Date: 02/27/13 08:47 pm Title: #4 “Light of my life, fire of my loins; be a good baby do what I want. Give me them gold coins.”
Selfish immature disrespectful prick!
Date: 02/27/13 10:17 am Title: #4 “Light of my life, fire of my loins; be a good baby do what I want. Give me them gold coins.”
Oh Bill ... *facepalm*
Love the chapter, darling! xx
Date: 02/26/13 03:05 pm Title: #4 “Light of my life, fire of my loins; be a good baby do what I want. Give me them gold coins.”
That's such a difficult situation for Bill because he's so used to so many young women going after his dad solely for his money that he'd just assume Fiona would be the same way. Fiona seems like a really sweet person, though, and I think that she may really love his dad; Bill just doesn't know it. It was also so heart-wrenching when he was listening to his mom's voice because you see a side of Bill that he hides from everyone else. And Anis seems so good for him, helping him be a better person and be kinder to people like Fiona. I think he sees something behind Bill's bratty facade. This was a really great chapter, delving into more of the emotions that make Bill who he is! Looooove it.
Date: 02/25/13 09:07 am Title: #3 “In a land of Gods and Monsters I was an Angel looking to get fucked hard.”
Love the chapter! xx
Date: 02/24/13 10:19 pm Title: #3 “In a land of Gods and Monsters I was an Angel looking to get fucked hard.”
Ahhh no why did you stop there xD
Super chapter can't wait for the next one! Bill is such a diva, love him.
Date: 02/24/13 09:49 pm Title: #3 “In a land of Gods and Monsters I was an Angel looking to get fucked hard.”
This Bill needs therapy
Date: 02/24/13 08:58 pm Title: #3 “In a land of Gods and Monsters I was an Angel looking to get fucked hard.”
I could listen to that song on repeat...oh wait, I have...It's perfect for this chapter.
I'm interested in what exactly was on Bill's phone that was related to his mom. I'm guessing maybe a voicemail so he could always hear her voice or something? And I'm glad Bushido was sensitive enough to understand why Bill was so upset and apologize. He probably just assumed Bill was a brat, which is kind of true but at the same time, I feel like Bill has more to him than just being a bratty, spoiled, rich kid. He seems to want more in life but just doesn't know exactly what or how to get it. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
very true, he is spoiled but he is contantly looking to feel the gap his mother left when she died. unfortunately right now he thinks it's sex.
Date: 02/24/13 08:52 pm Title: #3 “In a land of Gods and Monsters I was an Angel looking to get fucked hard.”
Well you've certainly got my attention. I like sexy slutty Bill.
Date: 02/22/13 07:07 pm Title: #2 “I’ve got a burning desire for you baby”
Billshido :D
Date: 02/22/13 11:55 am Title: #2 “I’ve got a burning desire for you baby”
My beloved Billshido, YAY!!!!!!! :-D
Date: 02/22/13 05:55 am Title: #2 “I’ve got a burning desire for you baby”
Oooooh, love the chapter. Good work! xx
Date: 02/21/13 07:41 pm Title: #2 “I’ve got a burning desire for you baby”
Wow they're a steamy couple, and I love it. And poor Bill...I do that all the time, and it's so annoying, especially when I forget where I put my phone...calling a phone on silent is pointless in that case. Great chapter! I love this story.
Date: 02/21/13 05:52 pm Title: #2 “I’ve got a burning desire for you baby”
Loooove it!!!
Date: 02/21/13 03:27 pm Title: #2 “I’ve got a burning desire for you baby”
wow...Bill is se sex-evil hahhah
Date: 02/21/13 11:39 am Title: #1 “I got a taste for men who are older; it’s always been so it’s no surprise.”
MORE PLEASE OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING
Date: 02/19/13 04:40 pm Title: #1 “I got a taste for men who are older; it’s always been so it’s no surprise.”
promising start..........hot, and i like bill/anis pairings, so i'm looking forward to the next chapter:)
can't say more at the moment
aerith
Date: 02/19/13 07:51 am Title: #1 “I got a taste for men who are older; it’s always been so it’s no surprise.”
I've been waiting for someone to write a good Billshido fanfic! Finally! And well, after this chapter, I just want more! Update soon, darling. xx
Date: 02/18/13 11:15 pm Title: #1 “I got a taste for men who are older; it’s always been so it’s no surprise.”
Yay new story with billshido!!
Author's Response:
Billshido is my OTP
Date: 02/18/13 07:27 pm Title: #1 “I got a taste for men who are older; it’s always been so it’s no surprise.”
I'm sure if I had any innocence left reading about this Bill would make me lose it XD
Can't find the word for his attitude.
Author's Response:
I might edit the later chapters just to slut him up a bit more. i got soft towards the end.
Date: 02/18/13 07:09 pm Title: #1 “I got a taste for men who are older; it’s always been so it’s no surprise.”
Bill is such a little trouble maker. I like both your characterizations of Bill and Bushido so far, and the idea of Bushido being a rival of Bill's dad is fantastic. I'm looking forward to where you go from here! Good job :)
Side note: I LOVE THAT SONG. (Chapter title). Lana is my favorite female singer.
Author's Response:
i love her too :)