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Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/08 08:10 pm Title: Piecing It Together

Love this story =)

Author's Response: :DDD thank you!!<33

Reviewer: Nam-kun Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/08 08:42 pm Title: Sombreros and Salsa

Dammit, every chapter I read of your fic I like the twincest a little more xDDD Of course, only in fics D8 xDD
Anyway, continue!!! I like it x3 And that 'Lick salsa off of his face' was just epic win

Author's Response: :DDD Thank you! ha I always try and add a little humor to my stuff xD

Reviewer: LottieLithium Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/08 12:10 pm Title: Sombreros and Salsa

It's pretty good, but maybe if you added in a tad more detail ? I love this story and can't wait for the update!

Author's Response: Right, detail. Thats my worst downfall x.x Im trying :]. Thanks<33

Reviewer: myEbrokenMheartO Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/08 10:12 pm Title: Sombreros and Salsa

OMG!!PLEASE TELL ME THE CAR DOESN"T HIT THEM!!OMG!!I LVOE THIS STORY!!ASOME!!LOVE IT!!UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: xDD I love how excited you get! It makes me happy :D thank youu<33

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/08 07:54 pm Title: It Was My Fault

Ariel kissed Bill? so didnt expect that. But thats what makes this chapter interesting! lol But why did Brett kick Bills ass when he and Tom arent friends?

Author's Response: I should have elaborated more, sorry. With gangs, if a guy kisses another guys girlfriend, even if its just kissing back, it automatically means an ass kicking. Its just how it works I guess >.> :DD<333

Reviewer: myEbrokenMheartO Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/08 04:10 pm Title: It Was My Fault

AWWW SO SAD!!I LVOE IT!!XD But, didn't they hurt Bill before taht? Anyway ASOME!!!UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!XD

Author's Response: nono they beat Bill up after school while Tom was waiting for him on the track. And Ariel had kissed him sometime during school. :3

Reviewer: Chelleyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/08 09:27 pm Title: Dont Let Go

update!
pleaseee :(

Author's Response: I will! Im sorry i've been super busy with school. Its spring break now so I'll have a new chapter up asap! :D

Reviewer: Chelleyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/08 09:27 pm Title: Dont Let Go

update!
pleaseee :(

Author's Response: <3:D

Reviewer: Nam-kun Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/08 10:05 pm Title: Dont Let Go

Nyooo
Crap, you're doing i like the twincest D8 xDDD Anyway, great chapter ;D
W00TT!!! Bill's mom knows eeeettt xDDD

Author's Response: :DDD thank youu!

Reviewer: KeepTheFaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/08 07:36 pm Title: Endings Must Have Beginnings

I know! He kissed the other guys girlfriend!

Author's Response: :DDD

Reviewer: KeepTheFaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/08 06:48 pm Title: Dont Let Go

I love it! But you really should change the summary. This story is much better than the summary gives it credits fore!

Author's Response: haha I don't know what to change it to xD

Reviewer: myEbrokenMheartO Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/08 06:37 pm Title: Dont Let Go

*sqeek* OMG UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!I WANNNAAA KNOW WHYYYYYY!!!XD! I LVOE IT !!!!XD

Author's Response: :DD I willlllrnand OMG I know its all leading up to it haharnIm excited to see what people say about it xD

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/08 08:05 pm Title: The Taste Of Iron

aw why did Bill get his ass kicked?

Author's Response: Theres a clue in there, but next chapter will clear it up :]

Reviewer: paris Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/08 05:42 pm Title: The Taste Of Iron

i love this story! u are such a talented author!

Author's Response: Aww thank you! :D<3

Reviewer: myEbrokenMheartO Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/08 01:48 pm Title: The Taste Of Iron

OMG I LVOE IT!!WHat HAD bill done!HES TO INNOCENT!!NOTHING DID!!!OMG UPDATE SOON AGAIN I LVOE IT!!XD

Author's Response: :DDD

Reviewer: Twilight-Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/08 12:34 pm Title: The Taste Of Iron

I just read it all and I really like it! Can't wait for your next chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you<33

Reviewer: myEbrokenMheartO Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/08 06:53 pm Title: I look Ridiculous...

*sqeek* Asome!

Author's Response: :DD yay!

Reviewer: Nam-kun Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/08 06:40 pm Title: I look Ridiculous...

:DDDDD
Continueee!!!
And Bill remembers me in spanish class xDDD (I was sleeping while I was drooling on mah hand xDDDU)

Author's Response: :DDDD I will!rnOMG xDDD

Reviewer: Nam-kun Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/08 02:55 pm Title: Alone In The Dark

Wiii I like iitt!!! Altough I'm not too much for twincest, but oh well, who cares xDDD
Amm... as you see in mah nick, I'm Nam-kun from Gaia ;D

Author's Response: ahah oh I wasnt either until this site >.> I read one of the stories and was like OMG haha and thank you :D!

Reviewer: tomsgroupie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/08 09:52 pm Title: Alone In The Dark

poor sad, scared little bill. i wish someone was there to comfort him.

Author's Response: =[ I'd hold him xD

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