Reviews For Alternative Ending
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Reviewer: XtremeKiwi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/08 08:54 pm Title: Alternative Ending

Yey!!! I so like this ending better. lol. I still cried, but only at laughing at the questions and for happiness! You made me cry happily, congratz! x'D Okay~ I loved the story, it had a twist and I freaking effin loved it! ;]

Author's Response: Yay! :DDD Thank you! :]]]

Reviewer: XtremeKiwi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/08 08:50 pm Title: This is for Bill

Damn you Ariel!! Dx She was okay at the beginning, but this chapter made me want her to die in that car crash. >

Author's Response: ^^

Reviewer: DJ_Music_Dreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/08 08:07 pm Title: Alternative Ending

Auwh!! This was sooo cute! I love both endings I just hate sad endings so I'm happy you did this ending. I love this story, it's so precious!!

Author's Response: :'DDD awuh, thank you ^^

Reviewer: EmoDuckie64 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/08 04:26 pm Title: Alternative Ending

fuck! I have never like slash or twincest stories! but you are so awesome! you just made me like them. DAMN this is a really greeeat story! wow.. That was a touching story! I actually cried. CRIED! I never do that!... maaan. ok bye-ED64

P.S. BE REALLY PROUD!

Author's Response: :'DDD awwuh, thank you xD [Is proud]

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/08 01:31 am Title: Alternative Ending

Whooo! I like this ending ALOT better, haha. *applauds* This was really good, and I'm sad to see it end =[

I am, however, gonna check out your new story! =] If it's 10x's better than this, than....wow....*haha* Great job!

Author's Response: Im sad to see it end too :[ this was my baby. But im really glad you liked it ^^ thank you :]

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/08 01:27 am Title: Alternative Ending

AMAZING STORY!!! Loved the plot line to it XD
This ending is soo much better =]

Author's Response: :DD awuh, thank youu<33 :]]

Reviewer: Lilkitty75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/08 12:47 am Title: Alternative Ending

aww that was sweet.... YAY!!! You tricky little devil, what a grand idea (holey shit did i just say grand?!! OMFG WTF >

Author's Response: xD so you dont hate me now? :P

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/08 12:18 am Title: Alternative Ending

Much better ending, thank you. Good job.

Author's Response: :]]] thank youu!<33

Reviewer: SonnyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/08 07:18 pm Title: This is for Bill

AHHHHHH I havent read this yet butt!!!

OMG! last chapter?!?!?!?!?!?

Author's Response: OMG, [not the last chapter ;] Shhhhh dont tell anyone >.>

Reviewer: robbieerave Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/08 06:57 pm Title: This is for Bill

awhbutwhyandthissucksandragh.
D':
theyhavetoloveachotherandbetogetherand
livehappilyeverafterrrr.

please update soon!

Author's Response: D: As soon as I get my lazy butt back on I'm updating it ^^

Reviewer: Lilkitty75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/08 02:35 pm Title: This is for Bill

oh my god.... i just cried some.... it was so good though!!!!! about frikking time someone realized that Tom would not fuck his brother >< anyway it was amazing dear... what that is that i hear?... faint in the distance.... sequel..... i don't know, i guess that's just another story... ^^

Author's Response: xD hmmmm

Reviewer: zimmer_4_8_3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/08 09:33 pm Title: This is for Bill

what the mother fuck was that?!?!?!?!? just fyi, i totally just ripped you 5 new ass holes and then stabbed you in the stomach. just so you know.
besides that, what the hell this is a terrible alternate ending i want to kill myself(in actuality it is very good and well written and such but as it was not the way i wanted it to be i will continue to say it sucks) oh my god im totally at a loss for words now. i feel everything that bill must be feeling right then and it feels like my heart may explode. god what the hell is up with people who think that hurting someone so much can in the end really help them. those people are retarded. anyways update soon before i stab my gut and die.

Author's Response: xDD! I love you.

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/08 08:31 pm Title: This is for Bill

Oh, yes. There HAS to be another ending. He's not helping Bill at ALL. If anything, he's making it 10 times worse than if he were to tell Bill they were related.

Author's Response: [Nods] Toms got a hard skull.

Reviewer: Schwarzendawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/08 07:59 pm Title: This is for Bill

But you have to post an alternative ending, because this is so not what I want it to finish. Bill CANT be hurt like that, doing that Tom did hurt Bill more than telling him the truth.

Author's Response: Tom is one stubborn boy [shakes head] but the alternative ending...;]

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/08 06:52 pm Title: This is for Bill

I Don't CARE if this is for Bill! That's not the way to haldle it! Bill's gonna be suicidal! Tom can't do that! Regardless of whether they're half brothers or not. Why didn't anyone tell Bill that last part? Arn't they the same age? How does that work? I'm confused over who was cheating on who. Shouldn't it be Bill's mom and Tom's dad? It would make more sense right?

Update soon! And fix this!

Author's Response: Bill's mother was cheating with Tom's father, therefore Bill could be the result of Tom's father. So technically they'd be half brothers, but brothers nevertheless. And I dont think I ever gave them ages xD oops.

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/08 06:48 pm Title: This is for Bill

so are they supposed to be twins or just brothers???

Author's Response: We'll never know ;]

Reviewer: DJ_Music_Dreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/08 06:39 pm Title: Endings Must Have Beginnings

I mean it was WONDERFUL, just those endings make me feel soooo sad! xDD
Very beautiful story though...

Author's Response: Awuh, thank you :33

Reviewer: DJ_Music_Dreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/08 06:27 pm Title: This is for Bill

I hate it! It's so sad!!!!!! T_T
Good story but I hate these endings! T_T

Author's Response: Awuh, its not over yet ;]

Reviewer: LOL WUT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/08 07:55 pm Title: New Voicemail

OMG MOAR MOAR MOAR!!!!!


lol, i love this story but you need to update more! its addictive!

Author's Response: xD I'm sorry! Ive been super busy lately, but I'll update soon I promise! :]

Reviewer: Lilkitty75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/08 10:02 pm Title: Endings Must Have Beginnings

cool, thats almost where I was! yeah I got some really good pictures, I'll try to add your myspace to send you some. My friend Veronica gotta hold both Bill and tom's hands. it was amazing. did you have to deal with the dumb drunk chick half way through? my god she was annoying. did you get in the fight over toms towel? it was vicious...

Author's Response: Yayy, yeah add my myspace and send them there :3 Nope, I didnt even know there was a drunk girl there xD I hate drunk people at concerts >[ and I saw the towel fight, oh my goddd it was crazy. It looked like it exploded on contact with the crowd xD

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