Date: 05/11/08 08:57 pm Title: Untouched Territory
Please let tom have intervened! I can't believe the people in the school are so shallow. Actually yes I can but still... Grrr... Update soon!
Author's Response: My old school was that shallow x.x awfulawful! Will do thankk yo :]]<33
Date: 05/11/08 08:11 pm Title: Untouched Territory
NO!
No no no no no!
You left it at the good part D:
It was good though, but a bit short.
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Author's Response: I know, im sorry :3 I always seem to do cliffhangers haha :]<333
Date: 05/11/08 06:12 pm Title: Untouched Territory
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: Thank youu!!:DD<333
Date: 05/03/08 08:59 pm Title: In Die Nacht pt. 2
i'm new to this site, but i'm in the process of reading your story right now! I really like how you portrayed Tom right after Ariel got hit. Almost like his brain was moving in slow motion. It seems almost more realistic than if he would have ran towards her at once. I'm going to finish reading this story now! Bye!
Author's Response: :DDD welcome! and thank youu! I try to make it as realistic as possible x.x hope you like the rest:]<333
Date: 05/03/08 12:32 am Title: Just For Tonight
Great story. I wish I could say more but I love it all so much, there's not really anything specific I can point out. Just keep going k? I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D<333 I will!
Date: 05/01/08 06:54 pm Title: Just For Tonight
OMG
You had me shouting loudly xDDD idk why... It's just... AAWWWW X33 xDDD
And poor friend of mine who isn't a th fan, but had me the whole time telling her your ff xDDDD Altough she liked it o-o xDDDD
Continue pleasee!!!! x3
Author's Response: omg yayyy :DDDD thank you!!<333
Date: 04/30/08 10:25 pm Title: Just For Tonight
So are the twins? Who was given up? I'm really too tired to tell you anything useful right now other than I like the story, have no idea where it's going and hope you update soon.
Author's Response: haa I have it all planned out, but not much will be revealed till the end :3 but thank youu<33
Date: 04/30/08 09:42 pm Title: Just For Tonight
aw thats cute.
Author's Response: thank youu :D<33
Date: 04/30/08 08:00 pm Title: Just For Tonight
love it I hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: Will do! thank you :DDD<333
Date: 04/30/08 07:55 pm Title: Just For Tonight
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SIDE STORY
ALSO CAN'T YOU DON'T HAVE THE NET ANYMORE!?!?!
did your rents get rid of it too gawd when wil lthey realize there are online authors and online readers thus getting rid of the internet DOESNT JUST AFFECT YOUU
my mom got rid of the net two weeks ago and i jsut got it back thankkk jeebuss q_q
KEEP UP ZEE GUUD STUFF
Author's Response: hah yea, Im getting it back next week though :D so ill update soon now
Date: 04/30/08 07:26 pm Title: Just For Tonight
YOu need to update..
this story is cute and sad..-sniffle-
♥
Author's Response: aww thank youuu! :D<333
Date: 04/30/08 07:13 pm Title: Just For Tonight
Loved it!! =)
Author's Response: thank you!!:DD<333
Date: 04/28/08 10:30 pm Title: The Monsters of Reality
ANTICIPATION ANTICIPATIONNNN
pdfjgdklgdjf
dbj dklbfdDONT MAKE HER DIEEE!!!!...
please =]
Author's Response: hofdghffds :D<333
Date: 04/20/08 10:24 pm Title: The Monsters of Reality
Love it! Can't wait of the next chapter =)
Author's Response: :DD thank you!!<33
Date: 04/20/08 09:59 pm Title: Dont Cry
aw that is so sad
Author's Response: Im good at writing sad stuff for some reason U.U; thankssrn:DD<33
Date: 04/20/08 11:40 am Title: Dont Cry
Aww! I love it! Can't wait for more =)
Author's Response: :DD thank you!!<33
Date: 04/19/08 05:16 pm Title: Dont Cry
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! please update!!! dying to know the rest
Author's Response: Thank you!! I will :D<33
Date: 04/19/08 02:27 pm Title: Dont Cry
Is there more?!?!?!?!??!!!!!!!
I loved this chapter, the way Tom acted the way Bill did the way Ariel got injured it all fitted perfectly, and kinda made sense in a way, I love it and hope you write more soon!
Author's Response: Yup, theres more. and thank you!! :D<33
Date: 04/17/08 11:19 pm Title: Dont Cry
I love the last part!! It was beautiful ^^
Author's Response: Thank youu!! :DD<333
Date: 04/17/08 10:22 pm Title: Dont Cry
This was such a sad yet sweet chapter. I'm so sad about Ariel but the way Bill handles it w/ Tom is perfect. The ending was beautiful. I hope Tom can be happy again.
Author's Response: Yay! Im glad you think so. :]<33 Bill always manages to cheer people up! :D