Date: 06/12/13 03:44 pm Title: Rule number three, don’t get attached to somebody you could lose
Fever does good things to the writing, I guess it just heats up the brain. I wonder what his problem is, although I have a guess. Keep doing it (writing, not fever)and the world will get a little happier with every chap.
Author's Response: Maybe you are right about that, at least I hope so.
Date: 06/08/13 06:09 pm Title: Rule number three, don’t get attached to somebody you could lose
Awesome chapter:) I like bossy Bill haha! But I don't quite get why he cried..Im guessing we will figure it out later! I really liked this chapter and I cannot wait for the next one!
Author's Response: You'll figure out the crying part later, don't worry. I'm so happy and relieved you liked it, actually I felt like I really messed up on this chapter. Thank you!
Date: 06/08/13 01:36 pm Title: Rule number three, don’t get attached to somebody you could lose
Sounds like poor Bill had a much needed breakdown of sorts. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, he did. You really liked it? Maybe it didn't turn out as bad as I thought then :)
Date: 06/04/13 03:36 am Title: Rule number two, you got to be the first to run
OMG I can't wait for more! Amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm still in the writing process of the third chapter, but it will be here soon.
Date: 05/20/13 07:00 pm Title: Rule number one, is that you got to have fun
Ah I love this story already!!! I love Marilyn as the main character although we don't know her to well yet. I hate Sophie though (assuming it was her that told the media!)
I like Bill though, maybe he's not so sweet as he would like us to think? Very interesting;) keep up the great work! I really look foward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Don't worry, you'll get to know Marilyn better. I like to let my characters develop through my stories, so we'll see what happens. I'm sorry for for the late reply :)
Date: 05/18/13 02:02 pm Title: Rule number two, you got to be the first to run
WOAH!This is unexpected! What is he doing!She's in trouble, that's for sure ha ha. Nice one, I need to see what he's got on his mind, so come on, MOOOOORE! Like Fanatik says hi hi
Author's Response: Who knows? Haha, thank you for reviewing, I'll try to update soon :)
Date: 05/18/13 11:50 am Title: Rule number two, you got to be the first to run
For English not being your first language you wrtie just fine to me. English isnt my first language either but I"m fluent in it and Ibstill make mistakes lol. Thats what make a good writer a great writer. As for Bill, he has lost his marbles. Awesome update. Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) Yeah, I'm fluent in it too, but it's still easy to make mistakes every now and then.
Date: 05/17/13 10:21 am Title: Rule number two, you got to be the first to run
Omgosh! What about little Amy! Hopefully they're jus going to talk in the car and not actually leave. Great chapter! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: We'll see what happens, poor Amy :/ Thank you!
Date: 05/17/13 09:03 am Title: Rule number two, you got to be the first to run
Luv it.....
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 05/17/13 08:45 am Title: Rule number two, you got to be the first to run
wow!!!!!!
cant wait for moooooooooooe :)
please update sooooooooooooon :)
Author's Response: I'll try to update it as soon as I get a computer again. Thank you for reading :)
Date: 05/13/13 04:28 pm Title: Rule number one, is that you got to have fun
So much for not saying anything lol. And good minds think alike. I also have a Marilyn and a Rick in one of stories lol. Cant wait for an update.
Author's Response: Haha, true. She should learn to think before she talks. Maybe she will learn by her mistakes in the future. Cool that we've got the same names :)
Date: 05/12/13 05:40 am Title: Rule number one, is that you got to have fun
Really enjoyed the first chapter! Looking forward to read more! :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear that :)
Date: 05/11/13 03:39 pm Title: Rule number one, is that you got to have fun
Yeah, you've definitely made me curious. Now I need to know how her life changes.
Author's Response: Good curious, I hope? :) Don't worry, you'll get to know soon. And you know, life can change in so many different ways...
Date: 05/11/13 11:20 am Title: Rule number one, is that you got to have fun
Wasn't she supposed to say nothing about it?Big drama coming soon:)
Author's Response: Yes, but Marilyn have always had some trouble keeping her mouth shut ;) It might cause some drama, at least if Bill get to know! We'll see.
Date: 05/11/13 07:31 am Title: Rule number one, is that you got to have fun
it was interesting :)
cantbwait for more :)
update soooooooon :)
time for the cookie :D
Author's Response: I promise to update soon, yes :)rnOf course! *Gives cookie* Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 05/11/13 12:57 am Title: Rule number one, is that you got to have fun
I love it. I love strong female characters that are in charge of their bodies and make no apology for it. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks :) Marilyn is definitely that kind of character.
Date: 05/11/13 12:03 am Title: Rule number one, is that you got to have fun
Interesting start. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Date: 05/10/13 10:18 pm Title: Rule number one, is that you got to have fun
As soon as I read the summary I knew I was going to love it :) Can't wait to read more ! I'll be patiently waiting :P
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'll try to get the next part written as soon as possible.