Date: 05/02/13 01:29 pm Title: Of muffins and other half baked things
I have a big, HUGE problem with this story... :( And it is.... that is't not never-ending D:
I love it so much, I am soo excited when I see every new update and then so sad when the chapter is over. I think I am addicted and am afraid there is no cure for that.
It was awesome.
You won't stop surprising me. I mean, I would never think that Tom won't enjoy sex with his partner, but your Tom is a special case. And I love it. He is sooo ... Dumb and cute and adorable, poor little thing, little cute kitten, I want to squeeze him tight. :D I had fun reading about your Tom :)
And your Bill... I love him too. He was cooking, wow, he heard probably, that love goes trough stomach, so he's is trying really hard to make Tom happy lol. He even didn't comment that little problem Tom had, this is looove.
I have no idea what will happen next, don't want Bill to leave /only if you promise me some good video skype sex ;)/
Because Bill is a sexgod, I doubt he can live so long without any skin to skin contact, poor Tom, I don't want see him crying. But I really would like to see him bottoming, whoops, sorry Tom :D
Thank you for this chapter, I read it more than once and it made my morning and my day! :)
Author's Response: Aw, your reviews do the same :)I´ll take note of that skype sex thing ;)
Date: 05/01/13 11:48 pm Title: Of muffins and other half baked things
Oh my!! Oh my! So many things happened! Poor Tom, not knowing anything about their relationship and Bill not making easy on him. But actually, What's Bill's opinion about Tom? or about what it's happening between them... It's king of weir not know what Bill thinks sometimes, is he really in love? or he justo don't know what it is? Okay, I'll just wait.
Thank u so much for this chapter :D make my night so I will go to sleep happy. Till next one!! Kissus
Date: 05/01/13 10:41 pm Title: Of muffins and other half baked things
This was a tense chapter. Poor Tom. Just get out with it!
Love these boys, love the story! Cannot wait for more!
Date: 05/01/13 04:24 pm Title: Of muffins and other half baked things
Great chapter! I can't wait to find out what's next for them.
Date: 04/14/13 04:06 pm Title: Of a bright new morning
I've been of this site for a while, why does RL get in the way? And I only read Give Me Your Guns last week... So I was extremely excited to be scrolling through recently updated and seeing this!
Tom really does have a way of digging himself into holes, does he not?
If you are in need of a beta desperately, I would be happy to help out. I'm a native english speaker, so I could help with spelling and basic grammar.
Last note, I think you've missed a word out in this sentence. 'He set it down on the nightstand, right next to cell phone.' Unless his phone it being called Cell Phone, then I would write it as 'right next to his cell phone.' =)
Author's Response: Thanks, you´re right. And yes, Tom is really an expert in digging himself into holes, it almost comes naturally... ^^
Date: 04/14/13 02:09 pm Title: Of a bright new morning
Oh My!! I was like 'Oh my God! Oh my God!' for almost fifteen minutes when I saw it! I just didn'e know if you'll post the secuel of Give Me your Guns, and everyday I hoped for it, and here it is! Thanks so much! And... Tom can't remember cos Bill hit him hard? Hahah I like the chapter, hope to see another soon ;)
Author's Response: Oh my God, what have I done XD
Date: 04/14/13 01:38 pm Title: Of a bright new morning
Ah, sequel. I had only reread the story on Friday! Let's see what you have in store for those two!
Date: 04/14/13 01:24 pm Title: Of a bright new morning
Ah, a sequel! Yay! And I see what you mean, you're obviously a very talented writer, but you did get a bit lost in some of the sentences, structure-wise. I hope you manage to find a beta, I'd offer, but I'm honestly not sure I'd have the time. :/ Either way, I think we're all excited to see what happens next! You've done the impossible (or taboo) and created a Bill character that's hard to like, that in itself sets your story apart.
Author's Response: ...sometimes I wonder whether I did that because I´m kind of convinced that the real Bill would be hard to like, too, if you got really close to him.rnrnYou´ve got mail, too, btw:)
Date: 04/14/13 11:15 am Title: Of a bright new morning
SO HAPPY to see a sequel being posted. It's exciting to see these characters back again, and I can't wait to "see" Bill appear. I'm very curious to see this develop...
If you still need a beta, I could offer to help if you'd like. I'm a native speaker, but I'm not necessarily a good writer. I could just check for things like spelling and grammar and basic stuff, but nothing fancy (but honestly, I think you're perfectly fine without a beta.)
Author's Response: You´ve got mail :)
Date: 04/14/13 09:51 am Title: Of a bright new morning
I'm sooo happy!!!
Great chapter wish the next one is coming soon. X)
Date: 04/14/13 05:47 am Title: Of a bright new morning
There is a SEQUEL! I'm so happy!
Loved the chapter!
Date: 04/14/13 05:22 am Title: Of a bright new morning
Omg you are back. I was thinking about you and this story this week! and I am so excited the sequel is here! :)
The chapter was great, I was reading impatiently what has Tom done.... And he proposed Bill. Wow. He has some balls :D. Can't wait to meet Bill in the next chapter, I missed your boys so much!
Thank you very much for this surprise, you made my day, seriously :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you XD I missed them, too, and they wouldn´t let me alone till I started this^^
Date: 04/14/13 04:56 am Title: Of a bright new morning
A SEQUAL! YOU MADE MY DAY! Great first chapter, I'm SO excited to see how it goes on!! :)
Date: 04/14/13 03:44 am Title: Of a bright new morning
Amazing opening chapter! Super curious to see what Bill's reaction will be. :D
Date: 04/14/13 03:36 am Title: Of a bright new morning
Of all ways to start it! hahaha. killer opening! I'm really looking forward to this progressing!!
Date: 04/14/13 01:49 am Title: Of a bright new morning
I'm betting Bill remembers!
Date: 04/14/13 01:34 am Title: Of a bright new morning
I am excited about this sequel! It is a wonderful chapter and I am ready for more :)
Date: 04/14/13 12:17 am Title: Of a bright new morning
i like it and i'm curious about the whole situation, especially what Bill told Tom since he doesn't remember hahha
and of course i'm waiting for more
Date: 04/13/13 11:13 pm Title: Of a bright new morning
I'm so excited for this sequel! Fantastic way to begin it :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope the wait wasn´t too bad.
Date: 04/13/13 11:02 pm Title: Of a bright new morning
oooooooooo i cant wait for more
Author's Response: ...^^