Date: 12/09/13 12:35 pm Title: You And Me
YAYYYYYY you updated! Lucky you I dont finish Uni until December 20! :(
OMG :O so thats it then!They are officially together! AHHH :D so In your description you say that they dont want to change alone they as in being Tom&Bill sooo does that mean that Bill can have a go at it too? That would be so hot ok ok ok calm down Marie! XD But anyway this chapter was amazing! It was about time girl!
Date: 12/08/13 07:20 pm Title: The Party
I'm loving this story. I have just sat and read all 6 chapters. I cannot wait for the next one!!!
Author's Response:
WOW! You're a machine, all six chaps in one sitting! I just updated for ya love, so I hope you like it :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12/07/13 08:14 pm Title: The Party
This was a great chapter! I just hope she'll take more charge of herself in the future, and not let Tom just own her. It's starting to get slightly stockholm syndrome-ish, only she hasn't exactly been held against her will.
I'm really excited to know who the killer is though. Could be anybody... I have no idea. Perhaps it's Tom... As of now he is the most murdery of the bunch. Or maybe that chick Shy locked eyes with at the party? I just got a vibe there...
Author's Response:
I think you'll be rather pleased with Shy in the new chap, there's a lot of charge there :) I took your advice (lovely advice) and i'm really hoping that you like it lol But yeah, i just updated :) Thank you so much for reviewing love!
Date: 12/07/13 05:20 pm Title: The Party
Perfect party! Lol. I hope im not gonna come off as a weird sex freak but.... I hope they do it! Lol, that'd be so hot. Annnyway... Wow... Im weird. GRAND story, and Shy is sooHOhoo pretty. Post soon, I'll be waiting!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! i tried really hard to write it prefectly cause i built it up so much haha glad it paid off :) Hahaha, "weird sex freak"? I welcome you! ;) I guarentee there will be some in the future :D Thanks for reading/reviewing, lovely :) I just updated :D
Date: 12/06/13 08:10 pm Title: The Party
I love it
Author's Response:
Thankyou, sweet :) I just updated :D
Date: 12/06/13 04:46 pm Title: The Party
I love this story!!!!
Author's Response:
You're so sweet :) Glad you love it, I just updated :)
Thanks for reading/reviewing :D
Date: 12/06/13 10:44 am Title: The Party
Aww the night was going so sexy :( I hope it wasn't Stephan's sister. Update soon please. I love this story. And I haven't updated mine in like month lol. We'll see hpwany I have left when I do lol. Awesome job honey. Keep it going.
Author's Response:
Belated updating seems to be very common hahaha, maybe if Tokio Hotel brought out a new albumn there would be more inspiration, hey? ;D I'd love to check out some of your stories :) Have any recommendations ;)
Thanks for the review, lovely, I just updated :)
Date: 12/06/13 12:30 am Title: You And Me
I was so happy when I got the email that this was updated :) Awesome job. Please update soon!!!!
Author's Response:
Oh thank you so much lovely! I was worried no one read it anymore lol
I've already updated the next chap ("the party"- hope it's good) I'm just waiting for it to be validated, so you should be getting another email shortly! :D
Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/23/13 08:44 pm Title: Imaginations And Explanations
ok so stacey if for her? why though? if shes going as Toms date?? im confused gah...this convo was so cute with them..lol express our love..i did some serious eye rolling on that part lol :P anyway I cant wait till you update!! dont take so long please :(
Author's Response:
Urm, you'll find out, no spoilers ;)
Hahaha, I was hoping it came across as being said jokingly, lord knows i despise the real corny stuff. Yuk. :P
AND I'M SUPER SORRY FOR TAKING SO LONG! REALLY SORRY! But I did just update a double chap! If you're still interested in the story?
Thanks for reading and reviewing love :D
Date: 08/23/13 02:52 am Title: Imaginations And Explanations
Woah, really wasn't expecting there to be that many... revelations, I guess. Wizards and witches and vampires and werewolves and Armenian wolves, haha. That's a mouthfull.
One thing I just don't get is how Shy's so calm about this whole thing. It didn't take that much convincing for her to trust him again. I mean, he is a killer, after all. And from what I gather he's got some kind of plan to either make her a lesbian, or turn her, at this party. I may be wrong, of course, haha. Somehow I do hope that she stays human for a while.
Also, I think a Tom/OFC/Bill pairing would be a bit much. So maybe Bill should get someone else.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I figured if werewolves and vamps are in the story, I may as well go full mythical fiction ;)
Hahaha, I don't think the Lesbian thing will really work out, haha, but nice guess ;) Urm, I guess she's so calm is mainly because she's still his servant, yanno, and he keeps letting her know that... There's not much she can actually DO... But I think she's still pretty aware about everything, just quietly, yanno?
Yeah, I think that about Bill too ;)
Urm, I just updated a double chap, if you're still interested :)
Thanks for reviewing love
Date: 08/22/13 07:09 pm Title: Imaginations And Explanations
i would say to give bill Bill a second OFC that would be good and leave tom and shy as it is :))) but that is up to you :))))
loved the chapter :) and cant waitfor more :))))
Author's Response:
Your advice has bee duly noted! ;) I'm sorry for the late update & reply, I did just update a double chap if you're still into the story :)
Thanks for the review
Date: 06/11/13 01:21 am Title: Thighs And Bones
omg! I sooo knew something was up with Tom, something out of this world..is Bill like this too? This was a big time filler, cant wait for the next update!...In your summary I remember reading that they dont want to change alone..sooo they meaning t&b so when is Bill going to come in more in the story.
I dont think you portrayed Bill as a homosexual I just think he really likes the other guy genuinely as a pal or is a close family friend. :P I was kinda picturing Bill and Tom with Shy :P haha! Anyway update SOON!
Author's Response:
Yes, Bill is the same :) and yes, i know Bill's been quite absent (compared to Tom's intense mentioning) I'm having touble fitting him in lol, I'm just used to writing tom and shy mainly, but i can fit it in, just got to get it all set up first, which is usually the boring bit:) BUT! he will be mentioned soon! quite a lot actually :)
Thank you for all of the feedback, lovely! It's much appreciated! :)
i just updated oxo
Date: 06/03/13 12:18 am Title: Thighs And Bones
Oooh twist!
Author's Response:
The best stories have them ;)
Thanks for the review! I appreciate it a lot!
I just updated by the way :)
oxo
Date: 06/02/13 09:30 pm Title: Thighs And Bones
More please.
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command ;) I just updated
thank you so much for the review! :) oxo
Date: 06/02/13 12:51 am Title: Thighs And Bones
First of all, awesome story. I love the characters and how its written :). As for Bill being homosexual, I dont fancy it but I can live with it lol. Its your story and you are allowed to do what you mind desires you to do. And as for sex scenes, the more descriptive they are, the happier I am lol. All my sex scenes are descriptive in my stories :) lol but like I said, you're the writer and I'm now your faithful reader :) Good job so far honey. Looking for to an update soon and also to the craziness :)
Author's Response:
Thank you love :) thank you so much for the input, there's still a lot of details i have to figure out :) so hints are appreciated :)
Lol, me too tbh, sex scenes galore! ;)
Thank you for the review, much appreciated :) I just updated<-- most likey still being validated, but hey ;)
oxo
Date: 06/01/13 10:44 pm Title: Thighs And Bones
Both, hot sex scene and Bill being into dudes is awesome with me :) Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Hahaha, thanks lovely! your input is much appreciated! Still working out everything, but i know for sure there will be sex scenes xD
thank you for reading and reviewing! i just updated oxo
Date: 06/01/13 07:50 pm Title: Eyes of Honeycomb
Hey,
I really like this story! Your way to create Shy's character is awesome. Also how you describe her interaction with the twins. Oh and another great development in the storyline is that Tom is not a Vampire, but a werewolf. I really love werewolves, but I hope it won't be a Twilight-Werewolf. His nature seems to be the one of an old schooled werewolf-type so I don't think you would make me upset by refering to him as doggie. So there's one question in my head now, why did you describe it as an Vampire-Genre? Will there be a Vampire, will it be Bill or will you have another idea? I look Forward to you answering my question through your new chapters. Now seariously your FF is good in manny ways, from the interesting storyline till your writing skills with all it's devices.
I wish you a nice weeked or more what's left of it^^
Oh and I hope you understood everything I said. English is not my mother tongue, so there could be a few mistakes in it. Also because it's 1.49am right now^^
Greetings from Germany ;)
Author's Response:
Oh thank you, lovely! :) Hahaha, i'm pretty new to all the werewolf/vampire stuff but i like werewolves too :D
Urm, i'm not a fan of twilight, haha, but there's a few forbidden love motifs in chapters to come, but i honeslty don't think they'll be much like twilight :) hopefully. I do know i would NEVER call him 'doggie' though, hahaha, he's a wolf! ;)
I've gone with the old-school Armenian Werewolf, with incy-wincy alterations, but it will all explained in the story for you my dear :) and yes, there will big a big part of vampires in there, and i'm dropping a hint here, but wizards/witches are also present, tehe, i thought if i'm entering the mythical world i may as well do it whole heartedly ;)
Your English was perfect! :D really :)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR REVIEW! i look forward to more ;)
i just updated by the way, hopefully some of your questions are answered :)
oxo
Date: 05/30/13 11:45 pm Title: Eyes of Honeycomb
Interesting very interesting indeed, I like it :D
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying it so far :D I just updated, hope you like the next chap too ;)
Thanks for reading sweet! oxo
Date: 05/21/13 06:59 pm Title: Scars And Saviours
interesting. Do continue.
Author's Response:
ahahah, i shall ;) Thanks for the review love, :) i just updated :D
Date: 05/21/13 01:06 pm Title: Scars And Saviours
I am in love with this story!(: I cant wait until the next chap!
Author's Response:
Hahahaha, well we're even then because I'm in love with your reviews! ;D
I just updated lovely oxo