Date: 07/10/13 01:31 am Title: #10 “Everybody told me love was blind. Then I saw your face and you blew my mind. Could it be, that you and me are the lucky ones?”
Great Job. I loved it. Will their be a sequel?? With the kids giving poor Bill a hard time and him getting mad?? like a one shot maybe *bats eyelashes*
Author's Response:
That's unfortunately the last part. I don't want to ruin it by dragging it on so long.
Date: 07/07/13 10:53 am Title: #9 “There’s something she doesn’t know about, a secret he doesn’t show about.”
So happy you updated. I was all yay! Finally! The wedding! And then that shock ending. Poor Bill what an awful decision to have to make, and Anis not even there to help him. Can't wait to find out what Bill will decide.
Date: 07/07/13 01:49 am Title: #9 “There’s something she doesn’t know about, a secret he doesn’t show about.”
Oh god...more soon please!
Date: 06/29/13 02:16 am Title: #8 “They all got girlfriends and I’m the one they want.”
I like the way you tell a story and your writing is quite nice. I'm enjoying this third installment. I read the beginning two earlier today and just had to move on to this one. The pictures are certainly a nice touch, I was wondering though, if I am correct in thinking that Bill is blond at this point. He's gorgeous no matter what, but the long blond hair just makes me shiver:D; I really hope that Bill doesn't cheat. That would be so disappointing.
Author's Response: yes bill's hair is long and blonde like in the banner
Date: 06/27/13 02:53 am Title: #8 “They all got girlfriends and I’m the one they want.”
I think i know whats going to happen! more!
Date: 06/20/13 02:05 am Title: #7 “Nighttime is almost ours”
i know it's not my place to ask for anything but i just have to get this out there: when you mentioned that it turned Bushido on to know that someone would dare touch what was his just gave me a really smut-filled fantasy: if/when Bill pointed out the guy who was eyeing him, instead of Bu getting angry- he fucks Bill right in front of him to get the point across XD CHRIST THAT WOULD BE HOT!!!!!
Author's Response: the story is already written but i might be able to fit it in
Date: 06/05/13 01:36 pm Title: #6 “So why is my heart broken?”
aww poor bill
Date: 06/05/13 06:44 am Title: #6 “So why is my heart broken?”
Love all the drama!
Date: 06/02/13 10:18 pm Title: #5 “Pretty baby, if you don’t like the way that I love you. Then throw my love on the floor.”
Anis is being overdramatic. If he honestly thinks that Bill would do anything to take money from him if they break up besides the child support, he clearly doesn't trust him as much as he claims he does.
Date: 06/02/13 05:21 pm Title: #5 “Pretty baby, if you don’t like the way that I love you. Then throw my love on the floor.”
I could kick Anis right now. Not only has he left it so long to talk to Bill that Bill had to learn about the pre-nup from their infant daughter, but then Anis throws all that old shit back in Bill's face. He was the one wanted Bill to move into his house in the first place, and the whole rough sex thing...why didn't he just talk to Bill about it? Seems he's happy to listen to his friends and discuss his issues with them, but won't discuss them with the person who really matters to him. And now he's avoiding talking once again by going to walking out. That's really adult of him. I think Bill's been the mature one, waiting to make that final commitment to Anis until he's absolutely certain its the right thing to do. Anyway, that's my thoughts on the matter. I'm still really enjoying this story - love your little details with the kids etc that make it all so real.
Date: 05/31/13 06:26 pm Title: #4 “Every man gets his wish, you told me this. Where is mine?”
Apologies for not reviewing recently, but Real Life has been manic. Oh, dear, Bu's learning the hard way that kids pick up on everything you don't want them to hear. He'd better have a talk with Bill before their little darling blurts out the new word she's learned. And Bill liked being groped in the bathroom? Bad boy. But then that mystery man is pretty hot. I'm sensing some stormy times ahead.
Date: 05/29/13 04:22 pm Title: #4 “Every man gets his wish, you told me this. Where is mine?”
JONATHAN RHYS MERYERS: AAAAAAAH!!!! (i know its crazy that i know all the people you post about)
Date: 05/29/13 06:02 am Title: #4 “Every man gets his wish, you told me this. Where is mine?”
yeah yeah i understand
O oh dear !
Date: 05/25/13 01:07 pm Title: #3 “He’s not like other guys. I can’t apologize, for what my body wants and what my heart decides”
thanks for the pics, but when are we going to see what Ari looks like?
Date: 05/20/13 11:29 pm Title: #2 “Tell me a story daddy.”
OMG!!! i am loving this chapter- and you gave us the wonderful smut XD i love how you chose Nahla Aubry for little Aaliyah; she is the most exotic and adorable looking girl ever- she will be a model one day i tell, ya!! Biracial couples always make the prettiest babies :-)and im not just saying this because i'm biased
Date: 05/18/13 11:45 am Title: #2 “Tell me a story daddy.”
that was nice :) i like it :) well, they really are a nice little family :)
Date: 05/18/13 07:35 am Title: #2 “Tell me a story daddy.”
She is adorable and is quite well behaved as far as I can tell. The boy on the other hand totally deserved a spanking for that little stunt at the grocery store. I think Anis needs a week home with his precious son to really understand how spoil he is.
Having children totally didn't change Bill at all lol.
Date: 05/16/13 07:18 pm Title: #1 “If you stick with me I can take you higher.
I love this :) Can we see one of the kids get in trouble with mama Bill??? I can so see Bill being a firm parent lol. Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 05/16/13 06:13 am Title: #1 “If you stick with me I can take you higher.
Please update soon *bats eyelashes* with some smut :-)
Author's Response:
SOON!
Date: 05/16/13 03:24 am Title: #1 “If you stick with me I can take you higher.
So happy to have found your sequel. Seems their relationship is still pretty tempestuous, but I loved the little details of Bill bathing the kids. Hoping for another update soon.
Author's Response:
he loves his babies!