Date: 09/19/15 08:34 am Title: Blood and Regret
Can't wait for more.Amazing story!
Date: 11/18/14 07:48 pm Title: Berserk
Of course I forgive you. You gave me a naked wild Georg. Can you really imagine that and even hotter with that smile of his.
Tom's power doesn't hurt him right? Also I want to see the full effect of Tom on Bill.
Author's Response: Hmmm, it tends to cause pain when his body triggers into that self defense mode. The whole white eyes thing. As for Georg? How could I not? ;)
Date: 11/18/14 12:50 pm Title: Berserk
This story is amazing! I read all chapters right now and can't wait for more!
Date: 11/18/14 02:06 am Title: Berserk
Update, yeah!!!
I will write a more coherent review tomorrow.
Date: 01/17/14 10:57 pm Title: Electric City -- Part Two
Please update soon. It's been a while.
Date: 09/26/13 12:15 am Title: Electric City -- Part Two
Wow, 13,000 words? You are spoiling us:) The story is so rich in action and I am loving it! The action parts of any story are usually boring for me because very few people can write them well, but Neu Erde is an absolute delight in that respect. Your Tom is growing one more and more and his "special abilities" make him sexy as hell:) I don't blame that creep Lawsone that he totally lost it when he laid his eyes and tongue on Tom.
So, what's left to say is a BIG thank you and PLEASE don't keep us waiting for too long.
Date: 09/25/13 05:14 pm Title: Blood and Regret
This story is so good!!!!! (•0•)/
Date: 09/25/13 12:22 pm Title: Electric City -- Part Two
Good story!
Tom and Ria have been together 2 almost 3 years now. Simone and Gordon love her. Perhaps Tom has found a real love now. She's a good upstanding girl from the stuff we found out about her. I'm happy he's happy...finally!
Date: 09/25/13 12:21 am Title: Electric City -- Part Two
As usual, it was amazing! I really love how creepy and disturbing Lawson was; so weird. And that one part where Lawson rips a chunk off his face and all Tom said was,"Well that's disgusting." So calm Tom, so calm. If it were me, I would be completely freaking out. Can't wait until the next chapter!!!
Date: 09/24/13 11:48 pm Title: Electric City -- Part Two
Great chapter! This was quite an adventure! I love Aria. What a great female character! I love the boys. The relationships between them are warming up :). This is a fantastic story and cannot wait to read more.
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Tom and Ria have been dating since before Bill and Tom left to live in L.A.
Date: 08/08/13 11:49 pm Title: Electric City -- Part One
cant wait for more
please update asap
Date: 07/24/13 07:57 am Title: Electric City -- Part One
I can't wait for more. This story is getting so good.
Date: 07/23/13 03:32 am Title: Blood and Regret
An absolutely fantastic beginning of something that has a potential to become an epic. Your story telling talent is quite massive, you captured me like no many stories have done so far, keep up the good work.
Plus, your pacing and dialogues are pretty much flawless. It's smooth like melting butter:) Delicious read!
Date: 07/23/13 12:32 am Title: Electric City -- Part One
I love the story. It is very interesting so far.
Date: 07/22/13 12:24 pm Title: Blood and Regret
Hey,
well I really love this two chapters. They have also a good structure, so it's easy to follow the happenings. BUT the cliffhanger is just totally unfair!!!!!! I have to struggle with not to hate you ;P I look forward for the next chapter of you, oh and I think Tom will kick Lawsons ass by the way.
Greetings
Date: 06/27/13 05:54 pm Title: Blood and Regret
Very interesting beginning, I have to say. Exceptionally nice flow and somehow very effortless to read. I also like the way you started this, cos at least I got interested to read more. It's like the story seem to be "fuller", bigger and thought through more than most scifi fics. Good job and I'll be waiting for more :)
Date: 06/23/13 06:43 pm Title: Blood and Regret
I love this! I love stories that make me feel like it could be made into a movie ^-^ This is really good and I can't wait to read more :D
Date: 06/22/13 08:22 pm Title: Blood and Regret
Sounds very interesting, I think I will love this story! Hope it will be a long one
Date: 06/21/13 04:31 pm Title: Blood and Regret
Lovvveeeedd ittt
Date: 06/21/13 01:01 pm Title: Blood and Regret
Hey, I really like your idea and I also love Sci-fi and Fantasy. Your way to describe your characters is very good. Sadly I can't tell you easily if you have some gramma misktakes in it, because English is not my mother tongue (I'm german, by the way ;). Well I would be very happy to read some next chapters! And please please don't stop writing, cause it's always a pity, when a good story stays unfinished.
So your Story has a first fan now ;)
Greetings!!