Date: 04/17/13 04:30 pm Title: Into The Night
First I was a bit careful about you writing in you-form, but when I started to read it, it actuaklly fit here well (which is rare). I really liked this. Such a great little fic just for my taste. Everything was in thoughts and little things, not somuc of what did they say or what happened. I love to read writer diving deep into the complex love of the twins. I love the characters you wrote, they seemed to git and be very in-character. The atmosphere was heavy, but in a good way. Like all their life was suffocating them under the surface.- How big their secret was, how complicated. Yet it was everything to them and the little unspoken things were just making it more realistic, more painful. I can't explain how painful can be good, but the bittersweetness in everything they say or do makes this so emotional to read. Good job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! That's exactly how I wanted the readers to feel; I really like how you explained it. But really, thank you so much. :) :) :)
Date: 04/17/13 04:47 am Title: Into The Night
Very well written, but definitely in need of a sequel! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! Ha, I'll have to think about it if I have enough free time. :)
Date: 04/16/13 04:00 pm Title: Into The Night
This was sad but lovely. So poignant. Excellent writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really appreciate it. :)
Date: 04/16/13 11:18 am Title: Into The Night
That was nice ;) even if for Bill it isn't too comfortable situation, Tom somehow knows how to act. And maybe he feels the same? I'm waiting for more
Author's Response: I think he definitely feels the same. :) Thank you.
Date: 04/16/13 10:09 am Title: Into The Night
This story was so poignant. You have a real way with words and I can totally see why you got a first. Very well done! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :)