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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/25 05:03 am Title: Thanks for the invitation

I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/21 08:11 am Title: Thanks for the invitation

this was a really good story!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/13 05:01 pm Title: Thanks for the invitation

Oh, well, that was a true love-triangle right there :D. I
m not sure if I can fully accept Bill's way to work this out, but hopefuly he'll do better job with Tom. Tom's insecure and a bit shy character was cute. :)
I think you did well for your first fic and I encourage you to go on. It'll be great, I'm sure of it. :)

Author's Response: Yeah I was struggling a little to find a correct ending for this story, but I'm glad you liked it nonetheless :) Thanks for your encouragement, I will continue for sure!!

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/13 02:32 pm Title: Thanks for the invitation

This is verry good!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a comment, I'm glad you appreciated my story :)

Reviewer: shitpisscatfuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/13 02:17 am Title: Thanks for the invitation

This story was awesome.

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed the story :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/13 02:16 am Title: Thanks for the invitation

That was a pretty darn good first attempt! This could be made into a longer story as I'd love to find out more about, and follow their love story!

Author's Response: I didn't know someone was going to be interested in a sequel but I will think about it :) Thanks a lot for your comment!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 02:11 pm Title: Thanks for the invitation

You did really well for your first fanfic, I really liked this. Seems like Stefan wasn't very caring with his boyfriends and he got what he deserved, and for Tom and Bill it was the start of a much more fulfilling relationship. Hope you'll write more stuff now you've started.

Author's Response: I tried not to diabolize Stefan too much; he may seem like he did not care for his boyfriend at the party, but it's because he's not out to his friends yet. But yeah, Bill fits better with Tom ;)rnThank you so much for your review, it means a lot to me :) I will indeed write more stories (I've already started a new project). I have lots of ideas, but I'm a bit slow though XD My first story got me hooked on writing!

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 01:18 pm Title: Thanks for the invitation

Wow, that was really nice ;) Tom went on the party without a boyfriend and after the party he found one. I just can't imagine Stefan's face when he saw he ex making out with his then boyfriend and after what Bill stayed to him. Hmm, brobably it was Bill and Tom's the best party hehe

Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate the long review :) And yeah, Stefan was probably astounded, angry and more than surprised to see his boyfriend kissing his ex! I kind of felt bad for him :( But I would also like to be in Tom's situation and find someone I like at a party! I'm sure they will indeed remember it for a long time!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 07:26 am Title: Thanks for the invitation

this was a really good story!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 03:51 am Title: Thanks for the invitation

your writing was good :)
keep up the goood work :)

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review :) More stories to come!

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 03:34 am Title: Thanks for the invitation

Awwww, I loved it!! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 02:20 am Title: Thanks for the invitation

I really liked it. The break up scene was a bit fast but overall a good story!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) Yeah, now that I've re-read it, the ending does seem a bit rushed, but I'll keep that in mind for my next story!

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