Date: 03/15/13 06:00 am Title: The first plan
I love that you have Andreas crushing on Tom as most stories have him moon-eyed over Bill. But those twins...God they need some honesty between them instead of all these undercover plans. Thing is, I can see Tom's self-destructive nature getting worse and worse. He'll be so alone now. At least Bill has Andi to conspire and spend time with; Tom has no one to talk to about his true feelings. Great chapter as always, just one thing...hope you don't mind me pointing it out, but you spelled 'nonchalant' as 'non-challant'.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for pointing out my error, I don't have a beta reader so I'm honestly thankful :)
Date: 03/15/13 05:46 am Title: The first friend the twins made
Sorry I didn't review sooner but I've had a busy couple of days. Thank God Tom's seen sense at last. But is it too late since Bill's now decided to learn to live with his twin's decision? Loved the introduction of Andreas. But is Bill just using their friend because he can't have Tom? Going right on to read the next chapter and find out.
Author's Response: A late review is far better than no review at all! :3
Date: 03/14/13 12:23 pm Title: The first plan
It really doesn't seam easy to them. Especially for Tom who will have to look at Bill and Andi
Author's Response: And Bill will have to keep pretending :/
Date: 03/13/13 09:11 pm Title: The first kiss
OMG !! Next chapter please *___*
Author's Response: Will be up tomorrow :) thank you for reading!
Date: 03/13/13 03:44 pm Title: The first friend the twins made
OMG!!!!!! Bill and Andi? that's a surprise. i wonder if now Tom will tell Bill everything or just leave it for himself. and what he will tell simone?
Author's Response: Hehe, I thought it'd be a suprise c:
Date: 03/12/13 08:44 pm Title: The first time
and i thought everything between them was good...but that was a dream :( well, i hope Tom would stop hurting himself the way he's doing now
Author's Response: I'm really glad you're sticking with the story, and it is sad that Tom is going through this :(
Date: 03/12/13 05:29 pm Title: The first time
continue!
Author's Response: Next update will be tomorrow :) I'm very glad you like the story
Date: 03/12/13 03:36 pm Title: The first time
The sex was lovely and sweet and really hot. Loved them both sharing the same dream although they're so far apart. Scary that Tom's cutting is fast getting out of hand. I'm so nervous of what the 'something more' he needs will be.
Author's Response: He's so broken hearted and all alone :(rnI'm so thankful to you for sticking with me through this story :)
Date: 03/11/13 04:51 pm Title: The first night apart
Don't know who I'm more angry with, Gustav for pressurising Tom into making the 'right' decision, or Tom for going along with him. And the repercussions are rippling out because now Simone is being hurt too by Tom not coming home. I feel for Tom, I really do, but I wish he'd talked to Bill instead of making a unilateral decision. Although, surely Bill must at some level link Tom's change of heart to Gustav finding out about them. I'm wondering, too, what georg would make of it all? Would he react the same as Gustav...for the good of the band? Or would he be more understanding and try to help the twins conceal their relationship? Just pondering. Loved the flashback in this chapter, great parallel to their current situation with them sleeping in seperate places...but this time divided by thousands of miles.
Author's Response: I think on some level Bill knows, but all rationale was taken away by what Tom said, which of course was Toms plan. Bill was always insecure about their relationship, and Tom played on that. Who knows, Gustav might be a hero? And thank you so much :)
Date: 03/11/13 12:29 pm Title: The first night apart
i don't like it how they have to go through that pain of being apart and a whole situation with Gustav seeing them.
Author's Response: I'm really sorry you aren't enjoying the storym
Date: 03/11/13 05:33 am Title: The first time Tom bled
Another heartbreaking chapter. I was actually pleased that Bill got angry with Tom rather than just breaking down. But then the emotions got to both of them later with Bill barely functioning at the concert and Tom...oh, Tomi, what have you done? Wondering now whether anyone will find Tom like that, or whether he'll just hide the evidence of his cutting, and likely do it again. And how is Bill going to handle things from now on? Will he be hoping they'll patch things up? Or maybe he'll go find someone else to make his twin jealous? I haven't said before how I love the little flashbacks in each chapter and the way they give such sweet insights into the twins' younger selves and their developing relationship. This was a really great chapter. I loved it.
Author's Response: I'm not going to lie, this review actually bought tears to my eyes. I am so so glad that people are enjoying this story and connecting with the characters so well <3
Date: 03/10/13 11:25 pm Title: The first time Tom bled
oooo...i'm shocked. hopefully nothing so serious will happen to Tom. tho i'm curious if Bill would kinda noticed that Tom is doing this because of his talk with Gustav
Author's Response: We'll find out soon :) I wonder what would Bill's reaction?
Date: 03/10/13 09:28 pm Title: The first kiss
very nice, I loved it so much. it made me cry a lil bit :(
Author's Response: Aw thank you! Maybe get some tissues because its going to get worse :(
Date: 03/10/13 10:53 am Title: The first time he got dumped
My heart is breaking for Tom, and beating superfast for the conversation he's about to have with Bill...and oh, poor Bill, so innocent of what's about to hit him. You've really drawn me into this story.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're drawn to the story, all these reviews mean so much to me :)
Date: 03/09/13 07:14 pm Title: The first doubts
aww, that were so sweet on the past, especially what Tom did with his hoodie. but now, i can't imagine how he gonna break that news he was talking with Gustav to Bill
Author's Response: I kinda of know where this story is headed, although I am not 100% sure. And if it goes to plan, I'll probably cry writing it!
Date: 03/09/13 04:13 pm Title: The first blowjob
omg, Gustav just SAW them :O i didn't expect that. and how it happened when Tom's first blowjob for Bill...omg, Bill was kind, hmm...he just shocked me hahahhaha
Author's Response: Lets hope the story continues to shock you :3
Date: 03/09/13 11:50 am Title: The first blowjob
Really hot chapter...but what will happen now Gustav knows?
Author's Response: Like to keep my twins hot ;) you'll have to wait and see.. But Im afraid it won't be good
Date: 03/09/13 10:20 am Title: The first blowjob
I really liked the chapter, you write well .
Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it
Date: 03/08/13 12:14 am Title: The first time Bill got jealous
super :)
everything was good and now Bill is bitchy mood. well, maybe if before he maybe had some reasons to be jealous, now he doesn't have to? well, hopefully they will talk about it and Bill wont close door every time Tom will want to talk to him like hi did before heheh
Author's Response: His jealousy will make sense to the story along the way, but I do wish they could be lovey all the time! :)
Date: 03/07/13 02:41 pm Title: The first kiss
nice :) they seam so perfect together since everything started. it's just perfect :)
Author's Response: I love writing them as cute and sweet :) thank you so much for the review
Author's Response: I love writing them as cute and sweet :) thank you so much for the review