author's Response: Woohoo. I can for sure do a sequel. No problem :) Give me a couple days. I will post it by tommorrow afternoon. I need to get the plot going. It'll be epic I think. I'll do Anna as a teenager this time I think. I have great ideas for the sequel :) Thanks for your review hun. It made my day.
Date: 02/09/14 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 11- Telling Anna the good news and getting the necessities
Haha u probably should have him like that I mean he can't just suddenly decide to say yes and not be over protective even a bit... :)
Can't wait for more ;)
Author's Response: I agree there. I had a feeling that would be interesting :) I think Bill will never stop being overprotective of his child that is for sure. Esspecilaly his only child. Thanks for your review :) I will update soon. I have the laptop cord so I can write more. I will update tuesday or monday. Thanks for reviewing again hun. It makes my day
Date: 02/02/14 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 10-A very heated discussion
its about time he let her ride that thing @.@ lol. cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: I know right lol. I wanted that to happen near the end. Bill is one stuborn mama lol. I'm going to be updating later today. My dad let me borrow his laptop but I can't find the cord. But once I do I'll update or I'll do it from my mom's Mac. More then likely I'll update in the next 2 to 3 hours :) I just need to type it out. Thanks for reviewing
Date: 01/01/14 03:05 am Title: Chapter 9-Home from errands, getting hurt and getting closer to an answer
ad always cant wait for more ^~^
Author's Response: And more you shall get. I'm going to attempt to update soon. My laptop is pretty much dead but my dad has a staionary computer that he said I can use in case my laptop gave on me and I should get it by Saturday hopefully. Until then I'm using my mom's mac so I will try to type the next chapter out. It'll hopefully be up in the next hour. *crosses fingers*rn
Date: 12/25/13 01:23 am Title: Chapter 9-Home from errands, getting hurt and getting closer to an answer
aww...they are so sweet family
Author's Response: Yes they are :) It'll get even sweeter later on with them. I'm going to start working on the next chapter in a bit or in the morning I imagine. Thank you for your review.
Date: 12/09/13 01:57 am Title: Chapter 8 Running errands with Tom and a special treat
lol well i was waiting for u to put it back up because im ur chapterly reviewer :3 anyways cant wait for more :3
Author's Response: I know, sorry about that. I had to go back and fix some parts. I'm weird like that as you may have noticed lol. Thank you for your review. I'm updating by tomorrow...well later today. I have the motivation to write and it's after midnight hehehe :) Thank you for review hun. More is coming
Date: 10/16/13 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1- Arguments and a sad memory
Ok den.... no naked children in the store... but what about naked smexi men running down the isle like a big man child... smexi man child :3 lol xD
Author's Response: In front of a six year old *gasp* lol. I've never written that to be honest lol, I may give that a try in a future chapter, no promises though. I might do it if I can incorporate it. I could do Anna being hyped out on something from Starbucks maybe or getting her first energy drink or getting sweets or maybe her and Tom going to lunch or getting fast food without mama Bills knowledge lol.
Date: 10/15/13 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 7-A brand new day and closer to getting an answer from Bill
Yay chappie :3 lol and um... run down the isles naked!!! xD lol jk jk... but that would be funny lol
Author's Response: It would lol. I am tempted to write that but maybe have her run down the isles while dressed from Tom to get candy or a soda lol. No naked children at the stores lol. Thank you for your review:) More to come soon
Date: 10/12/13 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 7-A brand new day and closer to getting an answer from Bill
Not bad. Keep writing anw, girl :"3
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm gonna start the new chapter today and update by Monday. More to come and thank you for reviewing :)
Date: 09/01/13 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 6- Truth or dare and reminiscing
yay ^^ cant wait for the next chappie
but aww :c there was no stripping :c
Author's Response: Nope no stripping sadly. I didn't work that in like I planned to at first. I may have Bill tease Tom with some stripping in a later chapter though. I am working on the next chapter atm. I'll be done hopefully by Tuesday :) Thank you for your review. More to come
Date: 08/18/13 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 5- Getting Anna to bed and unwinding a bit
ooh truth or dare... without the dare :3 that would be interesting!!
cant wait for the next chapter ;)
Author's Response: I may just do that :) Oh you've given me some ideas :) Some crazy ideas woohoo. Thank you for your review. I am going to get cracking now
Date: 08/18/13 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1- Arguments and a sad memory
omg QUICK UPDATE!!!! XD yayyzzz!!!
ok now im off to read the new chappie :3
~toodaloos will review again soon :3
Author's Response: lol. Yep I had the urge to write and I finished it last night. I am on a roll :) I may update again by tomorrow or Tuesday. I am working on the next chappie now. Thank you for reviewing :)
Date: 08/16/13 12:51 am Title: Chapter 4- Bedtime routine and a bed time snack
hehe good ;)
and nein!!! tom should have to take care of her himself!! bill shouldnt help him... >:D mwahaha
can't wait for the next chapter ;)
Author's Response: I like how you think lol. Tom should so take care of Anna alone while Bill reads his book and drinks some tea in bed :) Thank you for your review. I'll be updating in the next couple of days.
Date: 08/15/13 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 4- Bedtime routine and a bed time snack
aw this is so cute :)) i would like to see more Tom/Bill relashionship please?? *-* anyway, its a great story! :)
Author's Response: You will. There will be more of that soon. I promise. After Tom gets the spaz child to bed he might just get lucky. Thank you for your review.
Date: 07/28/13 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 3- Pushing Bill’s patience and getting in trouble
Oh damn little missy gotta lot of attitude there...
Lol everybody loves candy & soda!! ^^ and yes lol push everything on Tom make him deal with little attitude Missy @ bedtime mwahaha 3:)
Author's Response: Oh yes she does lol. I will so do that. Then Tom will suffer for giving her candy and soda before bed :) Bill gets a nice break, Tom has to WORK and deal with her hehehe. Thanks for your review
Date: 07/28/13 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 3- Pushing Bill’s patience and getting in trouble
wHAT KIND OF PARENTAL SKILLS IS THAT ,
u SPANK THE GIRL and right after a hug AND ALMOST EXCUSE YOURSELF ??
She should have skipped dinner as a lesson and go to her room locked to think about her attitude. No need for spanking !!
Author's Response: Good point. I was typing this sort of late so I wasn't focused. I will try that next time. I like your suggestion better. I'll edit it and get rid of the spanking maybe. Thanks for that. Thanks for your review.
Date: 07/20/13 11:43 am Title: Chapter 2- Attitude and being a smart ass
I could picture the entire chapter especially with her attitude lol. And even though Bill seems sweet I'm not sure he will cope well with a sassy child mouthing off to him lol
Author's Response: Indeed. Bill can't stand it when she mouths off to him. Neither can Tom but Bill doesn't cope well with that lol. I am making her even more mouthy for the next chapter. Lots more attitude coming from her very soon. Thank you for you review btw :) It made my day
Date: 07/20/13 12:31 am Title: Chapter 2- Attitude and being a smart ass
:3 hehe yay another chappie! lol
o.o oh my god. she said smart ass... five thousand times... lol
Author's Response: Yes she did. She is one brave 6 year old to say that in front of her parents lol. I am going to be updating by Monday or Tuesday. I am going out tonight so I'll work on this more in the morning. Seeing as I'll have a hangover more then likely lol. Thank you for your review. More to come