Date: 11/03/13 01:23 pm Title: Repaying A Debt
why would her friend take the time with Bill away from her . hope she not going after him . She would be better matched to Tom . It was good that he was able to smoooooooth things over with her father . good chapter , please update soon .
Author's Response: don't worry: it will make more sense as you read on- Severine is actually a much more intricate and complicated character than she seems
Date: 10/08/13 10:34 pm Title: When She Cries
aaaaaawwwww glad she met jacob so she wouldn`t be alone . to bad that Bill and her friend r ignoring her . please update soon .
Author's Response: i will- i have to update at least every two weeks for my teacher so i'll keep up :-)
Date: 10/08/13 10:25 pm Title: I'm Not As I Seem
oh no hope her friend isn`t going to take Bill away from her .she could have anyone she wants , please not Bill.
Author's Response: Severine just likes to flirt and mess around with everybody- she just enjoys making other people uncomfortable and angry
Date: 10/08/13 10:11 pm Title: Expect The Unexpected
wat a nice morning . so nice she met Bill for breakfast and it seemed like she had good time . lov this
Author's Response: i love you for reviewing!!!
Date: 10/08/13 09:59 pm Title: Rise Above
so we finally meet Bill , so sweert of him asking her to dance . loved the dress that was brought to her . bet she looked gorgous in it . loving this story so far .
Author's Response: thank you so much!!! i've missed seeing your reviews :-)
Date: 05/05/13 01:41 am Title: Expect The Unexpected
awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: thak you so much! im finishing up the next chapter :-)
Date: 05/03/13 11:27 am Title: Expect The Unexpected
really great :D
Author's Response: aww, thank you so much!!! :-)
Date: 05/03/13 03:28 am Title: Expect The Unexpected
loooooved the chapters :)
and cant wait for mkoooooooooord :)
please update sooooooooooon :)
Date: 03/30/13 07:13 pm Title: Sunrise, Sunset
interesting beginig :D:D:D
cant wait for moooore :)