Date: 09/28/13 12:39 am Title: Chapter 13
I just read all the chapters and I'm trying to process everything...
I felt so sad when I read all the things those guys did to Bill and all the things he went through because of that :(
When he started to kill one by one I was in shock O.O I couldn't imagine Bill sweet Bill doing something like that, but he really had his ways to accomplish it.. I think they do diserved to be punished but that doesn't mean it was still a bit creepy .-.
And from this chapter leaving out the first part in the coffee shop with Amber and all that I find it really sweet when Tom started telling Bill everything I was about to cry :') It was nice to see a drunk Tom and the good side that Bill still has somewhere deep down :)
You're doing a great job with this story :) I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Greetings from Mexico
Author's Response: Greetings from the USA and thank you taking the time to share your thoughts with me. rnI'm so happy my little story got to you. Everyone has a revenge fantasy at some point in their lives, but only extreme people or those people that were horribly wronged will turn those fantasies into reality. Bill had a mission and now that mission is winding down. In all the bad, he unexpectedly found a light at the end of the tunnel, and his name is Tom. Tom seems to be the the thing that saves Bill from descending into pure evil. He was walking the line and his heart was growing cold and hard, but then along comes Tom to remind him that the possibility of love still exists! There's a few more chapters where I need to wind it down and clear up some loose ends. Still wondering what Bill will do to or with Tom. Stay tuned to find out!
Date: 09/27/13 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
When it was my lunch time yesterday I saw you had your update so I turn to my boss and said "okay I'm going to lunch and going to either read somebody dying a hilariously gruesome death or Tom and Bill finally got together"
Author's Response: How did you know? You must have figured out my pace and pattern! At some time I figured Bill needed to come clean to Tom. He likes him and it's a shame that they never had a chance to connect in high school. Now I have a few more decisions to make before I end this little tale of love and revenge!
Date: 09/27/13 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
i really like that they had a good talk
Author's Response: Yeah Bill really needed to cone clean to Tom. It was a big risk but it was a risk he needed to take if he wanted to move forward with Tom.
Date: 09/27/13 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
right
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 09/26/13 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 13
'He carried Tom...' Now I'm starting to wonder how much more muscular he is XD
I can't wait for 'tomorrow' lol.
Author's Response: Want a description of Alex written in?
Date: 09/26/13 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
STILL don't like Amber! PLEASE PLEASE kill her off soon! And d'aww at drunk Tom :D
Author's Response: Still not sure what I want to do with Amber yet. She's about to get a bit more annoying before a decision is made toward her fate!
Date: 09/22/13 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
love this :) so much suspense! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: We're sprinting towards the end of the game. Will Bill get caught or will he get away with it?
Date: 09/20/13 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
not just that, she is onto Bi...i mean Alex
Author's Response: Maybe she is or maybe she's still guessing but she's about to mess with the wrong person!
Date: 09/20/13 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh i know. I eat sushi alot so i found it funny.
Author's Response: So happy you got the method!
Date: 09/20/13 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh i know. I eat sushi alot so i found it funny.
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 09/19/13 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
GET RID OF AMBER!
cant wait till more
Author's Response: I'm strongly considering it! Shes a bit of an annoying bitch isn't she? LoL!
Date: 09/18/13 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg thats awsome! Death by fish... mwa ha ha
Author's Response: It came to me when a friend of mine was telling me how he just ate puffer fish sushi and how good it was. He was lucky he got a sushi chef who knew how to prepare it right! And yes, they really do need to be licensed to work with fugu.
Date: 09/18/13 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 12
I don't think he should kill Amber that would be too much. But as he said she is a bitch to him so I'm up for anything lol
Author's Response: Jury is still out on Amber. I need to determine how much I really can't stand her first.
Date: 09/01/13 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 11
looking forward to more
Author's Response: New chapie up now. Enjoy!
Date: 08/31/13 04:35 am Title: Chapter 11
No not now people would suspect him
Author's Response: Suspecting him but not being able to prove anything is the key..
Date: 08/31/13 12:07 am Title: Chapter 11
LMFAO! Omfg really Amber? JUST because Alex doesnt *GASP* Like you and refuses to tell you about his past and defends his friends against you being tacky makes him a suspect? Sure princess the cops will get right onto investigating him! LOL Omg....can she die next? PLEASE!
Author's Response: Surely thinnking about it cause she's anoying me too! LOL!
Date: 08/30/13 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yay i been waiting for this
Author's Response: Enjoy a new one...up now
Date: 08/09/13 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh boy...
Author's Response: A creative killer, isn't he?
Date: 08/07/13 03:33 am Title: Chapter 10
*waits for more* :D
Author's Response: Sorry to keep you waiting...enjoy a new chappie now!
Date: 08/06/13 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh shit ! Is Bill gonna be under arrest ?
He should have waited; Too many deaths in such a short lack of time of course ppl would wonder
Author's Response: People can wonder but if there's no evidence, they're just cold cases. But per the coroner, they're accidents. Can Listing and Shafer prove otherwise?