Date: 05/01/23 11:17 am Title: The first kiss
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 02/04/17 08:54 pm Title: Epilogue
Perfection. Though I am going to have 'Don't Jump' stuck in my head all night now. Looking forward to reading more of your work ^_^
Date: 02/04/17 06:29 pm Title: The first night apart
Okay, that one hurt
Date: 02/04/17 06:18 pm Title: The first time Tom bled
This is supposed to be sad, why is it making me laugh D: (':
Date: 02/04/17 06:02 pm Title: The first doubts
The ending made me smile but now I'm scared to read more D:
Date: 04/21/13 04:14 pm Title: The first kiss
I just read the whole thing, couldn't stop lone enough to even write a comment, absolutely amazing. Your writing is amazing, I was completely drawn in. xxxx
Author's Response: AWH, thank you so much love! And thank you for reading it! I'm glad you enjoyed :) xxxxx
Author's Response: AWH, thank you so much love! And thank you for reading it! I'm glad you enjoyed :) xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 09:14 pm Title: Epilogue
Amazing story!! you made me want to rip out my heart!!!!!! so painful but so beautiful!!!! Dear lord amlfkafka I started a few hours ago and couldn't stop till the end!! thank you so much for share it!!! it's just epic!!! love it with all my heart and soul!!
Author's Response: Gosh, thank you so much for such an amazing review! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it :3 I love reviewers like you with all my heart and soul!
Date: 03/18/13 04:11 pm Title: Epilogue
Love it! Looking forward to the next story!
Author's Response: I'm going to post my first chapter tomorrow :D
Date: 03/17/13 11:59 pm Title: Epilogue
good fic! very good plot. i liked this a lot.
Author's Response: AWH thank you :3
Date: 03/17/13 07:47 pm Title: Epilogue
Cool story! I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/17/13 06:28 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow. That's good everything ended well. Bill and Tom are together, plus they don't have to sneak out from others. I guess now they're even close to each other than it was before all happened with Tom. And of Course I can't wait for your new story
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your kind reviews :3
Date: 03/17/13 05:58 pm Title: Epilogue
What a lovely ending. It's great that both the Gs know so that the twins can at least relax and be themselves while they're with their friends. I loved the realism with Andreas not taking it so well. After all, he'd had this huge crush on Tom for years, and Bill had deceived him about exactly why they were pretending to be an item, so he had a right to be pissed at them both, as well as the shock of learning they were more than just brothers. I've really enjoyed this story and I'm looking forward to your next one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for sticking with me through this, it really meant a lot :) rn
Date: 03/17/13 11:03 am Title: The final fight
I am so, so happy that Tom took those pills and they rendered him incapable of following through with his intention to jump. Of course, he could have died from the overdose too, but Bill arrived just in time to ring for help. The whole 'angel' part was too sweet for words. And I loved the beeping of the monitor annoying Tom so much, although Bill shouldn't really have hated it because it was a sure sign his twin was still alive, but I can imagine how the repetative sound grated on the nerves. Great detail for bringing the scene to life. I hope they finally talk to each other properly and sort out a way of being together that's based on truth and honesty. It won't be easy because they'll have to keep on hiding their relationship, but they can't live without each other so they'll have to work something out. I'm really sad that the story is ending and I hope you'll write something else soon.
Author's Response: Your reviews literally make this whole story writing a thousand times better. I'm already planning out my next story, it should be starting a few days after this one ends :3 I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, it was a pleasure to write this one as it seemed to write itself :)
Date: 03/17/13 10:43 am Title: The final fight
glad that horrible did not happen.
Author's Response: I wouldn't be that mean ;)
Date: 03/16/13 10:55 pm Title: The first note
Oh poor boys. Hope it's not too late. Cool story!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 03/16/13 09:39 pm Title: The first kiss
I cried :((( next chapter please
Author's Response: It's up :) sorry for the crying
Date: 03/16/13 07:23 pm Title: The first note
i hate u cos u made my cry.
i'm kinda happy that Gustav finally told Bill about everything but kinda a little to late cos what Tom did to himself isn't good and even if Bill saw something, why he didn't do anything? well, now i hopping that wasn't late.
Author's Response: Hopefully the next chapter will explain things better for you :)
Date: 03/16/13 07:17 pm Title: The first note
Oh, God. So intense. My throat's all tight and tears are prickling my eyes. I was literally racing along with Bill as he bolted from the room in search of Tom. And he finds that note...aaagh! So much emotion. Where is Tom? Please say he hasn't already jumped. Such a cliffhanger. Interspersing the action with the song lyrics really worked. Fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: I was worried about the lyrics as they aren't in order (had to change them to fit the story) but I'm so glad you liked it! I'll try and get the next chapter up very soon :3
Date: 03/16/13 02:48 pm Title: The first note
:o oh god! Continue!
Author's Response: Next chapter will be coming soon :)
Date: 03/16/13 11:48 am Title: The first time Andreas tagged along
Poor Tom, he's fallng apart both physically and mentally. I could slap Gustav silly for his part in Tom's downfall, although, of course, it was Tom's decision to end things with Bill but he did it in reaction to what Gus said after catching them together. I have such a bad feeling where this is going, especially given the title of the story. I'm just hoping that Bill realises what is happening and saves his twin before Tom's voices get the better of him and he ends it all. I can't believe you only have a couple of chapters left, but I'm dying to find out what happens.
Author's Response: Reading this review inspired me to write more, and so I just added another chapter :) thank you for still reading