Date: 03/28/13 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
I read it yesterday from my cousin’s cell buy I’m here to make my review. Aaaawww that was sooo sweet. I can’t deny that I love sweet things (ex coffee jeje) and this chapter was the sweetest thing that I’ve read in two days jeje (Yeah I read a lot) I love you for finishing this fight in such a lovely way. Now I’ll be sighing till Saturday. Kisses and thank you for writing this fic
Author's Response: thank you for reading! and i do like to mix a little sweetness in with all the serious.
Date: 03/28/13 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hi.
despite the time difference, you posted this wonderful chapter the 27.... So it's my birthday present!!!!!!!!!
I can't tell you how much I was relieved when I read it. I know they won't break up - depsite Bill's fear, he's trully a drama queen- but I thought it would be harder for them to understand and explain.
Not that I mind the way it went.
They freaked out about not being able to reach the other, each on their side and technology is so mean to them.
But thanks to Gustav and Andi, the secret meeting is a full success!!! Gustav knows Bill very well and can always support him and lead him in the right direction in spite of Bill's fears.... He's right, Tom is not the assholes he dated, he's so much better!!!!
I hated reporters and their stupid questions!!!!!
But I'm really fond of Tom's timing!!! I laughed so hard when he didn't believe he said that in THAT moment. His mini freak out was so constrating with the moments before and what he said.....He's so cute.
This is my favorite moment, and not only for the three words- which once more are coming soon but it's trully them! The fear of losing the other made their feelings burst in a good way.
This chapter was perfect, the reconciliation, the déclaration, the sex!!! And that cute promise.
Well, they still be apart soon but only for a few days and then..... All summer together!! That lets them three months to think about a way to be together, despite Tom's schedule and Bill's school.
LOVED it, like always!!
Kiki
Author's Response: HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!! you liked all the parts i liked writing. great minds think alike huh? thanks for reading!
Date: 03/28/13 09:44 am Title: Chapter 11
Yay everything is ok! Great chapter!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 03/28/13 08:19 am Title: Chapter 11
I could use a day off from work right now... :P But thankfully your neew chapter made this whole slavery a bit better :D The I love you was super sweet!
Author's Response: i am so glad you said that! i wasn't sure about the whole "i love you" right after sex, but i just had this overwhelming urge to write it that way, and personally i adore it. so glad you do too!
Date: 03/28/13 04:01 am Title: Chapter 11
Poor Tom and Bill for almost breaking up because of technology...
I am so in love with this story! Update really soon! :)
Author's Response: technology really does suck sometimes doesn't it?
Date: 03/28/13 01:22 am Title: Chapter 11
but i think when they are about to fall a sleep its ridicilus cute to tell each other i love you - i got a little bit sexy time *-* yeay :D keep it coming..
Author's Response: they actually weren't anywhere near sleep at that point, but glad you liked it anyway!
Date: 03/28/13 01:20 am Title: Chapter 11
"Bill's neck arched and he gasped softly as Tom sank back into him. Tom leaned his head down for a tender kiss, soft little licks into each other's mouths, tongues eager to find each other again. Bill sighed into Tom's mouth as he moved, rocking in and out of his body with an agonizing lack of urgency. They whispered each other's names as they moved together. Tom laced their fingers together above Bill's head, and he felt Bill's nails dig in as he came with a soft cry. He squeezed Bill's hip, surging into him and throbbing with his own release. Bill kept his right leg hooked around the back of Tom's left, holding Tom inside him as long as possible. He stroked Tom's cheek with a soft hand, happily accepting another kiss as they lay connected in his bed. Their eyes met, gazing at each other deeply". I can only say-beautiful, one of the best paragraphs i've read on the site!
Author's Response: okay, so i grin like an idiot whenever someone quotes me back to me in a review. so thanks!
Date: 03/28/13 12:22 am Title: Chapter 11
yeeeeeeeeey :) they are together again :)
good that Bill went for some sense and tried to call Tom and listen everything once again, plus wrote to him but from the other side maybe it's good that it didn't work cos Tom went to his school and did some non-romantic scene hehehe i can imagine how people at school will talk about what happened hahha
Gustav and Andi are really good friends if they decided to help them :)
and of course i don't mind Tom's timing hehe that was kinda sweet and funny :)
can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: glad it meets with your approval! and i loved the idea of tom showing up and making a grand gesture to apologize. thanks for reading!
Date: 03/27/13 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ok so what's wrong with telling someone you love them...at ANY time and ANY place? I love to hear those words!!!
Author's Response: well it's right after sex. tom was still IN him. didn't want it to sound like it was just cuz of the sex, you know? but glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 03/27/13 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/27/13 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm really enjoying your story so far. What a unique and interesting idea!
Keep it up.
Date: 03/27/13 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love this story! :))))
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/27/13 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
hahahaha that last sentence XD I love it lol I'm glad they made up and I'm curious what summertime will mean~
Author's Response: thanks! cuz i wasn't too sure about that last line.
Date: 03/27/13 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awww
Author's Response: i know right???
Date: 03/27/13 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yay they r happy again! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 03/27/13 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
What a romantic, sweet chapter!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 03/27/13 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awh yay, it's all good! They love each other and Gustav and Andi are such good friends for helping Tom get Bill back! :D
Author's Response: it was very mission: impossible wasn't it? all the texts flying back and forth?
Date: 03/27/13 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
this story is my drug right now. everyday i look to see if you've updated. i love it!
Author's Response: don't drive yourself crazy! wednesdays and saturdays.
Date: 03/27/13 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
I luv this story..... Like soooo much.... The chapters have to be longer and closer together... The wait in between kills me... :'(
Author's Response: noooo! don't die!
Date: 03/27/13 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awwieee! I knew tvey would make up since they looooooooove each other! Though the sex scene was waaay too short for my liking, but i hope that there will be other sex scene coming that is long, hot and sweaty XD but really good chapter!!
Author's Response: things do get a little...touchy feely in a later chapter.