Date: 05/01/13 07:58 am Title: Mummy's little man
I'm still not sure how I feel about this fic. It's strange as I usually know pretty early. It's like Idk if it makes me sad or what. There are such painful emotions and things happening, really tragic, yet it's somehow wrapped in almost gentle, beautiful tone. It's really interesting. Btw, the abuse part was smt I didn't expect, but it fits. Pretty brutal, confusing. I fully understand the complex emotions Bill is feeling. Very emotionally challenging fic.
Author's Response: I do think it might be confusing in many ways, and I do see what you mean, with beeing both tragic and gentle at the same time. Some parts, like the abuse, is brutal, absolutly, I tried to write them like that too, to burst in and to some even shock. I hope you will keep reading this and I hope you will like it in the end. Maybe it's also harder to figuer it all out even emitionally as you only read those parts? Thank you so much for taking your time to read it, it means a lot to me!
Date: 04/27/13 12:03 pm Title: Paris
Not sure how I missed you posting the first chapter, but I've now read both of them. As usual you manage to get me all emotional. Poor Bill, feeling so alone with his great secret and hating himself so intensly. I'm really glad he managed to tell Georg, and Georg's final thoughts are so sweet. Did Georg cry because he was so shocked, or because he suddenly saw his relationship with Jenny being in danger? I know he loves Bill but he must have given up thinking they could seriously be an item. Is Jenny a stand in for Bill or does he have genuine feelings for her? I guess the real OMFG moment will be when Bill tells Tom. And the whole abuse thing with Simone using Tom was horrible. Mother/son is a form of sexual abuse that not considered as much as other kinds, I think. This story is going straight to my favourites now I've found it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you found it now :) About Georg, I really don't know, I guess it's up to you to tell? I would think it is a mix of it all, and maybe out of concern for Tom, too? As Georg does care so much about him too? I do think he got some deeper feelings for Jenny, even if Bill is "the love of his life", but Jenny might be the next best thing? I really don't know for myself. And yeah, telling Tom won't be so easy, I suppose. I think it's over all something we tend to forget about, moteher/son abuse, even though just as many women are pedophils as men. But I guess there are something almost holly about mothers, they are supposed to be kind and loving? I hope you will like the rest of this story too, thank you so much for reading and reviweing!
Date: 04/26/13 11:40 pm Title: Mummy's little man
Oh, wow, their mother is really messed up in this story and messed both Bill and Tom. Poor boys.
I like how tender and loving Georg with Bill. I love that "But who is a part of Bill. And to Georg that is the only thing that really matters."
Great chapter! Cannot wait for more.
Author's Response: Yes, she is pretty messed up here. I'm so glad you like it, that is also one of my favorit lines in this part and this whole story is very special to me so I'm really happy someone like it too. I hope it won't take so long, I guess that is the only good thing with having no one to beta- you don't need to wait! LoL. I know my English is poor, but I keep trying :)
Date: 03/30/13 12:20 pm Title: Paris
As I promised, here I am. :)
First of all, this is clearly you, your way of writing, your words and your style. It is true that since I haven't read SOTR, the details of the previous part are mostly unknown to me (I did read the firt chapter or two you emailed me once). But I think it's relatively easy to jump on the wagon on that part. Now I try to do it also emotionally. Very emotional, sad start. Well, not sadm, but melancholic. I think we can expe4ct lot of drama...
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you found time to read this! And yeah, I guess so, it really is a very Kaa-story, and my favorite of them all. I think there are a few things that is good to know though, that Bill has some kind of eating dissoder is clear even here, I guess (even if the built-up to this is in the other stroy.) Simone have had a hard time dealing with the fact that Bill isn't just a boy, and few others than the family knows about this. Bill has tried to find a way to "be only male" so this is the last thing he wanted. And the child can just as well be Tom's as Georg's. And yes, I can promise you lots, and lots of drama ;-)
Date: 03/30/13 02:17 am Title: Paris
Poor Bill... Please make him happy.
I guess the baby will make Bill not lonely. Is the baby George's?
I am very intrigued by this universe. I am glad that there is this sequel and looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel sorry for Bill here too, poor boy :( He doesn't know, as you might have read in the end of SOTR Bill had sex with both Tom and Georg by the time he got pregnant, so he really have no idea. rnI'm so glad you found this serie, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/29/13 09:19 pm Title: Paris
ohhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! super!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
my name is Jenny but that Jenny is aghhhhhhhhhhhhh XD
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you found this too! And well, I don't think she is that bad, but she really is in the way for Bill, that's for sure :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!