Date: 08/21/13 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
Blushing bill so cute hhahahahahh .....!!! Please update soon love this ........!!!!
Author's Response: Hey Tokitaalien! :)rnThanks for your review! ;) rnTook me a while to update, but I will be quicker soon!rnGreetings, Crazz1989
Date: 08/07/13 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
haaaaaaaaaahahaha poor Bill!!!!!! omg lololol
loved this part "Bill closed his eyes, imagining Tom undressing him slowly. A pleasant shiver ran down his back and he couldn’t suppress a low moan. " hothothot xD
and this "He just wanted it to be intimate, tender and passionate. "
so cute *u* awesome chapter!! Thanks!
Author's Response: Hey :) rnthanks a lot for your review! Loved it! ^^ rnGood to hear that you liked the new chapter! Hope you'll like the next one too! Let me know! rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 07/24/13 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh my gosh! I am addicted to this story. It makes my heart hurt for them...
Author's Response: Hey TuesdayTeyn!rnThanks a lot for your review! :) Very happy to hear that you like the story! rnHope to hear from you again!rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 07/05/13 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
thanks for the update, beautiful chapter ;)
Author's Response: Hey Gol1,rnthanks a lot for your feedback! :) Hope you are going to like the next chapters too! rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 06/26/13 10:59 am Title: Chapter 11
Please update soon th tension is killing me softly .....!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey ^^ sorry, I acutally wanted to post an answer to your last review, but I was too fast and send it out empty! Couldn't find where to change it, so I write you here! ^^ Thanks for your review! And here you go with the next chapter! Greetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 06/26/13 10:57 am Title: Chapter 11
Keep going is an awesome story
Author's Response: Hey tokitaalien :)rnthanks a lot for your reviews! :) Posted the next chapter a few minutes ago, should be online soon! :)rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 06/19/13 09:08 am Title: Chapter 11
Hi, I have to say from reading the summary I didn't expect this to happen, y'know? Although I love it anyway? I just read all eleven Chapters now and I think it's really interesting.
Yeah so, I really love your writing style, your ability to describe the mood and emotion is amazing. I love the storyline so far, it's gripping and I'm hooked. I admire your skills to bring the situation to surface as well as the technique you've used to keep it going, making the reader want much more.
I really admire the realistic side of this story, I could totally imagine Bill on the verge of breakdown for months because of how he feels. It's obviously not a walk in the park for him. I also think Tom freaking out and walking out on Bill is realistic because he would be freaked out if Bill touched him in his sleep, y'know? I'm not sure about the near-rape-situation(?) but it certainly was interesting to read and interesting to see how far he would take it.
When I was reading it, I was like "SHIT, NO BABY NO, STAHP. OH MY FUCKING GAWD, SHIT." I really can't wait for more, this is amazing. Thank you, xxxxx
Author's Response: Hello Peaches,rnwell I'm speechless, thanks a lot for your amazing review! :) Means a lot, really! rnYeah, it was quite difficult to write the summary, the first chapters are about the boys coming together, but the whole rest of the story will be about the mysterious man (apparing in chapter 23, if I remember it correctly), however thanks for going on with reading the story and giving it a chance! :) rnrnThanks for your compliment about my writing style! :) So good to hear, I'm always very worried about everything I write, as I'm not a native speaker! ^^ rnrnHope you will like the rest of the story too! :)rnrnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 06/18/13 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
wow. that's good Tom didn't do anything to Bill but why he even hided what he felt? ehh....hopefully they will talk about and try to do something with it
Author's Response: Hey Hexy92,rnthanks for you review! :) rnHope you'll like the next chapter!rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 06/12/13 02:09 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG *_____* CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
Author's Response: Hey Gol1, thanks for your review! Here's the next chapter! rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 06/11/13 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
wow....that was shocked but i'm curious what Tom told Bill that made him cry more.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks a lot for your review!rnHave fun with the next chapter!rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 06/05/13 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow, this is certainly not even close (yet) to what I was hoping for from the summary. Unfortunately, I am highly disappointed with the events in this chapter and what is further alluded to in regards to upcoming actions from Tom. Definitely not the story I was hoping for; please note that this somewhat critical review is not aimed at your ability just the current direction. I do, however, wish you well with this story.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your feedback! Don't worry about saying your opinion, nothing wrong with that! I'm sorry that you don't like the story! Hope you'll find some other's fitting your interests! The content described at the beginning will only start around chapter 24 ... Thanks for you whishes! Bye :)
Date: 06/04/13 09:32 am Title: Chapter 9
i'm kinda scared to think what Tom has in mind hehe poor Bill
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your review! Yeah, poor Bill! :/
Date: 05/09/13 11:27 am Title: Chapter 8
I can't believe Tom still walked away when he could see how distraught Bill is. And he is such a fucking hypocrite. He's the one who wanted Bill to sleep with him, and he was having all these sexual feelings about Bill, and then because Bill's the one who acted on those kind of feelings he's using his twin as a verbal punching bag, taking out his own insecurities on his twin. Bill did mess up though by admitting he thought Tom was asleep. I guess Tom had a right to be pretty outraged by that, although he should have admitted he was actually awake...and enjoying the touching! Oh, how will the twins make up and get to a place where they both want the same kind of relationship? Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Hey heleng!rnThanks a lot for your review and sorry for the delay! :/ Tom is a hypocrite; you're right! Unfortunately he is quite stubborn and is unable to see behind his anger! Hope you like the next chapter! Greetings :) Crazzy1989
Date: 05/02/13 09:34 am Title: Chapter 7
Omg, I can't believe what just happened haha
The way Bill touched Tom and the way Ton enjoyed it, he reacted like that...ooo, poor Bill. But I hope Tom wouldn't hate him forever for that
Author's Response: Hey Hexy92,rnthanks a lot for your review! :) rnMaybe Bill will be able to make sure that Tom won't hate him forever! rnHave fun with the new chapter!rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 05/02/13 02:18 am Title: Chapter 7
Well crap!!! :-( Tom why do you have to be such a baby sometimes. YOu liked what Bill was doing... why do you have to go and freak out?!
Author's Response: Hey asahi,rnthanks a lot for your feedback! I wish Tom could hear you! :) because you are so right, he is behaving like a baby! ;) Hope to hear from you again!rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 05/01/13 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, Tom, you coward! He was enjoying Bill touching him, and the feeling panicked him so he lashed out at Bill. So unfair of him to take his uncertainties out on his twin. Now he must've made Bill feel like he's a complete perverted freak for touching his big brother like that while he thought Tom was sleeping. Bad news. This is going to take a lot to make things right between them. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hey heleng,rnyou are absolutely right! Tom is a coward and he is acting unfair! rnThanks a lot for your lovely review!rnGreetings! Crazzy1989
Date: 04/25/13 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
Loved Tom's questioning, but he didn't quite get the straight answer he was looking for, did he? Bill was a bit put out that Tom assumed he was a bottom. It made Tom have to think again, though, especially since he's attracted to his twin - even though he's so deep in denial. If Bill likes to top, what would that mean for Tom if they were ever together...poor Tom, not sure he'd be very happy about that idea. But for now he's safe, anyway, because he won't even admit to himself he's attracted to his baby brother. I'm wondering when the light bulb will go off in his head and he'll really realise and have to accept that's what going on with him. Another great chapter.
Author's Response: Helloe heleng,rnthanks a lot for your review! :) rnYou are right, Tom didn't hear what he wanted to know! ;) rnAnd yes, he is still very deep in denial, more about his feelings in the next chapter!rnGreetingsrnCrazzy1989
Date: 04/24/13 01:36 am Title: Chapter 6
Well, there getting closer to admiting how they really feel at least.
Author's Response: Hello :) thanks a lot for your review! rnHave fun with Chapter 7, greetingsrnCrazzy1989
Date: 04/23/13 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
I dunno what to say :P
well written and catchy xD
TL
Date: 04/23/13 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Interessting chaper..
and on it goes ;)
TL
Author's Response: :) ThanksrnLove you