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Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/13 01:04 pm Title: two.

Ohhhh *huggles the twinsies*

The hospital should've taken them out back! They know Bill isn't stable enough to handle all that! They could've let them leave from the ER or even a service entrance! Shame on them.

Fantastic chapter. I can't wait for next week.

Author's Response: Thank you, love. Glad you enjoyed it. =3

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/13 12:35 pm Title: two.

Very interesting story! Cannot wait to read more! Poor Bill...

Author's Response: Thank you, love. =3

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/13 12:15 pm Title: two.

Poor bill :((

Author's Response: Hmm, yes indeed! Thank you for reading. =3

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/13 10:54 am Title: one.

Yup, that was the spot I meant. And now that you explained it, it does make sense the way it is. I just read it oddly

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/13 09:25 am Title: one.

This is a very sad beginning, but very well written. I'm not sure I understand why Bill said 'Bil' when he opened his eyes, unless that was a left over remnant from an earlier version where Tom was the one who escaped?...and the anorexia/bulimia might've been a little abruptly introduced, but I think I'm going to like this.

Author's Response: Do you mean this? -- "Bill?" My memory gasped.rnrnThat was actually Tom that said that, but I'm sorry for the confusion. Thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/13 01:26 am Title: one.

WOW. I am completely mesmerized by this already and I will be anxiously waiting for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! =3

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/13 12:47 am Title: one.

Tomi always taking care of Bill. I really hope Bill's master doesn't come looking. Bill deserves to be with TOm now.

Author's Response: Bill deserves a little good in his life, doesn't he? Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/13 04:19 pm Title: one.

Holy crap, what happened to poor Bill? I need him to stop hating himself asap or I'm going to get sad! <3 poor finger and toes :/



Author's Response: All shall be revealed! =3 Thanks for reading.

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