Date: 05/20/17 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow :O Brilliantly put together, exciting, and a great ending. Thank goodness for Toms < 3 Really enjoyed, well done :D
Date: 03/19/15 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, i say this every time but LOVE your stories! The thing with the traffic lights was a really nice touch, like at the end when it was green his life was finally starting and moving forward or something. I got SO excited when Tom stepped into the story because i wasn't expecting that at all. This could really have a sequel, omg i would be all for that! I can just imagine how things would fall into place as Bill and Tom started to get to know each other and Tom can take care of him, fix him, love him etc. Awwww, my brain is on crack haha.
Date: 10/04/14 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lovely. Poignant.
Date: 07/14/13 01:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Really loved the symbolism in this =)
Date: 06/03/13 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, that was so sweet. Kind Tomi, I like. :)
I have a weak spot for prostitute twins, but sadly this man and situation made me only angry, so I'm just happy Tom appeared there.
Touching little ficlet with happy ending. Nice. :)
Date: 06/03/13 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, that was so sweet. Kind Tomi, I like. :)
I have a weak spot for prostitute twins, but sadly this man and situation made me only angry, so I'm just happy Tom appeared there.
Touching little ficlet with happy ending. Nice. :)
Date: 05/30/13 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think it's lovely. (: It was a beautiful story.
Date: 05/29/13 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
So cute. Is there any chance you'd write a sequel? It was really cute as a one shot, but I'm hopeful...
Date: 05/29/13 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Really good story, thanks for writing it! Hope to read more from you soon :D
Date: 05/28/13 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really beautiful, I totaly love this story! Hope you will write more!
Date: 05/28/13 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
This made me cry! The end is so sweet! Nice job!
Date: 05/27/13 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
The end was really sweet :)
Date: 05/27/13 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderfully done. :)
