Date: 07/16/13 12:40 am Title: hope
Tom better leave those girls now, at least on mlst parts :). I'm happy for them, because regardless of what people say, they know what they want. :)
Author's Response: Yeah he is not the person who would betray Bills trust...rnand yes they know what they want...socieity with its rules and morals isnt always right.
Date: 07/13/13 10:33 am Title: hope
sweet :)
Author's Response: thanks :-)
Date: 07/10/13 08:03 pm Title: devastation
That was quite dramatic reaction, but a sweet result after all. It's always such precious moment when the twins confess their feelings to each other. They are indeed meant to be together. :)
Author's Response: haha...yeah I love to write a little drama, but I have to learn not to go overkill with it. :-)
Date: 07/10/13 07:53 pm Title: confusion
Aww, confusion is probably something they both feel. And insecurity about what the other twin wants. Even if they surrender to one moment, it clearly is not enough to break the ice completely. You did well with this chapter and some of the slightly clumsy and repetative things in the first chapter were gone, but I noticed still some spelling mistakes left. I know how it is to write in foreign language, cos I do it too, and I know it'll get smoother, but if you have a native English spoken friend or someone, maybe that person could read through your fic? But good job!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 07/10/13 07:35 pm Title: confusion
Aww, confusion is probably something they both feel. And insecurity about what the other twin wants. Even if they surrender to one moment, it clearly is not enough to break the ice completely. You did well with this chapter and some of the slightly clumsy and repetative things in the first chapter were gone, but I noticed still some spelling mistakes left. I know how it is to write in foreign language, cos I do it too, and I know it'll get smoother, but if you have a native English spoken friend or someone, maybe that person could read through your fic? But good job!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review...yes indeed the whole thing is complicated because as I say in chapter 4 it isn't easy to go against the believe system one is raised in even for something one wants more than anything. Unfortunately I don't have any native speaker who can betaread my stories, but I hope to improve by using different spell checks and read a lots of english books. I hope it gets better over time, have patience with me:-)
Date: 07/06/13 08:50 pm Title: confusion
That really slapped me in the face o.O Now i NEED the next chapter..!!!!
Author's Response: the next one is on the way! thanks! :-)
Date: 07/03/13 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1- nightly feelings
Aww, classic dilemma of forbidden love and how they both struggle to figure out how to survive. There's always room for new scenarios of how to do it, so keep on going :).
I think you did okay job for a first fic and I encourage you to continue. There were few spelling mistakes and some repetativeness, so maybe you could keep your eyes on those, but otherwise a nice start and new twc is always welcome. :)
Author's Response: Oh thank you for your review...I am always thankful for tips and tricks...It took actually som courage to write a story in english, I usually write in German or Swedish :-) I`ll keep on writing...there are some more chapters to come :). I will work on the spelling and repetativeness. Thanks! *waves*