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Reviewer: AryaStark Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/13 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: Code name X-42
Date: 03/01/13 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: Code name X-42
I really like your idea and the setting, also the description of Tom there is well done. So I'd be very happy to see a second chapter ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! glad you like it :Drnthe second chapter is still on editing (along with the other chapters). I hope I can publish it soon :) #fingercrossed
Reviewer: mjjess90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/13 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1: Code name X-42
Date: 02/28/13 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1: Code name X-42
You have a lot of distracting English spelling, grammar and word choice problems. The idea is wonderful, but I would spend more time editing :)
Author's Response: yeah, I am totally aware about that. Sorry >.
Reviewer: thosechocolatebrowneyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/13 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Code name X-42
Date: 02/24/13 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Code name X-42
the story has an intriguing begining.. I like that. But Ria bothers me.
Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/13 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: Code name X-42
Date: 02/23/13 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: Code name X-42
I loved it! I hope Tom Will warm up a bit when he meets Bill(;
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