Date: 06/15/13 01:26 pm Title: Of a bright new morning
Found your stories today, and been reading through all 14 chapters of Give me your guns and the 3 chapters of this one without a break. Love it. Thank you so much for sharing. Hoping for an update soon
Author's Response: Wow, thank you :)
Date: 06/08/13 06:05 pm Title: Of Hello Kitty
Oh my! Bill will leave soon and Tom is still trying to keep him... I kind of know how he's feeling, Bill is a bitch and he likes men, a lot, so he's leaving where he can do whatever he wants, without Tom, I just... I don't like the thing about "we'll be over in three months" If Bill had been staying, he can't be still faithful over there? Poor Tom! And then Bill that just run off after what Tom said, heartbroken, that's what I say.
Thanks for the chapter :D Didn't see it before xD wiii Mke my wknd! Thanks!!
Date: 06/07/13 08:53 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
Gaaaaah i'm so glad i found the sequel! You're an amazing writer. Xx
Date: 06/02/13 04:08 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
Loved the first story, love this sequel! The characters are so realistic, so naturally written. Poor Average Tom, getting in over his head (heart?) with an emotionally complex, emotionally introverted man. Tom seems to be floundering, having so much trouble with a relationship outside the typical norm. He's a simple guy. Bill is way out there. But they're both trying so hard to adapt and make it work, from their own understanding. Well, I see Bill actually trying a lot harder than Tom. Which says a lot. And at least Gustav sees it, too! I hope the lack of reviews !!! don't get it!!! don't make you step back from this. It's an excellently written story, the characters are just so interesting. Hope to see lots more! I'm not one for reviewing every chapter, but I'll be here, and i'll try to remember to write at least a few lines. This story is needed - there just aren't a lot of good ones out there, so please keep going!
Date: 06/01/13 03:58 pm Title: Of a bright new morning
well, we need to work on their communication, I'd say.
wonderful chapter...their relationship still seems so weird :D, so....them.
but boy, that got serious fast.,arriage, kids and talking about that with Bill of all men oO Tom, I hope you're prepared!
Date: 05/31/13 11:28 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
this story is so good. bill fustrates me soooo much. i can only imagine how tom feels
Date: 05/30/13 04:45 pm Title: Of Hello Kitty
"For a few moments the room was silent except for the low cheer for the one and only strawberry panna cotta yogurt, now back in stores after the winter break." - perfect comic relief moment to dissolve some of the tension. I really wish I knew what was going on inside Bill's brain... He and Tom both seem so far out of their comfort zones and as much as I love their characters being together in this story it seems like they both have to compromise a lot for the other and neither are getting what they truly want out of a relationship. I think they need to talk. But do I think they will talk? Probably not. But that's ok, because instead of talking they'll probably fuck and I'm cool with that.
Date: 05/29/13 02:23 pm Title: Of Hello Kitty
I can't have enough! Everyday you update it's like holiday :).
I can't wait to read more. Want to know what will Bill do. I would love to see into his head, I am quite sure that he loves Tom, his behavior is suspicious. :D
And this, this was awesome :D
"Bill would leave in three months. They would be
over in three months. Which meant that they had arrived in the last quarter of their relationship. Considering that, it was actually
high time to discuss starting a family." Tom is a cutie :D absolutely lovable :)
Date: 05/29/13 02:18 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
I look forward to each new chapter! Bills walls are beginning to crack a little I believe. Really looking forward to next update =)
Date: 05/28/13 04:13 pm Title: Of a bright new morning
Want one of Bill's chocolate muffins & more cuddling.
Date: 05/28/13 01:32 pm Title: Of Hello Kitty
Feel proud ! It's my first review here :)
I'm french so I never felt confident enough in my english to say what I think but I don't like when people start to doubt in what they are doing so I'm giving it a shot :)
Your story is perfect so far. I like the fact that they are so humanly imperfect, it's make the story Line more realistic. So, keep your good job ! :)
I would say more but I don't know how to put my word together xD
Date: 05/28/13 10:27 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
I wonder what's going through Bill's head. I am glad that Tom finally bit the bullet. Things like that should not be left hanging.
Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!
Date: 05/28/13 09:10 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
I really love this and I can't wait til the next update!
Date: 05/28/13 08:42 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
I like this story a lot and got really excited when I noticed that you updated it! Awh, I hope they'll be able to work out this situation!
Hope you'll update soon. :D
Date: 05/28/13 06:56 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
this story is my fav.thank you so much .you are writing verry well.congrats!
Date: 05/28/13 03:58 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
I'm commenting because I want to assure you that people out there (such as me) love this story. (It's just that sometimes I'm just that lazy that a quick comment seems like too much work.) I'm so glad you're writing this sequel to the first part because I fell in love with this story back then. It's really well written and the characters are nicely developed. I look forward to the next update :)
Date: 05/28/13 03:09 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
Love it! Waiting for next update :)
Date: 05/28/13 03:06 am Title: Of Hello Kitty
Loved the chapter :) and I really hope you don't decide to give up on this because I can't wait to see where you end up going with it
Date: 05/22/13 01:21 am Title: Of muffins and other half baked things
I'm so glad you decided to continue the original story (which I loved, and can't remember leaving a review for. But I did love it). I really enjoy how you write Bill and Tom in this (and in the previous fic)...and you will be updating again, I hope? :)
Date: 05/03/13 11:11 am Title: Of muffins and other half baked things
I feel like I got no answers in this chapter and yet now there's 10 million more questions. But that's okay, I kind of like it that way. I hope there's an update soon?
Author's Response: Only 10 million? Ghee, I have to try harder...rnrnI expect updates to come a little faster once there is an "editing routine". Until then IŽd better not promise too much.