Date: 09/24/13 09:35 am Title: Chapter 2
this was a good story!
u should do a sequel!
Date: 06/28/13 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well done, but you REALLY need to check your grammar/spelling. It's pretty bad. Still, great PWP XD
Date: 05/27/13 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Assdfghhjkkk!!!! So hot! I never get enough of Tom getting rimmed, fingered, fucked. It's so hot... and all the dirty details...Loving it! Bill surely knows how to lead and tbh, I envy him for doing all those things. This is how they should be, always. :)
Date: 05/25/13 05:47 am Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm, good fic. Hot, sexy, great connection between the twins. But OMG there were SO MANY grammar mistakes and typos!!!! Ahhh!! :( I found that I had to read it faster so I wasn't noticing them as much, but honestly, it was distracting. A little proof-reading on this fic will make a big difference. You're not a bad writer, actually you're pretty good, so don't let grammar/typos ruin your fic. Now back to the fic- I found it surprising to see Bill in such a dominating role, w his leather sex get-up too, wow! Haha. This fic wasn't what I was expecting, but you took me on a little journey, and I liked it in the end. Write more twincest!!! Yay! :)
Date: 05/21/13 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1/2
Classic twincest feel :). There's always something so nice in understanding of how special the twins are and how much for each other- always. :)
I have to admit that even if the back story was actually pretty nice and needed, I have some conflicted feeliongs about it. Mainly, because to me it made Tom look a bit bad and maybe it was just in my eyes (don't worry about it), but I'm not very good on dealing with making him lok bad in general. Especially that trying to hit her part was a bit too much of a Perrine-case although a very different situation. But perhaps it was just me, so no need to stress about it. :)
Author's Response: To be honest, in my thoughts Tom never actually went to hit her. I always meant to interrupt the action because i needed something to trigger the other guy into hitting Tom. I guess i just wanted Tom to be really, really angry at her. But hey, last ch is almost done and it's less serious, more fun. :)
Date: 05/20/13 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1/2
keep going, please! awesome story
Date: 05/17/13 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1/2
Can't wait for more!!
Date: 05/16/13 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1/2
I'm really excited for the next chapter!
Date: 05/16/13 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1/2
i like it :) and somehow i can really imagine those situations.