Date: 09/27/10 08:31 pm Title: Alone In The Dark
ooooooh past accidenttttttt
Date: 09/27/10 07:52 pm Title: Ying and Yang
ah, i am actually enjoying the short chapters for once, because i can quickly read one, study a bit, and then read another rather than each chapter being a half hour ordeal :) this story is my new study buddy. and i like the storyline so far
Date: 09/27/10 07:31 pm Title: Endings Must Have Beginnings
sucked? no it was very clever, only short :)
Date: 08/16/10 02:11 pm Title: Alternative Ending
Woow :|
I like the Alternative Ending so much more than the actual XD The actual made me sad. But I love the whole story! :')
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :3
Date: 03/30/10 06:42 pm Title: Alternative Ending
oh sorry but the end is really shitty compared to the rest of the story..and since you wrote the whole story i´m sure you can make a really nice end i just can´t believe how you ruin it ...i mean come on u should go on and make it really better cause it can be!
Date: 07/02/09 01:57 am Title: The Taste Of Iron
Tom's compassion made me cry. Yeah, you're a good writer.
Author's Response: Ohmygosh, seriously? O.O I'm sorry for making you cry D: but I'm glad you think its good ^^;; er, thank you<3
Date: 07/02/09 01:30 am Title: Endings Must Have Beginnings
Any teacher who curses is a favorite of mine.
Author's Response: xD me too!
Date: 04/11/09 10:42 pm Title: Alternative Ending
so adorable! i loved it
Author's Response: :D thank youu!
Date: 01/25/09 08:59 am Title: Alternative Ending
Oh wow, I read chapter 30 of this story and I was like....gah, I know it's probably the best thing for Tom to do, but goddammit...to hurt both of them so much and to make Tom carry that burden for the rest of his life...
Yeah, and then I read the alternate ending and I was like OMFG YAY XDD. I love how it didn't matter what they were in the end, it only mattered that they loved each other ^.^
I loved this story XD.
Author's Response: :'DD I was torn as to which ending would be the alternative. Cause I would've done what Tom did in the original ending, its the heroic thing. But then theres the aspect of love overrides everything. And thats a strong statement to me. Oh and thank you for the review xD<3
Date: 12/12/08 03:39 pm Title: Alternative Ending
oh, I maybe I don't need to kill u then x)
Author's Response: xD yay! Thank you for not killing me :D
Date: 12/12/08 03:34 pm Title: This is for Bill
*kill* >: D
Author's Response: Oh nos ;.;
Date: 11/13/08 12:00 am Title: Alternative Ending
Ooh... both of those endings sent shivers down my spine... It's crazy!!! That fic was WONDERFUL.. I've never read one where they were half brothers.. I really really loved it!!! Both of the endings were amazing... But I'm SO GLAD for the alternate!!! XD Your'e amazing!!!
Author's Response: :'DDDD fdsohd! I totally never realized how rare the half brothers concept is, thank you for telling me xD Im so glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing<333
Date: 10/27/08 09:33 pm Title: Alternative Ending
ahaha, you're welcome. thiss story, and you, deserve WAY more than 200 reviews. :)
but yesss, i FINALLY got a thanks for reiewing! lol.
ahaha, not to sound all.. selfish?
but yeah, really!? YAY!
Author's Response: :'DDDD awuhhhhh, thankk you! Thank you thank you thank you thank you. :'D
Date: 10/26/08 05:14 pm Title: Alternative Ending
i like the alternative ending better.
no shit!
XD
ahaha
Author's Response: xD I expected most people to. OMG thank you for the 200th review! :'D
Date: 10/21/08 10:16 am Title: Endings Must Have Beginnings
I'm still not sure whether I prefer the original ending or the alternate...
I though love your story. It hurt me, but in a kind of pleasant way. (I sound fucked up now, don't I?)
I love the ending though, the last sentence totally made it to my heart. I hate the I-know-better attitude of almost everyone in the story, Bill's mum, Mike, Bill himself, Ariel and most of all Tom! They don't. :] But I love your story, though I'm really confused now. xD
Thanks for a beautiful story. «3
Author's Response: Awuh, thank you :D I had always intended on making an alternative ending to this story, cause I knew the end would upset a lot of readers xD But im glad theres someone who appreciates both<3 And I totally know what you mean about the know-it-better attitudes, they all try to be heroic and save someone else but they all suck at it x] Thank you for the amazing review :'D
Date: 10/20/08 03:36 am Title: Alternative Ending
your welcome >w
Author's Response: ^^
Date: 10/19/08 05:22 pm Title: Endings Must Have Beginnings
Oh well its still an amazing story better than i could right (its um.. TMK ..btw ... I discovered a text increasing thing and i was NO WAI i clicked like 3 times i was WHOOOT READING TIME now when i go to sleep i start narrating things damn it)
I also swear the ending seems familiar like i herd it somewhere before
Author's Response: xDDD awuh, thank you TMK<3 Hmm, I dont know O.O
Date: 10/18/08 04:40 am Title: This is for Bill
T-T That depressed me WHYYYYYY!!!! >.> BILL AND TOM SHOULD HAVE BEEN TOGETHER ANYWAYS D
Author's Response: D; I had to put a sad ending in there, im sorry ;___;