Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 07:26 pm Title: Not so first impressions

This seems really interesting! I'm looking forward to more and to see where you take this =]

Might be a good idea for you to break up the paragraphs, though. They are quite long and I found it a bit hard to read. As well, there are quite a few run-on sentences, and again, I found it a bit hard to read.

Your writing is really, really good, and like I said, I can't wait to see what happens =D