Date: 10/01/13 02:44 pm Title: Bill
Your description of foreboding events approaching is sublime. Poor Bill. Silly Bill. Brave Bill. Naive Bill.
Date: 10/01/13 02:39 pm Title: Tom
This story is fantastic. What are you talking about? There are so many things to love about it. I love your alterations as chapters go by, I love how well-crafted it is, I love your precision and factual accuracy, I love that it feels very much real even if it is not. I love your craft - as simple as that.
Thank you very much for bringing this story back:-)
Date: 09/30/13 05:00 pm Title: Tom
Awwwww so cute bill come out tom needs you ...alien this is an awesome story ...kudos ... :D
Date: 09/30/13 12:23 am Title: Tom
My God I don't have words to describe all the emotions this story has me feeling. I don't want to stop reading! More people should be reading and reviewing this story...it's wonderful. Adding it to favs right now!
Date: 09/29/13 02:39 pm Title: Tom
Incredible chapter. Description of hospital procedure and the characters' emotions was amazing. The ending was so poignant, as if Bill was playing a game of hide and seek and Tom couldn't find him. I loved it all and hope you'll update soon.
Date: 09/29/13 01:39 pm Title: Tom
It is great that Bill is out of the woods in terms of infection. Now all he need to do is to wake up. Tom will help him do so. I am sure.
Great story!
Date: 09/29/13 01:24 pm Title: Bill
This was heartbreaking. Poor boy.
Date: 09/29/13 04:55 am Title: Tom
Aw this is such a devastating story. It's just so heart wrenching reading all of Tom's pain watching his brother slowly slipping away. And the perspectives from Bill are so interesting and genuine. I truly feel like the characters and feel the emotions that you've written so well. I don't think I can praise this story enough, to be honest. It's just a beautiful piece of work and a hidden gem. I'm looking forward to the next chapter now that my heart has been torn into pieces. I hope someone (aka you) can put it back together again.
Date: 09/29/13 04:38 am Title: Bill
omg omg omg omg...that's all I can say because I need to click the "Next" button right now! This story has been so good in every chapter...I'd write more, but again, I can't wait for the next chapter sooo...*hurries to post review*
Date: 09/29/13 02:14 am Title: Tom
Oh my God...I cannot wait for more!!!
Date: 06/04/13 04:56 pm Title: Tom
Ugh, hospitals. I hate hospitals and I hate the moments of bad news (I guess I'm traumatized enough to feel that way everytime). It was unpleasant to read, but hey, it had to happen... and as opposite, the part of twins being together, Tom making Bill feel better, was really cute. Aww, navel/bellyplay! Just hoping for things to turn better for both of them.
Date: 06/02/13 12:54 am Title: Tom
Me again xD!
just wanted to give you this little gift! hope you like it!!
thanks for inspiring me with your story *--*
http://24.media.tumblr.com/cbfd5f55684aa6bcad4275639f43377d/tumblr_mnr1dywjYq1qbqi5fo1_500.jpg
Date: 06/01/13 11:05 pm Title: Tom
I didn't see the ending events coming omg laksmals hotsofckinhot hahaha but poor Tom the guilt after realizing that!!!
amazing chapter hot, sad dramatic!!! i laughed with the doctor and the ducks too hahah
thank you so much i will be waiting the next one *----*
Date: 06/01/13 01:15 am Title: Tom
:-( Oh no!!! I hope they can save Bill without too much going wrong. Tom is so scared and blaming himself now I'm sure. Bill should have gone to the hospital long before this. I've heard that when this happens it's truely the worst pain. Poor Bill. how did he manage so long?
Date: 05/28/13 08:55 pm Title: Tom
I just read your story & i loved it! :D I'm SO waiting for the next chapter!!! :DDD
Date: 03/07/13 04:59 pm Title: Bill
Awww, poor Bill. I see you buildinmg up kind of two settings here: one for Bill's actual, physical state and a backgropund story for the twins. Nope, I don't think I'šve read this before. But I'm curious to see where this is going. I don't think about naiive, just a different way to see them. :)
Date: 03/07/13 04:35 pm Title: Tom
I'm not sure I read it this when this was posted the first time? Sure, it is quite dramatic and Bill's character left a bit distance, but I think you still give us a sign of yout talent on making fics flow smooth and naturally. Don't worry. :)
And now to the next chapter. I try to go thrpugh all of your fics, but damn, I'm running out of time here. :D
Date: 03/07/13 11:40 am Title: Bill
OMG totally in love with this fic sdkas dying for the next ep!!! thank you so much for share it :D