Date: 04/06/13 12:50 pm Title: Epilogue
Awww no sexy time :( angst! But this was good :) it really was a cute story, thanks for the great reading experience :)
Author's Response: well the sex was implied. imagine it being as dirty as you like. lol
Date: 04/06/13 12:46 pm Title: Epilogue
I love this!!!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 04/06/13 12:34 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow! I can't believe that this story is over! Like always, a beautiful great story ^^ Thank u so much for bring us this, you're awesome ^^ See you in the next one!
Author's Response: thanks so much for the compliments!
Date: 04/06/13 12:09 pm Title: Epilogue
:) another great story!
Author's Response: thanks!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 04/06/13 11:39 am Title: Epilogue
Loved this. You always write such wonderful endings.
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 04/06/13 05:01 am Title: Chapter 13
Hi my dear.
- Bill is so cute, arguing with his friends when it's only to damper his stress.... But it's trully love if he's ready to be up like this just to show support to Tom, I think Gus and Andi see it too, that's why they agree to watch it too...
- And Tom being nicely surprised at it too, sees how much Bill loves him!
- Bill is getting cuter and cuter when the competition is getting rougher for his boyfreind. And I must say his friends deserve a medal too to put up with him... and a slap on the head to not see how much the competition means for him.... So proud and hopeful for his boyfriend, cute is really the word of this story!
- A silver medal!!!! What a achievement!!! Ok it's not the gold, but I personnally don't like gold and I always find the silver medals nicer in the Olympics!!
The reference of Tom's Dad is a nice touch too. He's the one who slowly push Tom in this and it's such a shame he's not here to see his son.... He would be so proud of Tom...
- They miss the other so much.... Could they be cuter?? I don't think so but I love it so much. They will have their first Valentine Day together now that Tom is back from Russia with a silver medal and his boyfriend in his arms, where Bill belongs...
Just one chapter, isn't it???? will you find a way to let them stay together? At least after Bill gets his degree?
Since Tom won't give up snowboarding, and Bill can work anywhere as long as he has a computer....
I totally see them travelling together around the world, Tom doing what he does best (beside loving and making love to Bill of course), and Bill working and supporting his boyfriend, like the fan he's always been!
Let's see later how you end this wonderful story!!!! (It will be over, I'm always sad when a good story ends.... but hopefully you will soon give us a great new one!!
Love, Kiki
Author's Response: *pets review* your reviews are like little stories themselves. love them! and thank you! epilogue will be up shortly. rnoh. and i'm more of a silver fan, as well.
Date: 04/06/13 12:16 am Title: Chapter 13
aweee! that was just too adorable! they are so cute together! :) can't wait to read the next chapter :]
Author's Response: thanks very much! epilogue will be up momentarily!
Date: 04/05/13 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
SpyChiick was speaking Russian. I think she said she's able to speak Russian, in case you need/want to know.
Maybe because your Olympics took place there, hehe :)
Oh gosh, this chapter went by kind of fast but I'm willing to bet it's because I shot through reading it, lol! Happy for Tom for winning a silver medal, and happy whenever they're able to be together :3
The end bit makes me think that maybe Bill was agitated before Tom showed up, seeing that Gus was checking on him.
Author's Response: no, not agitated. gustav being concerned was more "why are they still out in the hallway?" than "gee, i hope bill's okay." thanks for reading!
Date: 04/05/13 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
(First of all, sorry for my bad english ! :p)
That's the third story of you I read in the past 2 days, and I love your writings. I'm going to review the 2 stories I already read I promise ! x) I just have to point out that it seems you like long distance's relationships. And stories where Tom travels a lot and where his poor father died :p (in "For the right place" and "21 hours"). There are some similarities in your fictions :) So that's it, i'm going back to my reading ! Thanks for your stories ;)
Date: 04/04/13 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 04/04/13 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awh hooray for Tom winning a silver medal in the Olympics! And such a sweet reunion of the boys! :D
Author's Response: and actually, that sweet reunion wasn't originally in the chapter. added it on maybe a week ago.
Date: 04/04/13 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
Barabababa, I'm lovin' it! Seriously, it's great. I've seen it a couple times and haven't been too sure about it, but I'm at work and bored and decided to read it and it's SO GOOD. I've been smiling like an idiot while reading and I think the customers think there's something wrong with me. Don't care though.. And come on, Tom on a snowboard, who doesn't love that? Definately adding it to my favorites :D
Author's Response: awesome review! here's to strange little smiles that make people wonder!
Date: 04/04/13 10:50 am Title: Chapter 13
I wish Tom really could be in the Olympics. That'd be kinda cool...
Author's Response: it would! and i can totally picture him on a snowboard too!
Date: 04/04/13 05:43 am Title: Chapter 13
Aw... I'm happy Tom won smth. Man I'd actually want to watch snowboarding now on TV ;P Those two are so cute. I love the story sweetie!
Author's Response: thanks so much! i watched the last winter olympics with shaun white and it was really cool.
Date: 04/04/13 01:33 am Title: Chapter 13
OMG, i don't even care that this chapter was shorter, I'm just very happy that you updated!! I get overly excited when you do and I love when Bill and Tom are together. Thank you for the update tonight :)
Author's Response: i get excited about updating too. sad, isn't it? lol
Date: 04/04/13 12:34 am Title: Chapter 13
that was super :) Bill is really good boyfriend if he stayed that long at night to watch Tom. hell, they are better than not one couple hehe
Author's Response: he certainly is devoted!
Date: 04/04/13 12:14 am Title: Chapter 13
ilove it ;) this is so cute ;) ill be sad if i dont have to look this story up every wednesday and saturday :-(
Author's Response: you can always go back and reread it on wednesdays and saturdays!
Date: 04/03/13 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
just loved this chapter it was funny just how bill is awake at 3 in the mornig just to see tom loved it keep up the good work
Author's Response: it's tom. he just had to stay awake! lol
Date: 04/03/13 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
I really love this story and where you are taking it, I just wished you would write it even longer than 14 chapters!
Author's Response: sorry, just 14 chapters. but thanks for reading!