Date: 02/22/13 07:40 pm Title: I'll Jump For You
Awwwwwwww, I almost cried also. So heartbreaking. I loved this, even if it was short, even if you could have drawn it out just a little more. I still really enjoyed it. I'm intregued by the fact that the twins were public with their relationship. Oh, and the bit where Bill collapses- It was sudden in a good way. I loved Tom's letter too. I'm just confused by why Tom narrates that his words were lies at the beginning (explain please?), cuz it seems he wasn't lying when he said he was in love with Bill. The end was precious. I'm happy they're together. :) Anyways, good one-shot! Keep writing twincest!! :)
Author's Response: Not so much his words were lies but what drew them closer and why they fell in love. Bill said it just felt right or that it was meant to be when he knew his cancer drew them closer together.
Date: 02/22/13 04:46 pm Title: I'll Jump For You
i like it. even if it's short, here is everything :)
Author's Response: Wow it's been a while since you've reviewed thanks so much for it.
Date: 02/21/13 10:33 pm Title: I'll Jump For You
nice story :'|
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much I thought that I'd done two things I thought I'd never do why not throw some twincest in there. I did a blambert and a fantasy why not do this. I cried writing it so I guess it's good. Again thanks for your review and I hope that I get many more from you.