Date: 08/09/13 04:37 pm Title: 9. Of Mystery Men and Fruity Drinks
You're not failing!!! Mystery guys was...Andi, maybe? I don't know. I'd like to see Gordon break away (NOT a TH song reference there) from his dad because he wants what's best for Tom.
The story doesn't suck I love it!
Author's Response: Ahaa, thanks you. And... maybe! Even with your unintended pun damn you kitty, I thought it was legit! And yes, I'd like to see what's in store for Gordon too! And thank you soo much, Boo. I LOVE YOU. *Huggles*
Date: 08/05/13 12:58 am Title: 8. Of Cowards and Kisses
Gordon and his father? I have a couple of ideas but most likely wrong.
I cannot wait to see where your taking this!
Author's Response: I would LOVELOVELOVE to hear any and every ideas you have! I can't wait to see what you think about the next one and leave an opinion or theory, I LOOOVE hearing them! *Huggles*
Date: 08/04/13 12:26 pm Title: 8. Of Cowards and Kisses
I want the grampa to die frome like a heart attack or a car crash or something quick yet painfull
Author's Response: THATTTT fire babyyyy, I don't think I'll kill him off though, as much as I'd like to see him go. We got plans for grammpa! *Huggles*
Date: 08/03/13 07:24 pm Title: 8. Of Cowards and Kisses
This was such a good chapter. I feel like Bill thinks he's in control and is going to realize that he cares for Tom as soon as they sleep together, and then he's going to be really confused and not know what to do. It's going to be a rude awakening for him probably...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this! It put a smile on my face c: I love getting reviews where people tell me what they like about it, it makes me feel like some people actually appreciate it *Huggles you and your happy review*
Date: 08/03/13 05:06 pm Title: 8. Of Cowards and Kisses
Lovelovelove
Author's Response: Loveloveloveyou. New chapter is up! *Huggles*
Date: 08/03/13 01:20 pm Title: 8. Of Cowards and Kisses
I want Bill to fuck him, and leave him. Am I a bad person? :D
Author's Response: NO. BILL'S A LITTLE HOE BAG. IT'S PERFECTLY ACCEPTABLE. But I don't think I could do that!... Or maybe I could? c;< *Huggles*
Date: 08/03/13 09:28 am Title: 8. Of Cowards and Kisses
HIYA, I GOT EVERYTHING WRONG, I LIKE TOM'S DAD. I DON'T LIKE TOM'S GRANDAD.
Gordon seems cool. He doesn't seem to be as brainwashed as I thought he was. He wants a normal life, too. I think deep inside he's fighting a battle, with the happiness he desires and what he's stuck with, poor man ;-( But the grandad makes my stomach curl, twat. (and I usually like grandad's, but Tom's is a such a BLAH)
Bill is such a babe. I would love to be his Andreas in this. Every move he makes is so calculated and thought-out, I'd honestly like to see him caught off guard and more vulnerable with the situation - just like Tom usually is.
I also lied again in my last review *shakes head in shame* Tom IS a PUSSY. Poor little fucker. If he wants it, he should grab it instead of over thinking everything through. He's so deep in denial, it kinda makes me gloomy. *Slaps Tom's head*
Seriously, on a more serious note, it's playing out so well. At the right pace with development and that makes it more realistic. Bill is still up to his antics with trying to bed Tom, but there again; we can clearly see how his feelings and motives are changing, which is fucking perfect. I love torn Bill, but I don't think he realises how torn he really is. I think it'd take until Tom sleeps with him, until he realises his actual feelings, because then it isn't just a fuck and he'll feel the difference from the other fucks he's had in the past.
*shakes pompoms* CAN BILL SPY ON TOM IN THE SCHOOL SHOWERS AND HAVE AN AGGRESSIVE WANK OVER HIM OR SOMETHING?!?!? I don't know why but that makes me swoon. The idea of Bill seeing exactly what he's gonna be working with, even though Tom doesn't know, makes my toes curl. It might make him work harder for it and when he works harder, it might make him fall quicker and realise way faster! *squeaks*
Seriously, I want Bill to grovel. Really grovel for Tom's attention if Tom starts to ignore him after this. Maybe, the grovelling doesn't work at first, but it would be cute to see Bill doing it.
PERFECT AS USUAL! :D I LOVE IT. LOVE YOU. LOVE LIFE AND LOVE EVERYTHING! I cannot wait for more, eeeek! xxxxx
Author's Response: NO ONE SHOULD LIKE TOM'S GRANDPA. HE'S A CUNT.
Gordon's the shit! You'll see later on. Although I'm punching myself in the face because you now have super inisight on this. ughugh. tom's grandad IS such a BLAH!
Lol, as I said, parts of Bill are based of me, and you can be my Andi! Just no sex xD Bill is like a litte snake, slithering and people are unaware that he's even there, sneaky slithering Bahah. Maybe we WILL see him vulnerable for once c;;
TOMI ISN'T A PUSSY. HE IS A HURTING BOY. HE HAS INNER TURMOIL TO DEAL WITH. He is deep in denial though, I'll give you that. *Slaps him too* n.n
It is playing out well? I'm just so unsure on how I'm doing! So your words always make me feel better c:c:c: I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible. If you like seeing his little changing feelings then I have a feeling you might like the little inside scoop we got of him in the new chap. c: Maybe you're right, maybe you're wrong, Love. ALL IN GOOD TIME, THOUGH!
*Grabs pom poms and shakes them for myself* NO HE CAN'T YOU LITTLE SMUT MUFFIN. I'LL TRYYYYY TO WORK SOMETHING ALONG THOSE LINES IN THE FIC SOMEWHERE, BUT FOR NOW IT HAS TO STAY ON TRACK XD But he's already working hard! Don't make the pretty boy break a sweat! xD
YOUR REVIEWS ARE PERFECT, I'M FAR FROM IT! I LOVE YOU TOO AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU'R GONNA SAY BABBEEEEE. Ekeeeeeeek!
*Huggles*
Date: 08/03/13 07:42 am Title: 8. Of Cowards and Kisses
I think that Gordon will overcome his father because Gordon wants what is best for Tom and doesn't want to live under his father's rule. I think Gordon, by what you wrote, doesn't mind that Tom's gay.
It's a wonderful story! I always anticipate more! (and it's really good to wake up and see that there's a new chapter)
Author's Response: I think that is a very close speculation you have there, Lovie! Thank you for leaving me a cute little comment, I gots a new chappie for you.. c: *Huggles*
Date: 08/01/13 09:37 am Title: 7. Of Long Lost Loves
Shit. I haven't been here. I'm just catching up now. But both Chapter's are really intriguing.
They kissed. ThEy KiSsEd. THEY KISSED. Bill was so cute during spin the bottle, but Tom turned his head at the last second and THEY KISSED. I could totally understand Bill's surprise, because I think Bill felt the need to baby him, take little steps with him, etc. But Tom turned it on it's head. Totally going for goal. He is not a pussy!
TOM; I like how Bill was practically Tom's first love, first crush, first kiss, whatever he was. That was adorable, I think Tom will dwell on that a lot. Like, trying to figure out what could have happened between them if Bill had stayed, how they've been brought together again and how he feels for Bill AGAIN second time around. Because we saw the wheels ticking in Tom's mind after he kissed Bill at the party. He's attracted to him, he was ALREADY attracted to him before he knew who WILLY was. Now knowing who Bill actually really is, from their childhood, might bring him closer to accepting how he feels? I don't know. I'm babbling as per usual.
BILL; The teasing part at the end, was so good. Bill is such a seductive person and it makes me squirm. Bill knows he's got Tom right where he wants him now, Tom was practically willing to kiss Bill when they got that close to one another. But I think it's definitely going to develop into something more than just fucking the Religious Guy, for Bill. I can see it turning already, just due to the fact that they were close and torn apart as kids, they already have that connection. They felt that raw emotion as kids for one another and I honestly think Bill was shocked to the core upon hearing who exactly Tom was and what place he played once in his life.
NEXT; What I'd like to see in future Chapter's is both of them, struggling to cope with the new knowledge they have, because I think that could honestly be key to how their feelings develop properly. It's like the push they needed. Bill was willing to fuck Tom and be on with that, he likes having that power, but I'd like to see a more confused side to Bill, with us having the impression that he usually knows what's going on and how things are going to turn out? And with Tom, I'd like to see him dwelling more on his childhood and how Bill was the first ever person to wake feelings within him.
Yep, so. These two Chapter's were amazing. Congrats on this story being featured. I love you and I can't wait for more. xxxxx
Author's Response: WHERE WERE YOOOOU?!? D': *Rips down missing posters*
THEY KISSED, YES! Bill... cute? PSH. Bill's a little shit. He's like the equivilent to raisin cookies. They be lookin like chocolate chips but as soon as you take a bite you get trust issues. #realtalk. Lol, I'm thankful for the guys who said pussy because Tom's impulse issues wouldn't have kicked in xD HE ISN'T A PUSSY THO.
This whole story literally started with the idea of Bill getting hit in the head with a bible. Legit. I was just like, 'I really want a religious Tom and Bill has to get hit in with a bible. Yeah. I like that.' xD YOU'RE NOT BABBLING, LOVE! I love your words, hehe.
Really? I thought the teasing was probably bad because I'm literally shit at writing smut, sex scenes, graphic anything really. ;D I hope you're squirming then babe, cause you'll love the next chapter! I think you're getting warm with your idea with not 'just fucking' the religious guy. Smarty pants.
I think I might either drop you and launch you in the air with the next chapter I wrote, I don't know. Things turn out kinda... ehh you'll see. Things will develop properly, but there has to be the teasing and the occasional 'incident' I mean realllyyyy!
Okie. I missed you. I loveseses you. Thank you for writing me this long as review because they make me oh so happyyyy and feel oh so motivatedddd. DON'T FUCKING LEAVE ME AGAIN. *Stabs on accident* Shit, shit shit. *Pats you awkwardly as you start to pale* Uh... Read. Love you babe... o.o *Huggles you kinda*
Date: 07/28/13 11:03 am Title: 7. Of Long Lost Loves
*crawls out from under her lurker rock and hopes you don't throw anything sharp*
Bill is such a fucking tease and I love it. But poor Tom, his little head just can't cope with it! I can see Bill confusing Tom a lot more...
Author's Response: *Pets your face with sharpened scissor blades* I would never throw anything sharp at you! *Bats eyelashes* I feel like you're a new reviewer I haven't met, so... *Hands you cookie* Hereyago! Coooookies! Bill is a tease, maybe it's what Tomi needs to get his fucking head in the game, like seriously. This kid isn't straight. Seriously. Wuht. *Huggles*
Date: 07/27/13 02:08 am Title: 7. Of Long Lost Loves
Lol I really like this chapter ^.^
Author's Response: Awweee thank you! Hopefully you enjoy the next chapter too! *Huggles*
Date: 07/27/13 12:40 am Title: 7. Of Long Lost Loves
0h lord asdkmasd such a shocking chapter!!!!!! but not only cause Bill is Willy xD but I just realized Bill has bad intentions with Tomi hahaha xD ahhhhhhh the way he talked about Tom :( wooow just wooow xO!!!!!!!!!! and then ...Andreas mother saying boytoy and all that ahhhhh mind blowing!! cant wait to know what will happen oh dear!!!!
I'm loving the twist it was really a surprise!!
The memory was so cute and beautiful but also sad!! damn that evil grandpa fuuuu
and the scene at the end!!!
Evil hot sexy Bill!!!! alsdmalsd my feelings *-----* hahah poor Tom! lol
I just imagined they coming back to the tree house and giving their beautiful friendship-love another chance asdklmasd oh G!!!!x3
amazing just amazing chapter!! thank you so much!!
Author's Response: BILL'S A WHORE! And lorrdyyyy, I hope it was shocking, I looove twists! I love Andi's mom, she's got her shit together and she knows what's up, aha. I tried to make everything as sensible as possible so I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I honestly hate Tom's grandpa and he's my own creation. Wuht. I think I might be able to add a treehouse scene somewhere in this fic if you'd like me too! c: Don't thank me love, just read and enjoy. I love getting reviews from you, they always make me smile so big and give me boosts I need to write. Suuuu happy! n.n *Huggles*
Date: 07/26/13 10:31 pm Title: 7. Of Long Lost Loves
WOAH DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!! Amazing!
Author's Response: I didn't either! WOAH. Thank you, Love! The next chapters up, I hope you enjoy! c: *Huggles*
Date: 07/26/13 01:55 pm Title: 7. Of Long Lost Loves
im liking it! i want more confused tom and bill playing mind games with him, ahhh sexy ;))
Author's Response: Really? Good! Maybe a few more mind games c; I'm kinda looking forward to the real thing ;DD *Huggles*
Date: 07/26/13 08:00 am Title: 7. Of Long Lost Loves
I want tom to know bills abusive relationship with his parents maybe that will bring him out his shell but I also want bill to have genuine feelings for tom!!!
Author's Response: I don't know where I'd let that fall into place, but I'll see if I can add it somewhere and let it take part in this. MAYBBBEEEE Bill will! c: *Huggles*
Date: 07/25/13 12:23 am Title: 1. Of First Days
This is a fucking great story. Thank you so much for writing it!
Congratulations on getting featured!! You deserve it.
Please write more!!!
Author's Response: Oh thank you! And don't thank me, just be happy that I have motivation xD I hope I deserve getting featured, I actually try sometimes! :D Ijust posted more Love, thank you. *Huggles*
Date: 07/24/13 10:42 pm Title: 6. Of Parties - Part 2
OOOOOH DEAR!!!!!!!!! LORD
first congratulations for being featured!!!!
I had your story in my waiting list to be read and was being lazy about start reading it xD!!
but when I saw it was featured, i just had to start hahah!!
and omg I just finished and I love it!!
THE KISS alsdmasd F YEAH TOM xD and thanks to the idiot that said ‘pussy’ lol it was really hot, the way you described it ahhhh askdmalsd the feels!!! but then poor Bill :( he is getting the wrong idea about it, and is going to get more hurt ;---; damn Tom but he is falling hehehhe there is hope!!!
I loved when Tom thought about his little devil on the shoulder!!! there must be a draw of this moment hahaha
I love Tom's thoughts cause in some level, I feel related to all his situation, the war in his mind is ...delicious hahaha I don't know why this word but yeah xD I would like for him to find a balance cause for me there is a part of the real Tom in both of this worlds
Your parties girl!!! you are making me feel the need to party ahahh goshhh I haven't had a real party like this one in some time *tears* but then, the curse of the alcohol hahaha it's f good while your are in the moment but then the regrets hit you, kill you, and hunt you!!! hahah but that friendly devil in the shoulder helps to feel a little better after the crazy night hahah
Thank you so much for sharing this story!!
really love it!! *U*
Author's Response: You know, this review made me so freakinggg happy! I've missed your lovely reviews, shuggums! And thank you for the congrats, I never expeceted it, actually! I'm so happy that you started reading, I'll try to finish it! I'm so happy you like it!
I'm so glad that someone said pussy too, Tomi doesn't play chicken very well! And maybe Bill has the right idea c;c;c; -hinthint- THERE IS ALWAAAAYYYSSSS HOPPEEEEEE
And there's always a devil on the big guys shoulder, but sometimes he ignores it! It's delicious? *o* I like that woorrrd hehe. I WILL PARTY WITH YOU, GIRL. I WOULD LOVE TO PARTY WITH YOOOU.
You're welcome for the story, and thank you for a moving review, annnd I LOVE YOU! *Huggles*
Date: 07/23/13 12:04 am Title: 4. Of New Awakenings
Muffins...... this story is fucking amazing so far!!! Bill reminds me a lot of myself when my mom wanted me to go to church...... with... Aj.... ewwww *shudders* lol LOVE IT
Date: 07/21/13 10:47 am Title: 6. Of Parties - Part 2
It's developing fabulously. I like your style a lot and the way you plotted the whole kiss scene was really sweet. Bill has a heart after all and is more considerate of Tom's limitations and conflicted feelings than what I would have guessed. And Tom, he is falling, oh man:-)
So, just go on the way you have so far and all will be swell.
Author's Response: Thank you soo much, puddin' You thought it was sweet? D'awe, I think I love yoou c: Bill has a heart, yes! A small, cold dark heart that wants SEXXXXX. I hope Tom's falling, I would love to see the outcome of that! c: *Huggles*
Date: 07/21/13 02:09 am Title: 1. Of First Days
i love this story! let tom know what happened to bill! aaaand: the night's not over yet! i hope that bill kisses him again this night! ;) ;)