Date: 09/24/13 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 22
omg ...noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why do u always lesve it in such a interesting place .....daaammmnnnnn ...sigh i guess until next time
Author's Response: Hey tokitaalien! Thanks for your review ^^ and sorry for the cliffhanger ;) Hope you will enjoy the next chapter! Greetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 09/24/13 09:14 am Title: Chapter 22
That was nice ;) I guess with Bill, Tom isn't scare to try with him new things
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your review! :) You are right, Tom isn't scared at all! :) Have fun with the next chapter! ;) Greetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 09/20/13 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 21
They are sweet. They seem young and naive, but sweet.
Author's Response: Hey violet_star77, thanks for your review! :) Yes, at the moment they still seem young and naive, but the bad things going to happen will change them soon enough! Greetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 09/18/13 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 21
I liked this update it was so sweet the relationship between the twins is adorable I can't wait for the guy to enter the chapter tho!!!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your review! :) Glad you like the sweet relationship between the boys! The bad guys are coming soon ^^ 2-3 chapters to go! Greetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 09/18/13 11:01 am Title: Chapter 21
super :)
Author's Response: Hey Hexy92, thanks for commenting! :) Have fun with the next chapter! Crazzy1989
Date: 09/15/13 03:27 am Title: Chapter 20
Awesome can't wait for the next one :)
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Date: 09/12/13 09:24 am Title: Chapter 20
Nice ;) good they had so much fun there Ana enjoyed every moment before they'll start their crazy schedule and after everything in the past
Author's Response: Hey Hexy92! Hope you are alright! :) Thanks for your review! Have fun with the new chapter! Crazzy1989
Date: 09/11/13 04:24 am Title: Chapter 19
They are so cute. I m glad they are going to get some carefree moments before things get ugly. No need to give things away, you answered my main question, no main character death.
Luxembourg huh? That's very cool. I'm boring, in the US. West coast. Did get to see TH live once though. =) Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Hey violet_star77! rnThanks for your feedback! :) The twins will have a few more good moments before anything happens ;) Glad I could answer your main question! ^^ Yeah, Luxembourg ^^ a very small, but cute country! Good to hear that you saw the boys live already! I was on a concert in Zürich, Switzerland in 2010! Can't wait for the next concerts to come! :)
Date: 09/05/13 11:36 am Title: Chapter 19
Awwwww ..... a week ...fine but I will wait very patiently. ... :D
Author's Response: Hi tokitaalien! :)rnI'm sorry that it took me a bit longer! :/ rnHope you will like the chapter anyways! :)rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 09/04/13 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 19
Bill's gonna be a really good "housewife" hehe
well, for sure they will enjoy theirs picnic :)
Author's Response: Hey Hexy92! :)rnYeah ^^ Bill would be the perfect "housewife" ;) rnHope you will like the next chapter!rnGreetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 09/03/13 06:04 am Title: Chapter 18
There is a chunk of repeated text in this chapter.
I'm looking forward to tracking this. Its been fun and light, so I'm a little scared for the next part. Are we going to get a happy ending eventually? Are all the warnings up or will new ones pop up as the story develops?
Author's Response: Hello violet_star77!rnWow, thanks a lot for all of your reviews! :) Liked them a lot! :) rnI'm very happy that you like the story so far and that you don't find it horrible to read ;) I always have the feeling that I can't express myself well enough in English ^^ (I'm mostly writing in German)! And thanks for letting me know about the repeated text in the last chapter, I fixed the problem! :) Well the second part of the story (beginning soon) is going to be darker, and there will be a few new characters, good and bad ones ;) Well I think that the most important warnings are already mentioned, there is going to be a bit of violence in a few chapters, I didn't mention yet, but well that's part of the adult content too! I don't want to say too much about the ending ^^ but there won't be any other warnings concerning character death ;) Hope you are going to like the rest of the story too! Greetings from Luxemburg! Crazzy1989
Date: 09/03/13 06:01 am Title: Chapter 17
Again, too funny. I love it.
Date: 09/03/13 05:59 am Title: Chapter 16
That's too funny. Though his fear and paranoia are some what warranted in his situation.
Date: 09/03/13 05:53 am Title: Chapter 12
Tom's lucky Bill is so forgiving. Bill's intentions were not to be cruel, and Tom's were.
Date: 09/03/13 05:36 am Title: Chapter 2
You are not a native english speaker, I'm impressed because I couldn't tell. I am such a grammar nazi (daughter of an english teacher) and can't read stories that have too many errors. So far this is fantastic and I love it.
Date: 08/29/13 12:22 am Title: Chapter 18
DAMNNNNNNNN.......!!!!! WOMAN IT GOT HOT IN THERE ......PHEW .........LOVED IT :-D
Author's Response: Hi tokitaalien! :) rnThanks a lot for your feedback! :) Great that you enjoyed it ^^ rnHave fun with the next one!rnCrazzy1989
Date: 08/28/13 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 18
damn, i'm so excited hehe it was so passionate between them and no wonder they were so lost in each other
Author's Response: Hey Hexy92, I hope you are doing fine! Thanks a lot for your review! :) Have fun with the new chapter ;) Greetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 08/22/13 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 17
omg hahahah i can't believe what Tom just did or better how Bill saw him hahahha well, now for sure they will have their fun xdd
Author's Response: Hey Hexy92 ... thanks for your review ;) Of course they will have their fun! :) Greetings, Crazzy1989
Date: 08/22/13 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oooooohhhhhh.........!!!!!!!! Shit caught in the act ...... HHAAHHAAHAHAH....XD poor tom .....well I love your story .....b29;b29; I send you all my love and admiration ..... a33;a33;
Author's Response: Hey ... Caught in the act xD absolutely! So good to hear that you love China Doll so far ... hope that won`t change ;) Greetings, Crazzy1989