Date: 04/23/13 11:23 am Title: Chapter 6
That was nice ;) so Tom is confused, hmm....well, good that even this a little awkwardness he stayed next to Bill and didn't tell him to leave him hehe
Author's Response: Hey :) thanks a lot for your review! rnYes ... Tom is confused by his own feelings! That must be strange ^^ rnGreetings rnCrazzy1989
Date: 04/16/13 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
hmmm...maybe there would be something that was hidden before now Tom would see. well, he even saw how Bill was looking at him and Tom can't imagine Bill with someone other than him....i'm waiting for more
Author's Response: Hello Hexy92rnthanks for your feedback! :) rnHope you'll enjoy the next chapter!rn
Date: 04/11/13 06:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Great story and your English is really good.
Author's Response: Hallo, thanks a lot for your review! So good to hear that you like my English :) Means a lot! Have a nice day!
Date: 04/03/13 03:55 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh just what i expected..well one of two options i did mention lol..
Let s see what Bill is gonna do now..
hugs
TL
Author's Response: Hey :) thanks for your review! And yes you were right! ;)
Date: 04/03/13 03:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Hey,
seems like the guys just started dating hahaha. candlelight dinner always leads to xxx or fight :/ lets see what happens next!
hugs
TL
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 04/03/13 01:46 am Title: Chapter 3
Tell him Bill. It might not be as bad as you think.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your feedback! :)
Date: 04/03/13 12:12 am Title: Chapter 3
wow, i just can't wait to read about what will happen next
Date: 04/03/13 12:12 am Title: Chapter 3
wow, i just can't wait to read about what will happen next
Author's Response: Hey Hexy92! :) Thank you for your review! I hope that you will like the new chapter! Have fun! Greetings ;)
Date: 04/02/13 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it ^_^
Author's Response: Hey :) that's good to hear! I hope you'll like the next chapter too!
Date: 04/02/13 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
Luxembourg is the tiny little landlocked country right? I didn't realize you had your own language...honestly I thought you were another english speaking country. Thank you for enlightening me.
I liked this chapter. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Hey :) thanks for your review! Yes, Luxembourg is the little landlocked country in Europe, between Belgium, France and Germany! :) Not many people know that we have an own language!
Date: 03/27/13 01:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Just read and I really like this, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Hey :)rnGood to hear that you like it so far! Thanks for your feedback!
Date: 03/26/13 10:20 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking it so far. Their awkward embarassment is very evident. Keep up the very nice work.
Btw, what is your native language?
Author's Response: Hello :)rnthanks for your review! rnI'm actually from Luxembourg and my native language is Luxembourgish, but outside of our country nearly nobody understands it! We learn German in school very early and therefore I'm mostly writing in German! :)
Date: 03/22/13 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This seems very interesting, it is definitely well written. Please update soon! yuforever
Author's Response: Hey :) thanks for reviewing! So good to hear that you find it well written! I'm not a native speaker and I really want to do a good job writing an english fanfiction! Not that easy! ;) I'll update every tuesday!
Date: 03/21/13 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey hey, nice chap. looking forward for the next one ;)
luv
T.
Author's Response: Hey :) thanks for reading and helping me find a few silly mistakes xD fighting ^^ you know what I mean! <3
Date: 03/21/13 03:27 am Title: Chapter 1
kay.... muy interesante, me gusto el into...
Ánimos y nos vemos el el siguiente capítulo!
Author's Response: Heyyy ^^ my first review in spanish :) muy bien! I understand a little bit ^^ I used to have spanish in school, but that was a long time ago ;) I can still read it, but I can't write much anymore! :/ Have fun with chapter 2!
Date: 03/21/13 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Twins :( they are both too scared to really talk to eachother. I hope that can change.
Author's Response: Hello :)rnthank you for your review! :)
Date: 03/20/13 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
nice beginning but not the kinda broken connection between twins
Author's Response: Hey :) thanks for commenting! You are right, the broken connenction betweeen the twins is depressing! :/
Date: 03/20/13 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmm...well. its a decent start, but I'm not sure what I think about it yet. Its a bit too short and soon for me to have a good feel for it yet. A word of advice, you might want to reread through the chapters before you post them. There are a few 'silly' mistakes that would've been noticed on a review. Keep up the nice work, I look forward to seeing more!
Author's Response: Hey ladyX! Thanks a lot for your review! Yes, the first chapters are a bit short! They will be longer at the end, 2000 - 2500 words ... but only from chapter 25 on! I also reread Chapter 1 and found a few mistakes! I hope I didn't miss to many :/ I'm not a native speaker and it's not so easy to write a good english! So if you have more advice, just let me know! I would love to ameliorate my writing! :) Cya!
Date: 03/20/13 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it ^_^
Author's Response: Hey ^^ thanks, that's good to hear! I hope you will like the rest of the story too ;)
Date: 03/20/13 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it nd I love the fact that its done so that u would never b able to drop it >< update sooon~~~
Author's Response: Hey :) thanks a lot for your review! :) The first one! yeah ;) Well I will update the story every tuesday! I understand what you mean ^^ I don't like unfinished stories either! Sometimes you simply love a story and you can't wait for it to go on, but then it never does! That's absolutely frustrating!